Hp天光大亮

Maybe the writing style is a bit childish, but this one is really well written. Most HP fanfics tend to favor Draco, who has to have a good relationship with the trio. I like this setting of hating the trio. I am not dissing Harry. I have only read the physical books of the first two Harry Potter series, as well as the film and television versions of Harry Potter. Compared with the novel, Ron in the movie is really annoying, and many times the contradictions appear in this little boy. The trio can also toss, Dumbledore is indeed the greatest wizard, but it is undeniable that his heart is biased towards Gryffindor, and not just because Harry, the savior, is in the Lions Court. As a principal, even if you can't treat everyone equally, you shouldn't stand entirely on Gryffindor's side. Although the novel is also biased, it is not so partial or shielding. I like the Snake House, the Badger House, and Malfoy, but I also admit the bad sides of the Snake House (I really don't think there are any shortcomings in Hufflepuff. If the students are like the Badger House, there may be no contradictions such as house discrimination), and even Draco is really annoying sometimes. But I think the Draco in the film and television series is more attractive than the one in the novel. They are also characters in the movie adapted from the novel. I don't understand why Harry, Hermione, and Malfoy all had positive adjustments, but Ron was the only one who made such changes? There are some positive details about Ron in the movie that are given to Harry, but Harry's annoying behavior is given to Ron.

I like this book very much. The heroine is very suitable to my taste. [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] There are some books where the heroine who is sorted into Slytherin is written like a Gryffindor. I really don't understand the heroine in those books. She is obviously in Slytherin but is reckless, but the heroine in this book is more like a Slytherin. I really like this book. It's hard to find a book that suits my taste like this.

The beginning is well written, but the emotional line is a bit too fast. It feels like a law that the male and female protagonists must fall in love when they meet. The foreshadowing at the beginning is very good, but unfortunately the reasons behind it are a bit sloppy, and the decisive battle with the big boss is also sloppy... But it's pretty good among HP fanfics.

It's really great. The protagonists are not very strong themselves. They all become stronger step by step on their own. It's much better than those mindless and cool novels. It's really super good to watch [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

The author's writing is very good, but there are some problems with some plot points. For example, Regulus's suicide note was in a fake locket. Since Harry Potter didn't get the fake locket, where did he get the suicide note? Also, Dumbledore's hand was injured by the curse on the ring because he could not resist the temptation and wore the Resurrection Stone. However, it was written before that Voldemort had already taken back the ring, so how could Dumbledore be injured? Of course, it cannot be ruled out that the author deliberately set up the foreshadowing. Anyway, please give it a try! !

It's so beautiful~ I've been following it all night, but I don't know why the score is so low. Maybe changing the name and introduction can attract more people. Anyway, I love watching it~ [Sending heartfelt wishes]

Love it so much! Slytherin love: Only the person you love most and your safety are in your eyes. There are a lot of magic changes, but the plot is going very smoothly. Meslis is a private design, so it doesn't feel like it affects the plot too much. It can be regarded as a minor sub-plot for the time being. I think the most difficult thing in the entire HP series is Si Jiao, who loves but can't love her, and will never do it until death. The sentence "always" makes people cry. Fortunately, he was saved in the end!

Super pretty! ! ! It's just a little bit short, please do your best! (*^ω^*)

I really like the heroine's character. She must retaliate, and she has the ability to save people, and she is even more capable of killing. Really Slytherin

Love this book! The heroine is very appetizing! Come on, madam! !

I like this book. The previous interaction between Ania and Draco was so sweet😍. I really like it.

It's okay, the emotional line is not loud and fierce, but smooth and flowing. After the second brush, I can still keep it on the bookshelf. In the end, I really vented my anger by helping the Dean beat Sirius, but Gryffindor still didn't realize his mistake.

My wife wrote very well. ★ * ★.. .*★*.*..*★ ★★★★ '*. *' 𝟝𝟚𝟘💝ˡᵒᵛᵉ ★.★' '*..★, But why is the rating so low? Is someone maliciously trying to score points? ಠ╭╮ಠ It took me so long to see this work

Very good, this novel successfully made me hate Gryffindor, a group of little trolls

Come on, author, I hope the amount of updates will remain stable, and please take a rest! [Blowing kiss]

Is it good-looking? Why do I give such a low score? I think it's not easy to write a fan fiction sincerely because you have to innovate on the basis of the original work. The writing is very good and smooth and has its own cuteness. If you are a Snake Yard and like the highlights of Malfoy, I recommend reading this book. It is no better than those casual novels!

This is a flawless novel. There are many overlapping settings about the heroine's life experience, and I am not very interested in the relevant plot, but the main plot is well written. The most touching part of the book is the confrontation between Professor McGonagall and the teacher in Hogwarts before the war. The heroine and Xiaolong used their wands to protect SS. This time, someone finally stood firmly on SS's side. It was so touching. The same was true of the Screaming Shack, which was the most impressive part of the book.

It's very interesting, I look forward to the following content [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart] The chase is over! This sentence is pretty good, but I want to ask the author, Gemini...

For the sake of the professor, I give you five stars. After all, no one can compare to the professor [please taste carefully]

"My lover is very brave, so brave that he wants to carry all the burdens alone." This is my favorite sentence to describe Draco.

It's okay. I wasn't very interested when I first watched it, but the more I watched it, the better it became. The interaction between Telina and Draco was really sweet to me, especially at the Triwizard Tournament ball. The corners of my mouth never dropped.

It's so pretty! [Crying] I didn't expect to finish reading it in one and a half days But, it's really great! [Sending my heart] The plot is very interesting, the characters are well-shaped, and the author's writing style is also good. In short, I can read all of Juejuezi! [Crying]

Overall, it's pretty good. The male and female protagonists have developed a relationship by accompanying each other, but there isn't a lot of writing about the changes and cultivation of relationships, which is a bit of a pity. But the character of the heroine Slytherin is deeply rooted in people's hearts. Unlike other fanfics, it is obvious that the Snake Yard is all mixed up with the trio. It looks relatively new from here. But maybe it's because I haven't read the original work and only briefly watched the movie, so I don't understand much about the heroine's life story.

Yes, Tomato's Hogwarts romance is oriented with a bit of drama, and the author also added a lot of original works.

As a sweet article, it's not bad

Beautiful, very attractive

I finished reading it in one go. I have to say, it was really exciting. Anyway, now I am a member of a larger team.

It's great to see, both Draco Malfoy and St. Petersburg have been redeemed.

It's super cool, thank you to the author

It's so beautiful😆, I also like the heroine's character (ꈍᴗꈍ)