The Compatibility of Heroic Spirits Is Zero, so I Have No Choice but to Make a Contract with Myself

The writing is okay, but the passion is lacking, and the plot is a bit watery. In addition, the lack of updates makes this book a poor one. If it is streamlined, it can be a god.

While the plot is enjoyable enough, there is basically no problem with the logic, and the author has something of his own, which is enough.

It's so beautiful, and it's so mind-numbingly mind-numbing [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

It's very good. I read the latest chapter from the previous chapter. The plot is okay. It's just that at the beginning, the male protagonist was a little indecisive and put himself in danger. Later, the male protagonist became very good. Come on, author [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

Let me evaluate it The Fairy World, 5 stars, very well written and full of edge The World of Martial Arts, 3.5 Stars, average, popular writing Reality, 0.5 Stars, very good, you can understand it after watching it I have finished writing the Fairy World. I hope the author can continue to work hard to write the next good world and focus on the beautiful little world.

It suits my taste. The author's writing is smooth and not too poisonous. The story is engaging and worth reading.

I think it's okay, but I don't know what the bad points mentioned in the comment section are. If you want to read a completely cool article, you can just read it, and no one will stop you. Why do you have to give a low score when you just see something that makes you feel uncomfortable? No one calls it a cool article.

Please write the new plot well and don't poison me! After reading this chapter, I can vaguely feel how poisonous the plot is going to be. I must write it better! Thank you, the author! ! ! @ @ The most important thing is not to give away your daughter! !

It's well written. It's really the best among the new books I've found recently. The plot is compact and not procrastinating. It's the kind of inner monologue that it's best not to write, because it will separate a plot. It's like the dialogue with Master Tianxung Dao. The tense dialogue plus the funny inner monologue is very strange. When you reach the top of the roller coaster, you will find that there is a gentle slope behind it. . . . [Cover face][cover face] The subsequent plot became draggy and entered a cycle. Forget it, I quit.

I consider this book to be superior to other similar books. It does not have too much nonsense, the plot is coherent, and the protagonist is not playful, at least not brainless. The invincibility is moderately written. It does not follow the same routines and organization as other books. You can easily guess what is written next. However, this book has a rich plot and a twist of plot, which can arouse the readers' emotions. What is commendable about this book is that it breaks the traditional limitations of invincibility. Even a small step is refreshing. My subjective assumptions are inevitably wrong, and there are also shortcomings.

As far as the author's writing style is concerned, it's quite good, and the plot is also very good, but the only drawback is that it's a bit messy. Not only is the plot a bit messy, but the connection between simulation and reality is also a bit messy. Keep up the good work, author.

Originally, the rushed ending made me want to give it 4 stars, but after thinking about it, I gave it 5 stars. This book is a rare masterpiece among cool novels, with few poisonous points and a reasonable plot with ups and downs. If it hadn't ended in a hurry, writing another three or four hundred chapters would have made it a god.

Finally waiting for you to update again, I hope there will be more interesting stories!

It's a very creative book, but the plot elements of time and cause are difficult to grasp. I hope the author doesn't get too carried away. The quality is pretty good too. In addition, please ask the author to update more [please update more] [laughing]

The writing is good, the writing style needs to be improved, the overall content is preferred, the idea is good, the only shortcoming is that it is short and weak (currently I think) Come on, author, I will give you five stars when you are not so short and weak [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ]

This book, how should I put it, when I first read it, I thought it was just a mediocre invincible simulation novel, but as I continued to read it, its simulation world is really exciting. The relationship with the real world is not introduced much in the book, but the main thing is that its simulation world has a rich worldview, and its concept really fits my various fantasies about dark literature. It is really a novel worth reading, but there is one thing. It is enough to see the important mechanical content in the real world, and other content is not as good as the content in the simulated world.

It's really good-looking. From Gaowu to seeing the strange fairy, and then to Gaowu to find out the source behind it, and by the way, Jiang Xuan is upgraded to this life. I can only say that the author's writing style is really delicate. I hope to read more during my vacation. There are also plot suggestions about the main world. I recommend describing in detail why the world's heroic spirits come to the main line. Spread out the plot, and then reveal the existence of a higher world plane, similar to the place where human stars gather, etc. Then there will be some crises in reality, which are monsters that are above the level of the local world. Suggestions and ideas are provided without reference. Thank you to the author for allowing me to see such a wonderful story [almost crying] [love]

It's a very good book. Although simulators are no longer a trendy subject, if it can be written well, it will be very good. This is one of the few stories that I can watch straight to the end in one go, without any low points in the middle. As for this book, it was finished very hastily and is not unfinished. He has finished telling all the stories that need to be told. I will spoil the specific content in the last paragraph. The writing style is very good, but the overall outline plan is not done well. It is like a paper that only has 80 points of questions, but out of those 80 points of questions, 78 points are answered correctly. I really hope this is a complete novel, because I just finished reading it, and there are some shortcomings in the simulated story, not to mention the knife. After all, the simulator fills these regrets in simulation after simulation. But at the end of the story, there is a bit of regret. After reading it, I found that after the story ended, I felt a little melancholy. Maybe this story can be brought to a happy ending in a realistic plot. In short, I highly recommend everyone to read it. I also really hope that the author can complete the rest of the story. There are spoilers below The author himself should have planned it, and there should be at least three simulation stories, one of high martial arts, one of deceit, and a dark journey to the west, as well as a realistic plot that will be somewhat related to the simulation story. But the author only wrote two stories. The story of Dark Journey to the West was not told at all. After telling both stories, it was over. As for the real-life plot, it doesn't tell much, and the world view is not explained clearly. I feel that the length is less than 2% of the book.

