Demon King's Crown

A nice fan book, there is no messy heroine, she concentrates on doing things, I love it to death, the heroine is amazing, I keep up with the updates every day, come on, be firm, the heroine says her belief is unshakable [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Blow kiss]

The writing is very good. Although it is a fan work, you can read it even if you have not read the original work. The author has written a lot of background settings. In addition, the system, props and equipment settings are also more detailed than ordinary fan fiction, and it can be seen that a lot of effort has been put into this aspect. Recommended reading!

Good luck, 👴🏻The return of spring reminds me of the hard days when I ate at a buffet in Tokyo and couldn't finish my first meal.

The author's writing is okay, but it lacks the excitement that makes people read bit by bit. It feels like there are too many explanations of irrelevant things and it is not concise enough. Secondly, the writing is not very detailed, but I believe that the writing will get better and better.

Although the traffic is relatively small, the author writes the book very seriously and has his own pursuits. I really like this book, the story structure is very smooth and natural, and the characters are vivid. [Learned][Sending Hearts][Blowing Kisses]

I loved this book and read it straight away! Even though the update is too slow, I hope the author won't be discouraged because there are so few people. The plot is so well written that it will definitely achieve good results! Come on

The setting and everything are pretty good, but there is no sense of immersion. We see the protagonist and the world from a third perspective, rather than seeing the world from the perspective of the protagonist. There are too many descriptions of the environment and the character's heart. I don't know how you can improve it, author. Anyway, give it a try.

A very good book. I haven't seen such a good ghoul fan in a long time [crying] [crying]

Maybe it's because of the new author. There are a lot of bugs in the front part, but the comment area is quite harmonious, with not many trolls, and there are many book friends who give suggestions (not the kind of people who point fingers and give orders purely based on personal preferences, but give more pertinent opinions). The author also has a good attitude, patiently explains and replies, and is very active. This atmosphere is really good and nice. Personally, I don't have much patience when reading novels, and I often delete books, but I will keep this one on my bookshelf. The author is great, keep up the good work! [Like][Like]

It looks great. Although the comments section mentioned the character design problem in the early stage of the article (to be honest, I also read it myself and there was indeed a character design problem), but the author listened to the advice and quickly changed it. There is basically no problem later. The second world is Iron Armor City. Many people said it didn't look good, so I just skipped it. From the looks of it, the first world is a ghoul, the third world is cursed, and the fourth one is Zhan Chitong. Except for a slight problem with the character design of the first ghoul in the early stage, there are no major problems. As a result, there are too few authors who write this kind of world-traveling type of novels. I have to cherish each one of them and only saw two of them on Tomato! Others are all fan-derived and comprehensive works of a single anime, and the comprehensive works are very tiring, and it feels like rushing to catch up with the plot. This kind of thing is much better (´-ω-`) Anyway, it's still very promising. You can write more about it. With the quick travel upgrade in all the worlds, why can't you play with the second dimension (¯へ¯)

I have only watched the first world, and I have not finished it. The plot looks good, there are no bad points, but the plot is a bit draggy. Some simple introductions can be mentioned in one sentence, and there is no need to explain so much. The writing is not new, I hope the author will continue to work hard! ! !

No CP! I like [admiration] [admiration] Tokyo ghoul is so rare! Ok ok I can't understand the second world ~ skip skip The third curse return, cough cough, think about daddy ~ think about wtw again, teach the ancestors hey hey hey To be determined later~ The author will seriously consider how to make a full-time hunter, and the Lord of Mysteries~Horror Pet Shop~ They are all my love [Adoration]

In fact, this author's writing is really good. There are indeed flaws, but the shining points are also obvious. You don't have to watch the Iron Fortress part, but you can't deny the excellence of the entire work just because of one part. It is recommended that the author use ellipses to separate scene transitions in the future to facilitate reading.

It's too hard. The first world actually has 130 chapters. Generally, unlimited streaming will not exceed 80 chapters. It's too long-winded. I suggest you skip it if you haven't read it. After all, it won't have much impact.

It's okay. I've read the first world of this book in its entirety. The ghoul world is really well written, but the timeline is overdeveloped and it's not invincible. In the second world, Kabane, etc., The main line is survival, but there are no high-intensity threats in the world, so I skipped it after reading a few chapters. You can write this kind of welfare book, but it is too early. It is more appropriate to write it in the fourth/fifth world. The protagonist has no big breakthrough in his own strength and starts to expand other resources to assist himself. I haven't watched Third World, I'll comment later.

