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Although the score of 6.4 Is a bit disappointing, I also know my own shortcomings. I have disappointed fellow Taoists, and I also know that the Tomato routine is popular. , I know the loneliness of ordinary people, and enjoying what is heard is the king. The reason is ultimately the lack of writing power, but I will not be discouraged. I also read the comment area. It is not that I don't reply, but I have been disappointed and failed to live up to the expectations of fellow Taoists. I love you deeply and feel deeply responsible. The point is that the registered disciple period is just a pig's foot. It will end soon, and it has foreshadowing just like the world. , Digging holes must be filled. After all, those who watch mortals cultivating immortality will not be minors and sunny teenagers who will be beaten by society in the future, nor people who only want to see darkness, let alone rich people who do not need to support their families. This book will be concise in the future. Few known cultivators in the world of cultivation will repeat themselves. Pig's feet will not forget the original intention. I wish all Taoist friends who are full of dreams of cultivating immortals to be eighteen years old and have a worry-free life.

It is very comfortable to read, and it is considered a masterpiece. The score is too low. Based on the existing content, the quality is higher than most works with a score of 9 or above. The plot is smooth, without any awkwardness or rigidity, nor is it the kind of routine; the character descriptions are spot-on, and no matter how many words are written, each character can feel the difference. It's just a small volume. I hope the author can concentrate on writing this book and not distract himself. The author writes well according to his own ideas. You can refer to other people's opinions, but don't mess up your own ideas.

It can be seen from the previous article that the author has good writing skills. I hope that the later conception of this book will not deviate from the main line. It is okay to dig holes and foreshadowing, but it should not deviate from the small goal of the protagonist in the book. Give me 5 stars to encourage you

It started well, and gradually it got better. There is love and justice, parents and family. Unlike some works, the family members are killed first at the beginning. Praise! Don't forget your original intention and warm the world. I look forward to it! Come on!

The writing started well

This is a plain but real slow-paced mortal flow, very interesting to read.

I have read the first three chapters, and they are quite good. The plot progress is okay, and I encourage you. But just in case you are not alone, don't bring your family with you to practice immortality.

It's very well written, and it describes how people's hearts are in a very bad state. Please work hard.

A nice book

If you stick to this book, you will be able to become a god! ! !

The story is novel, it is no longer a mindless trap of one secret realm after another in the traditional cultivation of immortals. Although the author's plot advancement is a bit slow with more than 500 chapters, it is still Qi Refining [laughing and crying]. The story is really good. The protagonist is a practitioner of Infernal Affairs, and the story is interlocking with each other. There is no so-called golden finger that can improve the protagonist's cultivation.

This is the next movie about mortals cultivating immortality! ! !

A little less fairy-like and a little more worldly. The book is a good book, but it's a pity that I can no longer calm down and read it slowly

The writing is very good, the character description is not simplistic, and the storyline is interesting [Like][Like]

It's slow and non-stop, eloquently told, and the transitions are natural. It's worth reading [Like]

Plain and simple is the truth

Works that have the potential to become gods

I skipped 10 of the 34 chapters I read. It was very good. It was very detailed. It was too detailed for me. There were only a few things in a town. It took too long to write. I skipped it directly. After reading Chapter 57, I never thought that a mortal without spiritual roots could also use the abilities of an immortal cultivator.

I give it full marks, at least it's okay to read. I've read a few books recently, and the first few chapters can make people vomit.

I have read more than 60 chapters, and the details of this book are particularly well written.

I like this kind of detailed writing

The writing is smooth! IQ online!

Good writing so far

It looks pretty good now

The writing is good and worth reading

Very good, the plot is delicate!

See the truth in the ordinary!

It took more than 100 chapters to reach the first level of Qi training. You are so meticulous.

It has a good plot and is realistic. I hope the follow-up will be less exaggerated.

A very normal cultivation novel, the plot is reasonable and not exaggerated, and the author's writing is good A very realistic novel about cultivating immortals