The book is very good, the plot is also very exciting, and it is very interesting to read. But there is one thing. The protagonist is worried that there will be a sudden star rise after the simulation again. Judging from the situation of the Heroic Spirit Empress, the protagonist's simulation will affect the current world. So looking at it this way, after the protagonist completes the simulation, the history of the current world will also change. And the Heroic Spirit summoned by the protagonist is originally simulated, and history has changed. So in the historical record, The heroic spirit protagonist will also change accordingly. The heroic spirit summoned by the protagonist is also recorded in history, and historical records have recorded the heroic spirit protagonist's deeds. Therefore, in people's perception and records, the heroic spirit protagonist should be of that rank, and the individual heroic spirit summoned by the protagonist still exists in the records, so the theory of sudden star rise is somewhat contradictory. This is a small problem in my opinion. It would be better if it could be rounded out later, but it doesn't hurt, and it still looks good overall.

So far, I think it's pretty good. The plot is not procrastinating and is closely linked.

I would like to express my personal opinion. The characters in the sub-world plot are very well written, whether it is Jiang Xuan or Lian Liangmo, but they failed to grasp the shaping of the main world and sub-world combat power. The main world's combat power level collapsed, and the characters jumped too quickly, causing the combat power to collapse, so I can only end it hastily. If the author can grasp the main world's combat power in a new book, he should be able to write a masterpiece. In my heart, this work is a five-star medium.

The simulator type is quite nice. Even in simulation after simulation, women close to him were involved in the real world, and the protagonist said that he would not let him down and would be responsible... Well, I still don't know who the heroine is...? Or whether there is a female protagonist. There is also the truth about the death of the protagonist's parents, which can be pushed through the simulator to become stronger. Well, other than that, the world view of the simulated world is so complete that it can be read as a novel alone. Very nice.

This is a world-destruction novel. The protagonist travels back to the past from the future. He works hard to change for the sake of strength, and finally changes the past, obliterates his own timeline, and successfully destroys the world and himself.

No eunuchs, no eunuchs, no eunuchs. Say important things three times. Come on! Very well written! !

The writing is excellent, and the up and down links are smooth. Compared with works of the same type, it has found its own path. The plot is also very interesting, but I hope it doesn't follow the same routine. It seems to be a very good work now. The only drawback is that there are few

First of all, I read very quickly, so I was a little confused. To put it simply, Question: There is no Dark Westward Journey world (I am sure there is no such thing), and there may be holes that have not been filled in (for example, what happened to the research institute, what happened to the world, I am a little confused about these, I hope book friends can explain [face covering]) Advantages: It is very good-looking, and has the feeling of "Da Dao Ji". I found that the quality of this tomato article is getting higher and higher. The writing is good, there are no obvious logical errors, it is non-toxic, it is light, it has a good grasp of people's hearts and the current situation, and it has a good sense of history.

To be honest, this book is probably my favorite book I have ever read. Because I usually watch fantasy, and fantasy has some exciting plots. So there are relatively few opinions. Either they are supernatural and speak less. This is really a lot of talk. The opinions raised were varied. Some are stupid, and some have no idea what they are talking about. Of course, there are better places. After reading the reviews of this store, I had an idea in my mind. Why don't you start a circle to discuss the protagonist's options and write a new book yourself. I think what you are talking about is really troublesome. If someone says they made the wrong choice, then you should choose the right one to help them develop, okay? What's the point of establishing a character who loves parents, and what's the point of exchanging failure for success? I really don't understand this comment. If you are interested, you can explain it. Progress is indeed being made.

Very good, I recommend everyone to take a look. First of all, there are a lot of foreshadowings and holes dug in it, but the author is filling them in. The plot is reasonable and smooth! It can be said that there is passion, strategizing, various human attitudes, and knives. Although it is not a single heroine, the author's description of the characters and plots is still good. For example, the old man who saved the protagonist in the beginning remains the same after several reincarnations! This is well portrayed. There are a lot of foreshadowings in the follow-up. I guess there may be all heavens and all realms. After all, there are even Western gods and unknown beings from other planes. The author has a lot of imagination, and there may be some surprises later on, but I don't know if the author will be unfinished, or how many more words the author wants. Generally speaking, novels written about all the worlds have more than 1,000 chapters, except for some. Does the author understand what I mean? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] Let's work together to elevate the author to sudden death! ! ! Secondly, the novel is very good, I recommend everyone to read it. If you don't like it, don't spray it. Hey-hey! [Make a face][make a face][make a face]

The writing is pretty good. Although the protagonist's development speed during simulation is not as fast as those who cheat and practice soaringly, the awesome people may be the protagonist's future wives, so it's still acceptable. The author is very conscientious and the updates are fierce.

The characters are very delicately drawn, and the plot is also full of ups and downs. It would be better if there were some reasonable setbacks (except for the protagonist in reality, who is too sinister and may be sent), and more realistic. Of course, the author would greatly appreciate it if there were more than 100 million points every day... Me and other lovely book friends will be very happy~♪