I watched it on Tomato Listening and the rating wasn't high at first. I thought it wasn't good-looking and I saw some scolding comments about the cover. But after reading it carefully, it's still good. I hope the author can keep up the good work and keep up the good work [Like] [Like] [Like]

The writing is very good and smooth. Of course, it would be better if those narrations that make up the drama are deleted, haha It is best for the author to go to an anime world that is biased toward magic and technology testing, and not to go to anime like Naruto, One Piece, Dragon Ball, Bleach, etc., Where the combat power is ruined. Otherwise, the power system will not match the style of the painting and the combat power will be ruined.

Personally, I feel that this book is actually quite good, but I guess the subject matter is relatively niche, so fewer people have read it, and not many people have followed it, so the score is relatively low. But there is another very crucial point. I also think this may be the reason why no one reads it. Nowadays, when reading fan fiction, I basically read it for fun. The author's subject matter is actually very good, but the protagonist feels that he is 50-50 different from everyone else. And based on the setting, this is a comprehensive comic. You have been writing about a ghoul world for so long, and the protagonist does not have a strong feeling that he is still an ordinary human being. He is easily irritable when watching it. I don't know if others are the same. Anyway, I have a feeling of withdrawal from time to time. If I count it based on the quality of the writing, it may not be the current 6 points, but it is estimated to be about 7 or 8 points, but the writing is really too uncomfortable. In fact, if you are not a bookworm, you may have quit after reading half of the previous part, or even less than half of it. Those who can persist may be those who like the ghoul anime, but this part is really not much. In the end, I hope the author can write better and better. I really like this subject.

The writing is good, but the writing is too detailed, which makes it a bit watery to read. [Cover face] But it's so hard to find a book that I can read now [crying]. I originally wanted to give it four stars, but after thinking about it, I decided to give it five stars.

The content of the first and second volumes gave me a feeling like when I watched Samsara Paradise, but it was not the same. After all, the system is different and the number of paths is different. It is quite attractive for readers who like anime and fanfiction. I also hope that the author can withdraw from some native worlds in the future. (After all, it's quite tiring to make up the episode (т ꒦ິヮ꒦ິ))

Not bad, let's wait and see for a while to review It's a bit boring, there's not much foreshadowing for the main plot

It looks better👀, and the fighting scenes are exciting😎.

Very beautiful! Why doesn't the author update it? By the way, is the author an amateur or does he want to make money? Support! [Sending Hearts]

Okay, you can watch it if you haven't watched Ghoul. The author will write it clearly. Five-star support.

The author said that he made a lot of progress later on, and I like all the worlds. Although the first world has more than 100 chapters, I jumped a little bit, but in the later years, the basic bad points have been changed. It's okay to have poor writing skills, but a good attitude is a good author.

Although I criticize the author every day in Duanjing But I hope not to be a eunuch I personally think this book is the most popular one among Tomatoes that has the flavor of Samsara Paradise.

The writing is good and the plot is also good. But I'm a protagonist person, so when I saw the description of the male protagonist chatting with the girl, I felt a little uncomfortable. To put it simply, the protagonist is handsome and strong (these are my personal thoughts, no malice intended)

Okay, okay, this book is quite good, and it's really top-notch when it comes to ghoul writing [Like]

The early stages were a bit bland but the later plot made up for it. The author has a great imagination and has a unique understanding of the battles of extraordinary beings. It is not limited by the framework of the mainstream combat system, and fully demonstrates the feeling of being able to be used in this way. In terms of plot, the protagonist will not have much overlap with the original plot. It mainly focuses on the game with the apostles and the apostles. In a few cases, it will portray the emotions of some characters. If you want to watch the interaction between the protagonist and plot characters and other plots, I suggest you go ahead. But if you want to read a novel about a multiverse-level background expansion (such as Samsara Paradise), this novel has the same potential. Judging from the more than 900 chapters I have read so far, we have just reached the most exciting part of the novel. The background has just been unfolded, and a diverse world full of unknowns and possibilities is being described.

Come on, I've been a bookworm for more than ten years. The author is definitely a potential stock in the infinite stream. The character description, storyline, and combat system have his own thinking and logic. It's rare and rare. It's not a bad flat stream. I hope I can stick to it in the future. It doesn't matter if the pace is slower. It's worth reading carefully.