Coming Out of the Red Mansion

As a fan of Dai, as long as Daiyu is good, those who cut Baoyu will be five stars [cool]

Finally, there is a new formula for writing about the prince's rebellion in Red Mansion. It does not just focus on the rebellion and the emperor's regret after being executed. So far, it is quite enjoyable. The length is not long enough. I have no obsession with whether the heroine is single or a couple. Just make sure that the framework does not change beyond recognition. I will work hard to update and look forward to the ending.

My biggest wish is that it doesn't end badly and the plot doesn't collapse. Come on!

It is indeed exciting, although some people may not like the protagonist's transformation from literature to martial arts, and the force value is too high. But novels are inherently fictional, and tasks are conceived to promote the development of the storyline. This novel may have the disadvantages of developing too fast and opening a technology tree, but the main storyline is also dramatized in film and television. The background explanation of the world of Red Mansions is very clear, and some background inferences and character creations that are recognized by the general public in the study of "Red Studies" are selected (such as Qin Keqing's identity, and the hidden scheming of Jia She (Jia Enhou, the adviser to the deceased prince of the previous generation) in the book. Such character creation is a negative setting that I think is a very good adaptation compared to other bad streets). Moreover, the overall plot development is detailed and appropriate. The final climax of the set-up battle and the foreshadowing of the previous chapters are like a decades-long struggle between the Supreme Emperor and the hidden gangster. In my opinion, it is a short and concise masterpiece. Of course, there may be settings that other readers may not like, but the flaws cannot be concealed. Reading it in one go, it's very coherent. Recommend! ! !

Not bad, let me give you a five-star encouragement first. Author, are you a fool? It's best to be a sheep, so you don't have to go out and update at home every day. Author, OllieGive!

Isn't the protagonist shouldering two wives? Isn't there two heroines? If possible, can you marry Baochai? I really like this character. He lives a real life.

I particularly like Lin Daiyu, so I will read anything with Lin Daiyu in the title, but unfortunately she is not the heroine. Some people say that Lin Daiyu is Cao Gong's preference, and of course it is also my preference, because she is the only person in this book who can survive the filth. She has a clean mind, a straightforward personality, talent and extraordinary appearance. She is also the ancient person who is closest to modern people's thoughts. Some people say that she likes to have a bad temper, but that is only for people she cares about. She is still very nice and generous to people who don't care.

Now I think it is a rare good book, I hope I won't write too much about it.

So far, overall feeling is okay. It's a bit toxic, but it's still acceptable. The plot in the book has come to this day, so let's do more yard drama! His current achievements and status are enough for him. It's time to take a break! Hurry up and give birth to a monkey! [Sinister smile]

The fight between the two emperors was innovative and the storyline was captivating. However, having a single female protagonist in The Red Mansion didn't feel in line with the current social situation at that time. What's more, Wan Yan shared the same sorrow and shouldn't have appeared to save her!

It's okay, but can you please stop for a while? Qin Hu and Qin Bao are obviously Lin Hu and Lin Bao.

The author writes very well, and he writes with his heart. As a reader, there are many things that can be savored, and there are firm, patriotic and positive things. They are impartial and have good weight. I hope to continue writing!

Oops, it's good, but it's still a little bit short. It's not enough to watch. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

First, the reason for the good evaluation is that the author has a good perspective, which is a bit like a novel in the late Ming Dynasty superimposed on "A Dream of Red Mansions". Second, reviews are sometimes bad because the author often forgets what the protagonist already has or which character will have something? Third, the main reason why everyone comes to watch is because they want to see "Dream of Red Mansions", but the author has relatively little description of "Dream of Red Mansions". Although the ending is very happy, there is too little description.

Personal opinions are for reference only. This fanfic is pretty good. The protagonist has a journey and a little bit of growth. Then the story is more rounded and lacks some settings, such as police fantasy and others. Overall, the writing is good.

To be honest, I work at the Juyongguan Great Wall, and when I saw the chapter about the bloody battle at Juyongguan, I felt so warm! The author should have made reference to Yu Qian's defense of Beijing and Luotong's defense of Juyongguan. The writing is quite good.

Looks good, looks good, come on, come on, come on! [Like][Like][Like]

The ending is a bit anxious

I haven't read Chapters 173-189. The first reason is that I personally don't like so many descriptions of war scenes. The second reason is also the perception of the whole book. It is set in the Red Mansion but there is too little content in Ning Rong's Second Mansion. But maybe this book is just based on the Red Mansion as the background.

Another way to write about the Red Mansion is that it is a Red Mansion but not entirely a Red Mansion. Wrote the author's own Red Mansion. A somewhat confusing dream came true. Personally I think it's well written. But based on my personal hobbies, I can still save the whole world [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] It's exposed, it's exposed, it's exposed I listened to more than a hundred chapters and read the rest, so it only took two hours.

It's worth watching, there is a little love, but more of a feeling of family and country. The writing is very smooth.

It's not bad. There's something to sit on. It's worth a look.

It's good to watch 👀. I don't know how to rate it after telling the story, but I think it's pretty good. The main line of the story is that a man avenges his father, is loyal to the emperor, patriotic, brave and resourceful, has both civil and military skills, and knows how to retreat bravely to leave a good impression on others. It ends perfectly.

A refreshing ending, quite good. Some of the characters in the middle have a bit of a flamboyant personality. They were very talented and learned when they passed the imperial examination in ancient times. The characters of Confucian generals are less developed, and they look a bit like reckless men. But the overall story is quite unique and very good. In the middle, the level of explaining the two houses of Rongning and Ning and dismantling the past is very good.

The ideas are clear, the descriptions are concise, the language is relatively accurate, and the narrative can be clearly expressed. It is more reasonable to fill in the unclear points in the original work of Dream of Red Mansions. Although it is a new work based on Dream of Red Mansions, it still looks pleasing to the eye.

This book is not meant to be read, but listened to. Absolutely amazing! Five-star praise

Well written, it's the kind of Red Mansion novel you want to see

I'm a bookworm. This book is really good.

This book is wonderfully written and eye-catching

It's still quite complete, but the angle of Jia's family is missing. It was originally a story about palace fighting, but turned into a story about the rise of a good prime minister. The notes are sufficient. The ending is a bit rushed. There's nothing else to comment on. Thank you to the author.