I Became Jin Guangyao's Biological Sister After Traveling Through the Book?

Big boost for the author, update soon, it really shouldn't be too good. All the regrets are gone in this book. Jin Zixuan is not dead, nor is the senior sister. Yunmeng Shuangjie is still there, A Xian is not dead, Wang Ji did not wait 16 years to be with A Xian. , Jin Guangyao is no longer alone. Ayan is with him, and his warmth has not been crushed. Everyone is fine. The eldest lady here must be the happiest child [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [sending heartfelt messages] [sending heartfelt messages]

Oh dear, you have finally made up for the uneasy feeling in my heart. I must work hard. I have decided. This is the first book I am chasing. Please don't stop updating [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] Two chapters, I finished reading it accidentally, [crying][crying][crying]

Anyone who likes to watch the Patriarchs of Demonic Ways can come and watch it. 1. The character design has no OOC and the original CP has not been removed. 2. The protagonist Meng Yan/Jin Yan, the cp should be Nie Huaisang (the official co-star). Among the people who have some relationship with the protagonist, this pair is the most obvious. [You can also knock other people, you can see for yourself] 3. It has the author's own personal settings to complete the story content. 4. Generally speaking, there are no big problems, and the personalities of all the characters are 'completed' (This depends on each reader's different understanding. Anyway, after reading this book, you will feel that everyone is a 'good person'. There is no one you particularly like or hate. Life is not all good.) 5. As things changed from the beginning, the content was more or less far removed from the original content. However, many general events that would have happened without the advancement of the original protagonist were still retained. Five-star support, the author is great, come on⊙∀⊙! I am looking forward to the ending of this book. The description of the world of cultivating immortals is also very careful, so that we, a group of CP readers, have a great time [learned]

I really like it. There are so few novels about Chen Qingling. Don't give up.

Please keep up the good work, it's so good, I'm really looking forward to the next plot.

The author is here to give you a little suggestion. I think I can write a side story, where everyone can watch the movie. After all, they don't know what Ayan has done, and they don't know the pain he has done. Of course, this is just a small suggestion, and the author will give it some thought.

It looks good, let me tell you why. 1. It is "The Patriarch of the Demonic Way", not "Chen Qing Ling". As a fan of the original work, I am very satisfied [sending my heart]. 2. The story line is handled very well, and some plot designs that are not found in the author's original work are added, but they are all complete. Although Jiang Fengmian and Yu Ziyuan of the Jiang family were already dead when the heroine arrived, and there was no time to save them, Jin Ling's parents are still alive, and the warmth lineage is not dead. Jiang Cheng and Jiang Cheng also solved each other's knots. The heroine and her brother Meng Yao (Jin Guangyao) also successfully broke away from the Lanling Jin family (established their own family)... It's great. 3. The emotional lines are also great. Meng Yao (Jin Guangyao) and Lan Xichen are together, and Wei Wuxian and Lan Wangji have been together for a long time. They did not wait for 13 years. As for the heroine, I have not seen the exact CP yet, but it should be Nie Huaisang (probably, not sure). The emotional lines of each pair of CP are handled very delicately, and then very step by step. Speaking of which, this is the only time I have ever posted such a long book review. [Shy] I saw the latest update, and two more points were added. The author has added a new (female) original character as Jiang Cheng's CP The heroine's CP must be Nie Huaisang!

How can I put it, this novel written by the author touched me deeply. From some things, it can be seen that Meng Yan must have a good family environment in reality, with good girlfriends and good friends... Just like most of us, she is simple and kind, does not think comprehensively, has no defensiveness towards others, is soft-tempered, and has a bit of a bad taste. She does her best to help others get rid of their past fate, and she will be satisfied if she successfully saves others. This is very similar to us. We are ordinary people living in reality just like Meng Yan. What she experienced is just like what we are experiencing. Although it is a pity that it is be aesthetics, I feel it is very suitable! I couldn't help but feel sorry for her. At first, Meng Yan hoped that she could go home. After all, she was not without a father and mother, and she also cared about her. It's a pity that when she came to this world, she was already a player in the game. The ending is relatively happy! The author writes very well! [Laughing]Just telling my feelings! Don't bully me (´△｀)

@ It's really good to read. I haven't seen such a good-looking book in a long time. Recently, there is a shortage of books. Ayan is really serious about her career. Thank you, praise, praise, praise! ! !

