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Not bad, good work (ง•̀_•́)ง, there will be more soon

Not bad, author, please give me your address! To keep you updated! In order to avoid being unable to find anyone, I would like to send some souvenirs by the way. Hehehe [smile][smile][smile]

The protagonist is not afraid of losing his handheld device

I feel that what the author has written has become solidified, and it is just the same in how it is written. Therefore, the author needs to make changes, so the author sent me all the manuscripts to let me see what needs to be changed. [Sinister smile]

My fate is determined by my will [crying] [covering face] [almost crying]

My rating is - excellent work by a novice author @caramel mint pudding [laughing][like] There is room for improvement in writing style The plot is too straightforward Character creation is not perfect enough But overall it's still good, come on! [Blowing kiss]

Author, you should know what I want to say Author! Ask you something! Is caramel peppermint pudding delicious?

I just want to say that I used to read a Pokémon novel, but I didn't remember it until it was finished more than a year ago. So, can the author hurry up [laughing] [laughing]

I read it all the way to the end and it was great. It was very well written. It is rare to see such high-quality books, but they are a bit rare.

I have read 30 chapters of this novel. If the author is new, it would be very good. The design of the gold finger is also very novel, but I have always had a doubt. The protagonist keeps pushing the plot, and with the hobby of grinding flashes, I can finish the level in a few months at most (I never grind in games) I don't know about Flash. I only play for dozens of minutes every day and can finish it in a month at most [laughs]) Doesn't this make me invincible? Isn't this more in line with the character of the protagonist Lao Liu [laughs] This book will be put on the bookshelf for now. Come and take a look when you get bored. Cheers to the author, five stars for encouragement [sending heartfelt thanks]

It's super nice. So far, it's a very nice book.

I remember that in the special chapter, Itaki wrote "The Mystery of the Earth" based on his own experience. Should this book be regarded as the world's top ground textbook? The author can learn about the relevant settings [Thoughts]

Where can I buy the emerald quasi-god? There is an iron dumbbell in the stone-blocked cave tunnel. There is a single-headed dragon in the cave tunnel that is blocked by the stone. There is a single-headed dragon in the cave tunnel. There is a torch bug in the flame shortcut. There is a kadi dog outside. There is a round land shark in the desert where you can't get in for the time being. The mini dragon and baby dragon are in the cave in the upper left corner of the map that requires climbing the waterfall. I forgot about Bangira. It is full of childhood memories. I started playing Pokemon in elementary school. I'm 28 this year, and the one I play the most is Emerald. I've played all the revisions.

I can't say this book is bad. I can only say that the update speed is really slow. Why is it only 8.0? It took me so long to read it until it was updated to chapter 91. The author is proficient in Kavin technology. How can I persevere? Keep it up, brothers. Ten years from now, he promises to finish it. When he can update three times a day, he will be fully worthy of 9.0.

Xiaoyao will become the protagonist's girlfriend in the later stages of Emerald's plot. Will Xiaoyao appear in reality? [What] [What] [What] [smile] [smile] [smile]

Oli, this is the best Pokémon fanfic I have ever seen so far. I am waiting for the author to update it. Unfortunately, I am a student and can only use love to generate electricity [I am about to cry]

Come on, we can start a book club

I hope this author's work becomes popular.

The main thing is that Wang Ziran wants to embarrass me. The male protagonist obviously realizes that something is wrong. Doesn't he, a person born in a wealthy family, know that there is something wrong? Maybe he's just naturally dumb, but the male protagonist interrupted his conversation twice and didn't notice anything was wrong [awkward laugh]

I give you five stars, do you understand what I mean? [Making faces][making faces][laughing] Okay, it's very interesting and I finished it in one sitting. So... Update soon

I hope the author can be more serious about it. It's really beautiful. Come on, come on.

It's very interesting. I hope that the author can write some scenes where the male protagonist's Mega Evolution outfits can be written later, or the male protagonist can subdue mythical beasts on a handheld device as a trump card. Although the male protagonist has a handheld device and can become stronger at any time, which is a good setting, the actual strength of the male protagonist is still a bit low. Any king-level person can crush the male protagonist, so he must have a strong enough trump card to have enough confidence.

Come on, work hard to update! This subject is very new. But I like it. Hey hey hey! 😏😏😏

The subject matter is what I like, and it doesn't matter what the elves are. I really like Pokemon, a game that accompanied me in my childhood. Of course, I also like the reality-based setting of a handheld game.

The subject matter is very attractive and the rhythm is well controlled. I hope the author will get better and better both in his works and in his life (≧▽≦)

It's very nice. I'm playing the Emerald version right now and I'm just reading the guide. It's this abandoned ship. Why can't I find Dark Lugia? I beg the author for a guide, and I'll send you a five-star review.

Come on, author, I support you. Also, don't make the protagonist look too bitchy. We prefer reading cool articles, you know? Cool article. Also, I have been working on updates. It has been how many days and not a single update has been made. 😂

It's hard to comment, I can only say that after seeing it, it's pretty good.

Update from the author. It's such a beautiful book. Don't worry about the trolls. They might be trolls from other authors who saw your writing and asked for help [please update]

The plot is really attractive, and the author is very careful in planning the different factors between the game console and reality in the plot.