I Was Targeted by the Authorities at the Beginning, and I Showed Myself to Others

The author writes well, 😊 but it's too little, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's very interesting, and it suits my taste. I'm glad that I went to bookstore to find such a book with great potential. It can be said that what I like directly is that the chapters are a bit short. I hope the author will keep it up and the book will get better and better [Love] [Love] [Love] [Like]

There is a book like this in Tomato, which is full of fast-food articles. It is quite good. Every time I read a book, I always look for one that does not have a female protagonist. That is just because most people write emotional dramas like children playing house. However, this book is very delicate and makes me look forward to the emergence of various types of girls in the author's works.

Although I have only read a dozen chapters so far, it is refreshing and makes me want to read more. Even old bookworms understand what I mean [cool]. Overall, the writing is excellent! Top notch plot! The logic is reasonable! It's my favorite type, and I originally wanted to pick it up, but I'm afraid this book will die, so I'll keep reading. Come on, the author! ! ! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

I read the latest one in one go. The writing is very good and delicate. In some places, I really feel like crying. Although I am a non-CP person, Cheng and Yi are really touching. I originally wanted to give up when I saw the emotional line in the vest, but with the mentality of giving it another try, the more I read the story, the more I was amazed. The characters written by the author are very different from many novels I have read, as if they really have souls.

To be honest, the rating of this novel should not be so low, at least 9 points or above. The author portrays the characters very naturally and the plot is also very good. It did not make me feel the sense of fragmentation and abruptness in similar novels. I can only say yyds

It's great, especially the first character. I like it very much. I also hope the author will work harder. The number of words is too small. I'm stupid. I give you five stars [blowing kiss]

The style is very different from many books on this site, which is eye-catching. But I was a little uncomfortable at first, but after reading it patiently, I found that it felt like playing a game, especially the ending moment of "Black Fist", which felt amazing. The following "Elephant Game" made me cry a lot. I have just watched the beginning of "Vampire" and I can't wait to follow it. It is a rare and good book. I give it five stars to support it. I hope the author will not be impatient and still maintain this quality of writing. Come on! It's a pity that the later plot is written in the third person and loses the sense of immersion as before. I can understand the author's desire to try multiple writing styles. However, as there is no fixed readership, I suggest that it is better to continue writing in the style that happened to be liked and accepted by readers. Wait for the next new book or wait until there is no improvement before trying again, otherwise the gain will not be worth the loss. If I just try it out of necessity and don't want to make this my main career, then just pretend I didn't say that.

It's really super good-looking. I was short of books and had no books to read. I usually read books with a rating of 9 or above. I really love this book. It's super good-looking. The author's writing style is really amazing. I also like the plot. Please hurry up and type! Not enough

I have to say, the writing is really great👍🏻 The plot is fascinating. Some people may think that the love part of the second copy is not suitable, but isn't this kind of be more attractive, connected with animal protection? I hope that the later copies won't be too sci-fi or borrow content from movies and comics [face covering], otherwise it will be too cinematic. I haven't seen this kind of literary talent and description in a long time. It's just a pity that it's a little short. I really want to save more and read it later.

The second story, some description fragments, and the scenes presented feel like a movie, and it has a lot of feeling. Some people think that the heroine of this story is forced and don't like it, but I think it is like a natural choice that follows the plot and emotions. Although it is not very rational, people are not absolutely rational creatures. I am a person who refuses to be, but the final be scene made me feel like I was swallowing a knife [I was about to cry], but I had to sigh that the author's final description was very touching, and the aesthetics of be were also good.

It's a very interesting story. Although there is a knife at the end of the story, the knife is not long and can be endured. I hope that in the later period, all the game characters can be resurrected (similar to dolls), so that a behind-the-scenes force will really rise, and then directly start the missionary mode, reshape the world view, and become a figure similar to the creation god. In short, I still hope that the protagonist can be behind the scenes. After all, there are really few good behind-the-scenes articles nowadays (not that I want to be a behind-the-scenes article, but I hope). Finally, I hope the author will continue to write it, and don't be an unfinished eunuch~

The characters are well drawn and the plot is novel. The second game has slight flaws but nothing major. (After all, compared to the characters in the first game, the characters in the second game are obviously more vivid) The following is just my personal opinion: In the second game, the protagonist chooses to let Cheng Haijun accept Elaine's confession. I personally think there is no big problem. (After all, as a real person, everyone will occasionally have a brain twitch and do things with a mentality of not caring about anything. What's more, the protagonist seems to be a CP party, how could he not work hard to promote a CP?)

The author's writing is really great and beautiful, and I really like Elena in the second world. The female characters are quite charming. Compared with the big-breasted and brainless female characters in many cool novels, I don't know how much better. Besides, I also like the interaction between the female characters in the first two worlds. They are normal and delicate. It is not like ordinary cool novels where the male protagonist suddenly becomes obscene and obscene when he sees a woman, which is really out of place and disgusting. The author is great and I hope to update it soon! ! !