It's so beautiful, but the ending is really a bit regrettable. Meng Yan is such a good girl. I feel that the last few years were so painful. I didn't live a good life for a few years... It's not that Nie Huaisang is not good, in fact he should be the one who suffers the most. In the original novel, he can direct a drama for revenge after losing a loved one, but he can't do anything about losing Ayan. There is nowhere to vent her grief, because the person Meng Yan doesn't forgive is herself. Nie Huaisang was in mental torture all the time, and the seeds of his unhappiness had already been deeply buried... He missed Meng Yan but was afraid of her, wanted to find her but still cared about her, didn't want to break off the contact with her, but he would think of her again when he saw his daughter, and he wouldn't forgive her when he thought of her death... He was about to get married and saw her shattered to pieces with his own eyes, which was nothing more than despair. If there is no good thing in the past, the loss will not be so painful. It doesn't mean that you can be strong just by saying you are strong. The best ending is just to live and die together or forget each other in the world. When it comes to living and dying together, only Meng Yan is freed; when it comes to forgetting each other, only Meng Yan has a good ending. From this point of view, Meng Yanda has achieved happiness in a different sense, just like the "we" the author said at the end is Meng Yan's extra story.

This book is one of the few fanfics I like. It's really well written.

Very beautiful, really. The heroine is not a person with big golden fingers, nor is she a person with high IQ and EQ. In fact, she is just like an ordinary girl like us, the same cp, the same unwillingness to accept all difficulties, and she will work hard to change everyone's outcome. , She does not deliberately make friends with everyone, nor does she deliberately try to gain favor with others. She is sincere to everyone and gets along like a friend. She works hard to find a way to change the outcome of all of them. Maybe she is not so perfect after bumping into each other, but she will not ignore it. Even if she had to pay the price herself, she never seemed to care. She was really a very kind girl. In the end, she changed everyone's ending. Everyone was happy, but she couldn't give herself happiness. I really felt sorry for her. I felt uncomfortable and distressed until the end. In the front, there was always a sweet smile that made people feel happy and satisfied, but in the back, it really made people cry. Knife, but it cannot be said that the heroine made the wrong choice. When she returns to reality, she still has her family and friends. Even if Jin Yao and Huaisang will be in great pain, there is nothing they can do. This is a helpless and sad ending. This book is really well written. I am also a fan of Chen Qingling. The heroine did what we all wanted to do and gave everyone a happy future. It is really great! The heroine herself is heart-wrenching, I highly recommend everyone to watch it! This is the most satisfying fanfic I have read. I read it in one sitting. I hope the author will start a new book! Come on!

In fact, everyone said that this book was very sad in the later period, but in my heart, no matter how sad it is, I can't beat the original work. This book fills in all the difficulties in the original work as much as possible. It doesn't have as many regrets as the original work. I really can accept it. Nothing is smooth sailing in life, only be is the norm, but be is the one who can best understand true feelings, isn't it?

The author is the most agreeable fan I have seen so far. Come on! [Please update]

It's not bad. I recommend watching it so you won't be bored.

The author's writing and character writing are very good, there is no OOC, the plot is quite reasonable. The only thing is that I personally prefer the heroine to be beautiful alone. The reasons are: 1. I don't know if any couple is very friendly when the heroine is not with other people. After they are together, they feel less comfortable and then they don't want to watch the plot of the heroine's cp [face covering] Of course, this may be my problem. 2. The heroine's task is to make up for the regrets. That's why I came to watch it in the first place. After Jin Yan and Nie Huaisang got together, I felt that their roles gradually increased and the tasks became less. I personally felt that it started to look like the hero and heroine of a romance novel falling in love [face covering] I don't know what the author will write next. This is just my feeling after reading the latest chapter. I hope the author can see it~

This book resolves a lot of difficult things, but it still leaves regrets in the end, but it also gives people the feeling that it should have ended like this. The heroine is just an ordinary person, and it is really admirable that she can do this [currently in preparation]

Woo woo [cry] [cry] [cry], the final stage is so cruel! Author, you have no heart! ! ! ! ! How desperate the heroine must have been when she remembered everything and jumped down resolutely, just like Xiao Feng who committed suicide on the battlefield. Wuwuwu [crying] [crying] [crying] Zhen Zhen still lost her mother in the end, just like Jin Ling in the original work.

