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I'm here to comment on the author. The writing is indeed very good, and the invincible coolness is slightly funny, which is very good. I have a few suggestions that the author can refer to (please don't comment on my personal opinions): 1. Now in the NCAA, you can be a little more awesome, but in the NBA, you have to be a little more reasonable and don't be too invincible. Otherwise, the article will be too simple, which will cause visual fatigue for readers. 2. Bring a little life into it, otherwise it will become boring after a long time just having competitions. The protagonist is also a living character, right? It would be better if the female protagonist is Chinese. Some readers will feel more engaged. The female protagonist is a foreigner. Aesthetic reasons will cause the loss of some readers. These two points are just personal opinions. Don't spray. The author can take a look [shy][shy] @ Angry Submarine

I would like to make a small suggestion here. I hope that the author will attach photos every time he writes about the heroines [smile][smile]

Come on, write more about foreign female stars [smile][smile][smile][smile]

A hilarious and cool NBA article!

The author's writing is good and the ideas are clear and concise. It's very good. There could be more foreign girls [laughing evilly]. Come on [currently working on the manuscript]

It's really enjoyable to read, the author writes well [Like]

There are no flaws, the article is fluent, and she is more beautiful than a beautiful woman.

Thank you to the author, this book is very interesting

The most enjoyable basketball novel I have read in so many years, pay attention! ! ! It's really great! ! Never before has a novel given me such a refreshing feeling, the author is awesome! ! ! Whether it is Tomato or other novel websites, whether it is basketball novels or fantasy novels, I have never felt so refreshing. I've watched a lot of Invincibles, but this is the first time I've seen it so cool. Come on, author, it's so fast.

It's not easy for the author to write, so he generally doesn't give negative reviews. From the perspective of a refreshing article, giving it 5 stars is not an exaggeration. It is suitable for readers who don't know much about the NBA, or who are just chasing stars. But for readers who are fans who are pursuing basketball content, this book will be rated as three stars at most. Since it has a professional basketball background, many things are well-documented. You can watch the last Hupu video by searching for it, which is better than making it up on your own.

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Update quickly! This book is worth reading so far, it is not boring, the content is lively and interesting, and I have the desire to read it. Just don't let it break later. As for the two data shortcomings in the book, I won't go into details, because the author also explained that he saw the feedback from readers at the time, but did not change it due to time issues. Please be more rigorous in the future! ! ! These two stars are just because they can't stand the super exaggeration and confusion of the data. In the playoffs against Green Kai, they scored 30 points in the first quarter. Although the second quarter didn't say how many points it was, it was full according to the description, so it was at least 20 points. The third quarter was 33 points, and the fourth quarter was 8 points in 5 minutes. Let's not talk about the second quarter. Just one, three and four were 71 points, but in the end there were only 62 points. What the hell? What other points were taken by you? If you don't change it, you won't be able to change it! ! !

It's hard for you to imagine what will happen if the characters in this book actually appear. We can only see it in the book, but now I feel that we can arrange the loss appropriately, otherwise it will be boring for us to watch [almost crying]

It's a bit short, author [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully]

It's not bad, mainly because there are many jokes and it's quite funny, and there are lots of traffic, and I don't know if it's for a kindergarten. This book is a bit colorful and does not keep data in mind, making it as boring as reading. It is also quite funny. Read it when you are unhappy and save your unhappiness.

The Shuangwen among Shuangwen is simply too good-looking, with rich and varied plots and always interesting to watch. The most important thing is that there are cars driving everywhere in the book [laughing] There is nothing wrong with the five-star rating. The author will work hard to update [Code]

I can only say two words about the author, awesome.

Drive more when you should drive [laughing]

I don't know much about basketball or football, but I've read about ten novels.

What does the author say? It should be mango, the kind that is yellow on the outside and more yellow on the inside, DDDD

Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes

You don't want to be given one star by me because you are short and weak, the author [laughs evilly] Just beat James with 17.17. This bad review is really deserved

Did you mention the protagonist's jersey number at the beginning? I didn't see any brother talk to me.

The front is okay, but the rear is consistently a bit bland. I hope there will be a breakthrough later and I can vomit something after strenuous exercise.

The writing style is very humorous, and the language is the best I have read in a long time. It really brings a lot of comfort to my mind, which is already a little boring when reading novels. Thank you.

After playing in the NBA and playing in the NFL, carry people forward and move forward.

The author, cheers, cheers, cheers

Keep it up, absolutely love your books

[Smiling evilly] I understand everything, cars and cars, all cars and cars

Not bad, talent is in place, everything else is true