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Guan'er is just Baima's Guan'er. He doesn't have to be the human god "Zhang Qiling". He is the favorite author among so many fans besides Little Fish in the Sky, Dog Curly Thorn and Lian Qiancao. There is no character destruction or a protagonist who is unreasonably strong. He can just quietly accompany his little brother.

I really like the fact that the original CP is not broken, and the protagonist is very charming.

Nice! [Adoration]●Pingxie and Black Flower have not been opened. Sisters who are obsessed with CP can feel free to enter. Jutian [Shy]~●The writing is pretty good and the story line is very clear. [Like][Like][Like]

Why can't this rating go up? It's obviously very well written. So far, there are no bad points, and there are no inexplicable interruptions. The author deserves five stars!

Not bad. The author's handling of the tomb and the main characters are very good. 1. The protagonist has very upright views. The protagonist Chu Yue also has her own little plot. The author is also very good. 2. Don't dismantle the CP! The protagonist Chu Yue has no CP (at least not yet) 3. The world of tomb robbers adds some elements of cultivation and metaphysics, but does not interfere with the development of the original plot. Both fans of the original and newbies can accept it. 4. Follow the Iron Triangle of Help series. We haven't reached the rescue part yet. We'll talk about it later after reading it.

I like this book. The protagonist can have a bond with the Iron Triangle, but it does not take away the emotional line that belongs to the Iron Triangle, nor does it have a sense of substitution for the protagonist. The Iron Triangle, Pingxie, and Black Flower have not been dismantled, and the storyline itself has not changed significantly. They are well integrated, like spectators, but they can be pulled in by the Iron Triangle, telling the protagonist that we also care about you, and you should not be independent of our world. Yueyue was so difficult. He met unkind people, but met the right person at the wrong time. What he wanted should have been simple, but it was very difficult. However, in the world of tomb robbers, he was warmly and redeemed by the Iron Triangle and the others, making him understand that many things in the past were simply other people's faults and had nothing to do with him. He also deserves someone to love him! Anyway. I like this fanfic very much, and the protagonist Yueyue is also very heartbreaking, and Tiandao is also very cute, hahahaha, I like it!

Brother Yang and Wu Xie are perfect ~ and the character design seems to be good so far. I hope Wu Xie's growth can be well written in the future. After all, Wu Xie is really easy to OOC.

I don't understand why there are so few people reading such a good book [what] the writing is great [admiration] (Qing Mimi: It's actually much better than some of the stolen writing fics) The general main line has not changed much, but the new characters are perfectly integrated, making Ah Yue like a bystander who will not participate too much, but will actively join the game later. Ah Yue's story is really beautiful, without too detailed descriptions, but the emotions are very well laid out. The most unforgettable thing for me is the adoptive father. He is the only tenderness in Ah Yue's heart. Even if the adoptive father dies, he will take away the memory and try his best to protect Ah Yue, even just a little. I really cried to death😭 Forgive me for my mediocre writing style. I am scolded for not being able to write about Ah Yue's moving parts (=ＴェＴ=)

Big cheers for the author! It's really nice and interesting. Very well written! Dear author, can you also get a CP for Chu Yue? It feels like everyone else has CP. Chu Yue would feel very lonely without CP.

I think the overall look and feel and logic are very good, and the characters are not OOC. Chu Yue's feelings for them are just like children, just like a grandfather looking at his grandchildren. The emotional lines between Ping Xie and Hei Hua are very sweet [shy]

I! Forever! Love watching! Bottle evil! Arts! The writing is really good, really good, really good. I like it. Who knows? [Crying] Yueyue is also very good. Every character is super full and there is no OOC at all.

It was really awesome, funny and heart-wrenching at the same time. It made me love and hate it at the same time, but in the end, Yueyue and Aguan gained their true love and had a forever home. But, my adoptive father, I still feel heartbroken when I think about it. . .

