A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: The Sword Rises from Humble Beginnings

Although the score of 6.4 Is a bit disappointing, I also know my own shortcomings. I have disappointed fellow Taoists, and I also know that the Tomato routine is popular. , I know the loneliness of ordinary people, and enjoying what is heard is the king. The reason is ultimately the lack of writing power, but I will not be discouraged. I also read the comment area. It is not that I don't reply, but I have been disappointed and failed to live up to the expectations of fellow Taoists. I love you deeply and feel deeply responsible. The point is that the registered disciple period is just a pig's foot. It will end soon, and it has foreshadowing just like the world. , Digging holes must be filled. After all, those who watch mortals cultivating immortality will not be minors and sunny teenagers who will be beaten by society in the future, nor people who only want to see darkness, let alone rich people who do not need to support their families. This book will be concise in the future. Few known cultivators in the world of cultivation will repeat themselves. Pig's feet will not forget the original intention. I wish all Taoist friends who are full of dreams of cultivating immortals to be eighteen years old and have a worry-free life.

It is very comfortable to read, and it is considered a masterpiece. The score is too low. Based on the existing content, the quality is higher than most works with a score of 9 or above. The plot is smooth, without any awkwardness or rigidity, nor is it the kind of routine; the character descriptions are spot-on, and no matter how many words are written, each character can feel the difference. It's just a small volume. I hope the author can concentrate on writing this book and not distract himself. The author writes well according to his own ideas. You can refer to other people's opinions, but don't mess up your own ideas.

It can be seen from the previous article that the author has good writing skills. I hope that the later conception of this book will not deviate from the main line. It is okay to dig holes and foreshadowing, but it should not deviate from the small goal of the protagonist in the book. Give me 5 stars to encourage you

It started well, and gradually it got better. There is love and justice, parents and family. Unlike some works, the family members are killed first at the beginning. Praise! Don't forget your original intention and warm the world. I look forward to it! Come on!

The writing started well

This is a plain but real slow-paced mortal flow, very interesting to read.

It's very well written, and it describes how people's hearts are in a very bad state. Please work hard.

I have read the first three chapters, and they are quite good. The plot progress is okay, and I encourage you. But just in case you are not alone, don't bring your family with you to practice immortality.

The story is novel, it is no longer a mindless trap of one secret realm after another in the traditional cultivation of immortals. Although the author's plot advancement is a bit slow with more than 500 chapters, it is still Qi Refining 😂. The story is really good. The protagonist is a practitioner of Infernal Affairs, and the story is interlocking with each other. There is no so-called golden finger that can improve the protagonist's cultivation.

A nice book