I read it in one sitting. I really didn't expect that the cheerful writing style in the first part would be followed by so many big swords. I cried to death. And I originally thought that the heroine would be with Jiang Cheng, because Jiang Cheng is my favorite character besides Wei Wuxian, but it turned out that the heroine and Nie were together, and they were so abusive later [crying] [crying]

It was really good to watch, and it relieved a lot of regrets. A-Yan was really good, I cried until past one o'clock in the morning, which greatly relieved the frustration of the devil, and at the same time left a dilemma for the protagonist. [Cry][cry][cry][cry]

It's very interesting, the plot has not been changed much, and it satisfies all my imagination of the Patriarch of the Demonic Path. The cps are all together, but I have been waiting for Yanyan's extra story, but unfortunately there is no one. There's a bit of a knife in the back, but that's a good ending

Very good article! Although the ending of the heroine returning home is very reasonable, I don't like this ending very much [crying]. She came into this world to save all tragedies. But she also left the only regret in the whole article. Maybe I have never had a baby, and I don't understand why I would give up a born baby for the sake of an embryo that has not yet formed in a few months. For this child, no matter how happy she is later, there was a period of her childhood that was dark. There is a saying that "a motherless child is like a grass"! Although she has a father, she is living in Jinling's previous life! Hey~!

The heroine's mind is online, the golden finger is not outstanding, there are good friendship, love and family lines, the cp of the original work has not been removed and the regrets in the book have been resolved. The heroine is also very clear-headed and rational in dealing with feelings. The ending is also expected and there is no hard match. Although there are some regrets, this is the best ending from the perspective of the heroine. The writing is very good and it is worth reading. Let me express my love again [blowing kiss]

It feels like watching the sequel to Mo Xiang Da Li. It makes up for the difficulty and regret in my book. The characters in the article also fit the original work very well, adding details to many ambiguous places, and the ending is also predictable. So wonderful! The power to move people's hearts. I will keep this article forever! Come on Gugu! ! ! !

This book deserves five stars for its writing. It is the best book I have seen on Tomato that completes the ending of The Patriarch of the Demonic Way. It really made up for all the regrets I had seen in The Patriarch of the Demonic Way. Although the ending was not a good one in the end, I also support the author. Finally, let me say something about the author. In my opinion, the author's writing style is very good. Well, he not only made up for all my regrets, but also incorporated some of his own things, such as Jiang Zhuzhu, and so on. Although the final ending is a very bad ending in my opinion, he seems to have really integrated everyone's emotional delicateness into it. Anyway, the final summary is very good, and I give it five stars.

Really, it's hard to say, everyone has their own life, it's very vivid, but I burst into tears, and novels generally can't hurt me [shy] but the book is very good, I like it very much, recommend it very much, it's very sweet, you must read it

Ahhhh, I think it's not bad. Although the male protagonist has flaws, no one is perfect. But be. Sure enough, no matter what time I accepted it, it was to no avail. I cried to death (but I think the heroine should be like this, she wants to go home. But her daughter is so pitiful)

It was very touching, a little tearful, a little sad, and a little happy to make up for the regret. Ayan considered everyone, but did not consider her own retreat. Everyone was good for her and weaved a happy scam for her, but she didn't expect that this was not what she wanted. The final result could only accelerate her crazy hatred and death, and the final ending could only be a sad ending. [Cry][cry][cry]

You must stick to this book until the end! ! ! ! It's really good to watch. It's really rare to see a fanfic about magic on Tomato. Come on! Come on! Come on!

When I read a fanfic for the first time, I was always worried that I would encounter a situation where the CP would be removed, but that was not the case in this one. This one was acceptable to me and completely exceeded my expectations. After reading it, I really don't know how to express my inner feelings. The book is good, the writing is good, the plot is good, the characters are good, everything is good. I always feel that Ayan shouldn't have gone through so many hardships. She shouldn't have ended up like this, but it should have been like this. I really cried during the extra episode, it was so powerful, she was nowhere to be seen but she was everywhere. Thank you very much for filling my regrets about the original work.