It looks good, but it's just a little bit unreadable. The author would like to give it a try and update it [Blow a kiss] I really like it, I really like it, the relationship between Ping Xie, and Ah Yue's story line, Ah Yue's character, the fat mother's coarseness and softness, the warmth and slapstick way of getting along between them are all vivid, as if they are living in another time and space, it is really beautiful, I still come back to it after such a long time. I have finished chasing it. At that time, the author DaDa had just written a dozen chapters. I kept urging for updates at that time. I still haven't forgotten it after such a long time. I will continue to follow the next one. I also confessed again that the author DaDa has written books that are very suitable for me. All the books written by DaDa are on my bookshelf. I will continue to read books by DaDa. [Blow kiss]

To be honest, I felt a little uncomfortable watching it at first. I felt that it was all Yueyue and Aguan's experience together. What should I do that day? ! But, Huahua's smart head is full of ideas, and he can arrange everyone just right without ruining the character~~~~ Then I read it in one sitting~~~~~

I really like the author Da Da's book. When I saw it was almost finished, I thought the author was going to leave a hole in the end. Unexpectedly, the author Da Da prepared a second book. I look forward to the author Da Da's second book. Come on! Dear author, can you please write a linked book about the four fruits whose final destinations are unknown? Can it be HE? After all, the seven fruits and the nine fruits tortured me to death.

Good-looking, as sweet as the silver dollar next door [smile][smile][smile]

The writing is really good, but Chu Yue feels so lonely. Everyone else has a partner, but he has a family. (I just can't complain about cp, I have hundreds of millions of regrets, haha, personal opinion)

Really good-looking! Super recommended! The author's writing style is good and the characters are well described. I really love our little Chuyue! Moreover, the author doesn't dismantle anything. It's really one of the few stolen fanfics that I still like after reading it [Sending my heart to you]

A very nice and interesting book

It's very beautiful and I like it very much. Not bad. Give us Yueyue a cp. We Yueyue also need to be loved by someone wholeheartedly, wholeheartedly, and with eyes [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

I only commented after reading the second book. The characters in this book are not broken, they are very close to the original work, and everyone is very nice! I really couldn't bear to read it after reading it. I've read a lot of stolen fanfics, and it seemed like I accompanied them to one ending after another that was better than the original work. I have to say that I suspected that the third uncle from Nanpai was wearing a vest to write the book. The first-person and third-person writings are all very good. It's still the same sentence: everyone must be good! [Crying] The future is long, see you in the world

This is the kind of book that I would never take off the main character's halo and assign it to someone else. I respect the original work and maintain my own character style. It's not obtrusive and I can't stand it. It's funny and humorous, and I feel fully involved.

This is the kind of tomb robbing fan fiction I want to read. The protagonist is connected just right and extends a very reasonable amount. Moreover, for the protagonist, the younger brother is just the child official of Baima's mother, which is really touching. Chu Yue is also beautiful and strong. If you think about it carefully, the only people who are really good to him without any purpose are his father and the Ghost Festival friends he met later. While he protects the iron triangle, he can also have true love in the world again.

Yueyue's setting is very good, her strength is limited and she won't collapse! ! ! Everyone's wet nurse! ! I hope Chu Yue can find her own light in this world and live in the present. I have to keep writing, Huahua~ I want to see the ending (if I can) (I hope I can)

(♥∀♥) Beautiful, I wish the author a happy new year and all the best, all your wishes will come true, all your wishes will come true, peace, joy, success, good health, peace, peace, and joy every day (#^.^#)

The plot is good and the CP is not broken. I like it and it is worth recommending!

This book makes me cry. After reading it, I felt that the protagonist's emotions are complicated and decisive. I like it very much. I am still crying while reading it. I feel that I used to be a person with limited empathy but now I don't. I like it very much. I hope many people will read this book [Love]

Super exciting. The protagonists' personalities and IQs are online. There is no strong emotional line, Ping Xie's emotions are few and not explicit, which can not only make CP fans happy, but also make people who don't like CP ignore it. There are some knives in it but not too sadistic. That's because the most sadistic one, the broadsword that runs throughout, has been largely omitted. (Quickly say it with me: Thank you so much!)

This is a very interesting book. I like it very much. I hope the author will continue to work hard to update it.

So strong! There is basically no OOC, and at the same time, it clarifies the messy plot lines of the original work and integrates the emotional lines. I can only say that reading this kind of article is what I deserve for my combination of meat and vegetables over the years [love] Thank you, madam🙏🏻