Born with God-Tier Talent, This Daoist Suppresses the Ages

Although this book has flaws, some aspects are really well written, so I give it five stars! I have read a lot of novels, but rarely give them five stars, so these five stars are precious👍 1. Highlights of this book: 1. The writing style is humorous, slightly naughty and out of style, and often makes people feel lively, cute, relaxed and interesting; 2. Although he is verbally frivolous, he has never made any substantive mistakes and his writing style is clean👍 3. The writing attitude is serious and rigorous, and the entire plot framework is relatively clear. Especially at the end, all the pitfalls are filled in with great care👍 This makes people feel the author's serious attitude and complete sense of comfort! 👍 4. The description of some scenery, scenes, mentality, etc. Is very good. After the immersive book pursuit, you will have a feeling of going through a life. This feeling is well described and reveals the true vicissitudes of life, especially the final plot of meeting old friends! 2. Disadvantages of this book: 1. It seems that it is a bit semi-literary and vernacular, which is a little difficult to read and not as popular and smooth as modern writing. The author should consider the readers' feelings and should not start from his own habits; 2. Some of the settings of Little Raindrops and Ancient Tree Frogs in the book are a bit strange. They appear directly. I don't know where they come from. Some plots jump out quickly and are slightly difficult to understand. The first few dozen chapters are a bit difficult to read, which is why the flow rate is not ideal; 3. In the book, it violates a taboo by underestimating Buddhism and worshiping Taoism. In fact, it is unnecessary. We just need to write novels well and earn traffic. There is no need to get involved in religious disputes. This sensitive issue should be avoided. The author's next book, "Improving Your Cultivation Through Meditation," is better written than this book and has almost no shortcomings.

It's very exciting, the characters and emotions are well drawn, and the world view is a bit big. I'm afraid I won't be able to hold on until that time. I tend to get a little annoyed when I read it. It's very long, but it's still very exciting.

The author said that he will not read the comment area, so I will comment here. Wudiwen is not truly invincible, and most people may be dissatisfied with this The author may have made a mistake in this move as well. It has attracted those who only like to read Wudi's articles and are not allowed to flinch at all. They comment there wantonly and reveal their ugliness. There is no perfect thing in the world, and there is no absolute invincibility In my opinion, invincible writing is about constantly stimulating the inner feeling of pleasure. In this way, you are dominated by desire, unable to see the real life clearly, and easily defeated when you encounter setbacks. But I think that on the free novel platform, some minor mistakes are nothing. What's more, the protagonist's plot line is just that his behavior is not invincible. But in fact it is very concrete, very conservative, very powerful, and very objective. In the real plot line, it has always been invincible You must be conservative and proactive, otherwise in the cruel world of cultivating immortals, there will be no room for dust. But it may also have something to do with human nature Like the well-known Han Li in the Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, he follows his heart and acts cautiously. The public accepts his character and therefore will not criticize him. But the author's novel is labeled as invincible, but just because he is a little cautious and may feel a little frustrated when reading some parts, he gave it one or two stars. I think it's unreasonable The point is, I can't bear the fact that the author who has so many details in the novel and who has the heart to cultivate immortality and otherworldly things should be hit like this, so I debate one or two Now that I have read the latest chapter, I didn't expect that the setting is really like this. Alas, the author is so pretentious. Oh, no, it's the protagonist who is so pretentious.

It's a well-written novel with a good plot and a few minor flaws. The most important thing about fantasy novels is the description of the world. Also, don't read the reviews when reading novels on Tomato, just read what you think is good.

It is a very nice "short" article about cultivating immortality. The author's writing skills are very good, especially the first few chapters, which are written with great literary talent. The design story is compact and the plot is fascinating, which can capture the readers and make them want to stop. The classic and professional level design of cultivating immortals is full of human touch throughout. It does not deliberately lower the IQ, nor does it deliberately create the so-called atmosphere of cultivating immortals with "merciless killing". The whole book 📚 is easy and interesting to read, very comfortable, it can be described as a classic, worth collecting, worth recommending [Like] [Like] [Please follow] [Please update]

It's a very good book, and it suits my taste. I read it in one go. It's one of the few books that I can read after coming to Tomato. The plug-ins are very powerful, and I also yearn for Master Dao's mentality. Also, although I didn't get one, the author also nailed the little ambiguity between Master Dao and the fairies 😂

The writing style is as steady as ever, the plot is reasonable, and the IQ is online. Reading the author's books is much more comfortable than reading some people's books. At least I didn't see a plot where everyone else is a fool and only the protagonist pretends to be 13 everywhere.

The writing is okay, the level rises too fast, I can do some other outing plots. I need some luck to survive the bad luck, and I need some plot help. The later plots should be slower, the level is raised too fast, and the subsequent cross-level challenges are a little leisurely, you can escape, be ruthless, at least the resources can be used to make up for those who feel bad. Overall, it is okay, like it

The pace of this book is relatively slow in the early stages. Once you are patient, you will start to become invincible. The writing is quite good and there are no bad points. Both this book and the meditation book are good.

I'll give it four stars first. The author is pretty good at writing it, but there are too few chapters, not too many emotional scenes, and I think it's a single female protagonist. Finally, come on, the author (ง •̀_•́)ง come on, let me, bah, everyone can read more novels ƪ(˘⌣˘)ʃelegance. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]