Very pretty. It is recommended that students who are watching it for the first time should turn off Duan Ping first. It depends on your own perception. Then when you want to read it a second time later, you can open the commentary again. Although everyone thinks the elephant part is not good-looking, I think that part is very good-looking. It feels like the story closest to the quality of a movie. It felt like I was watching an American commercial film.

Nice!!!!!! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Really pretty! ! ! ! Come on, come on, write quickly

The author writes very well! Come on! The supporting female characters created are all very good (quietly: Wu Qi is my wife!!!)

When I first read the introduction, I thought of QD's Small World. After reading it, I found that it was just a genre. This book controlled the key characters very well. When I saw the elephant, the author who described Africa in it must have watched a lot of documentaries. It's quite true. Although the female characters in the elephant chapter have heroic protagonists. Justice, but the writing is good. What impressed me the most is that the hero in it is not you in front of the screen (shortened). It reminds me of the game I played. The person in it who people admire and look up to is the director. It is the director who saves them, and the one who lives with them every day, not me behind the screen. It breaks my heart and uninstalled~ Stop reading Fattening now and continue reading. I hope the author will work hard and update the writing to make it more brilliant. I will give you a reward when the time comes.

The description is very good. I haven't read many articles of the same type, so I'm not sure whether this book is above or below the level of novels in the same genre. Regardless of whether it's above the level of novels or below, it's indisputable. It's very interesting. It's possible that not many people have read the new book, so cheers for the author! Also, does this book have no CP, has a single heroine, or multiple heroines? Ask How should I put it, the game Vampire makes me feel a little bored just watching it. And the writing is a bit messy. I didn't look carefully. Just looking forward to the next one

It's rare to see a book that suits my taste so well. Good luck to the author. I don't want it to end such a beautiful book. I hope to write more. The author must do a good job and update it. That little content is simply not enough to read [rolls eyes]

I have been following this book for a long time. It is a very rare behind-the-scenes extraordinary article, which is very suitable for my taste. The previous story of Black Fist and Elephant is a foreshadowing. The character plot and setting are okay, but not too outstanding. What makes me think this book is very good is its first wave of climax. The first wave of climax of the book is after the story of the vampires, the protagonist spreads out in the game. The extraordinary bloodline appeared in reality, but the protagonist himself was still hidden behind the scenes. This plot strengthened my determination to pursue this book. Although the book was discontinued when I saw this, I never took it away from my bookshelf and kept it. Unexpectedly, it really made me wait until the day the author came back. Highly recommend!

I hope the author can stick with it and finish it. The type of this book is really attractive. The narrative is great, and the emotional description is much better than that of a bunch of losers. It's just that the development of the male protagonist in reality is a bit slow. Not to mention that the male protagonist with a 1% attribute bonus is still an ordinary person in the mid-term.

The author's writing is very good, and I feel it is better than the first novel of this kind, "It's a Small World". This should be a kind of behind-the-scenes novel. I still like behind-the-scenes novels. I personally find vampires and witchcraft very attractive. Finally, I am looking forward to how the protagonist will behave in the face of changes in reality in the later period. I don't know if I just treat all this as a game, or if I have greater ambitions, such as upgrading the world or something else😊 Looking forward to the author's follow-up. (I won't tell you that I wrote so much because the author updated the book after 9 minutes) Come on, author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

A very good behind-the-scenes novel! The first and second ones were good, but the third one was not so good. Why did it stop updating? I thought I had found another good novel. Alas, I was really convinced!

The writing is very good, and the plot is well handled and compact. It's just that the word count is a bit short at the moment, so it looks like I'll have to save it for a while before reading it again. However, there is currently a problem. The time flow rate in the game and reality is the same, but the protagonist has to go to class and play games again. It is already noon by the time get out of class is over, so it is easy for the protagonist to have problems in the subsequent processing between the game and reality. The author will try to see if he can add an ability to the protagonist and stagger the time of the two. I have read several novels of this type before, and they all made the game part happen part of the time. Games can load superpowers into reality, and the operation time should also be able to do so [laughing]

It's good to read. Both stories are exciting. I hope it can depict a grand world so that Wu Qi and Cheng Haijun can come back to life and give Qina some more benefits. The author, please give it a try and update it quickly. Don't leave it unfinished. I feel like I can write millions of words [please update]

The second game is really good. The emotional scenes are well described. Although it is not as exciting as the first one. The world view is too bland, and in the end, I was killed by poachers... But I still feel that it is good. It has a cinematic feel.

It's really good to read. The main character is not a virgin and there is no feeling of being forced. It's the feeling of pretending to be thirteen silently behind the scenes. I really like reading this kind of writing. Thank you to the author for saving the book shortage [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's good to read. I've also read "It's a Small World" and from my personal point of view, I like this one better! This book does not have the yin female characters or harem stallions in the small world. The process of mapping reality in the game is also done well. There are no surprises so far. [Sending my heart] Good luck to the author.

This is the first book to review. It's beautiful (♥∀♥). It's amazing. The author's writing style is exquisite and the characters are nuanced. I really like it. The setting and plot are all very good. I just feel like it's not enough to read, so I urge you to update it! ! ! (Big cheers✊) Super good-looking, super good-looking, super good-looking. Say the important things three times!