The Magnificent Legacy of Mountain Gods

Good, good, continue

Wonderful and rich in content The sentences are fluent and the paragraphs are clearly structured.

Good, deep, engaging.

Great, flesh and blood

It's so beautiful, so exciting!

Nice! It's just that some places are too suspenseful!

, This one is really good-looking

It's normal for a man to be romantic when he has the ability. Most of them are good. Don't write too much about fighting and killing. It's best to have a big and happy family.

The writing of this book is not bad, but some places are too mysterious. Compared with that small space in the human body, even gods are afraid of not being able to do it, let alone humans. The author should think deeply!

Compact structure and well-connected