White Snake: Xu Xian Is a Little Too Strong

It's awesome. I came from the book world. It's great. Please update it soon!

It's very interesting, but there are not enough people 🤦 🤦 I have seen this book several times, but was dissuaded by the title. But I am really short of books, so I opened it and read it. I found it very interesting [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]. I think if the author didn't write the legend of White Snake and changed the names of the characters in it, I feel that many people would read it 🤔 🤔 🤔. Of course this is just my suggestion. I hope the author will continue to work hard and not finish the work [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's very beautiful, I give it five stars, I hope there will be more [Admiration] [Learned] For the sake of the author, I didn't even take the exam. I read it in one go 😂. I hope there will be more updates. [I learned] It's good, update it quickly, check the duration, and keep reading the duration. Although the author's writing is very nice, the act of throwing knives is very bad [scroll] [scroll] [scroll] I must be the one who has read it the longest, right?

It's really well written, and it's really a new version of the White Snake legend. Come to cp. Fa Hai and Xiao Qing, Da Bai and Lu Yao, Xu Xian and Bai Suzhen.

There's nothing to say, it just looks good

Bird Food looks good but there are too many battles. I think it could have more of a life between husband and wife and less fighting. Author, you have to know that fighting and killing is not a good idea. There should be more of what we like to see. [Sneaky laugh] I came in to eat dog food, how can I bear this anger?

Gaga is good, but I suggest the author write less battle scenes. After all, everyone comes here to eat sweet dog food. You can write more about the daily lives of the male and female protagonists, and occasionally send out sweets and stuff. The author can look at the problem from another angle and see how the readers position the book. Most of the people who promote this book in the book desert square are single female protagonists, spreading dog food and the like. Of course, there can be descriptions of combat. After all, no matter how delicious the dog food is, there will be times when you get tired of it. But the main course, if possible, is best to be the casual daily life of the male and female protagonists. When I first read this book, I felt it was refreshing and gave me a very bright feeling. The drama between the male and female protagonists was so addictive that I couldn't stop. However, in the middle, I felt that the plot was a bit rough, and the love between the supporting characters was a bit forced. It felt a bit too hasty, especially when Dabai and the son of luck went to the cave to forcibly sublimate their relationship. Moreover, because a large number of characters were added too quickly and too much was written about the supporting characters, there were very few stories between Xu Xian and Bai Niangzi that everyone wanted to see. Moreover, everyone must have a feeling of regret for classic IPs such as Xu Xian and Bai Niangzi. Why couldn't lovers finally get married? Want to make up for this regret, isn't this what many fanfics do? For example, Demon Slayer's Rice Pillar, and the performance and reputation of this book are also quite good. Now that I have seen the latest chapter, the author has added a new character. I can only say that I am too impatient to eat hot tofu. I understand that the author wants to have a good meal and achieve results, but at this time, it is more important to be steady! Instead of constantly adding new characters, why not create the original old characters well? How long have Xu Xian and White Snake appeared together before they disappeared in a plane ride? Xu Xian was either fighting before, or the lady was sitting in the village talking to Aunt Cat. Finally, when the two got together, they disappeared again. The author can also see that the number one in the world must have run away very quickly. His description of the relationship between the male and female protagonists, as well as the description of the supporting characters, are very good. I may be a little irritable in what I say later, but I really hope this book will be good. To sum up, I want to eat Xu Xian and Bai Niangzi's dog food!! Finally, come on! Handsome boy

Author, don't you think such a good work is updated so little? Okay?

The writing is really good, the plot is vivid, and the characters are well-drawn. I just hope there will be a good ending between humans and monsters (✪▽✪). Keep up the good work, author😄!!!

It's a very good novel, but why are there so few people reading it?