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It's really nice to watch, and I feel that the relationship between Gong and Shou is very interesting, but this is an incomplete time-travel story, and the setting is a little deviated from the "system", and Shou has collapsed many times and the "system" is rarely released later on. However, the plot content is still very good. If the time-travel system setting is not set, it may be better to start with the setting of Aquaman, which is mainly in the entertainment industry.

This attack is really good, other attacks are cold, this one is so funny, so great! I love the attack in this very much! I don't mean to follow Shi Weiqiang [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

This book is so good that I read it in one sitting. The whole text is sweet and not abusive at all. Our Xiao Weiwei is really a fool and a genius. It slaps him in the face. Our Dachuan also changed his character in the later period. He is no longer the cold and aloof person. He is also attracted by our Xiaowei got infected, hahaha, and became a fool. I really didn't expect the ending. That Neptune was reborn. Wow, it's really interesting. The character design is also very full, and their love is also very sweet. Shiwei is not the kind of fool who has no IQ or brain. He is really super smart. I really recommend it, give it a try! ! !

It's very good-looking, but the ending is a bit sloppy. Maybe it was due to the strict investigation during that time... I like Shi Wei's character very much. He's cute and heartless, but he values ​​love and justice more than anyone else. I really like him and highly recommend him.

As a funny article, this book is extremely successful. I was laughing to death. I laughed from beginning to end. I really admire the author's imagination. As long as you can't think of it, no author can do it. Laughing numbly. The most common comments in the paragraphs are hahahahaha. It's really fun. If I say the only regret is the last two chapters, it's a bit sloppy, but it's not a big problem. The ending is very good. I hope I can continue SZD in the future! ! ! ! ! ! ! I re-swiped it a second time and still couldn't help laughing all the way. It looked really good and I felt much better.

It was pretty good after watching it, but the ending felt a bit rushed. Does anyone remember the system? And what about mom's paintings? What happened to mind reading? It feels like there are a lot of places left unfilled. However, the future will be sweet and beautiful. My wife's writing is perfect. How can I make it look so cool and beautiful at the same time? ! Will there be any extra episodes? I feel like I finished watching it all at once and I feel so empty [crying] that I am so excited about the future! ! !

I really hate embarrassment, and I can't stand it every time I see an embarrassing plot, but this is not the case! And it's very funny, and I don't feel embarrassed at all. I finally found a book that is mind-reading, funny and not embarrassing. Thank you very much! I feel that the role of Shi Wei is very good! Ji Hanchuan's image is also very good, very "really fragrant"

[Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]Who can resist a sweet and funny novel? Read the whole book. The noble and self-disciplined Gong and the funny Shou Shou are attracted to each other and fall in love, which will not make people feel out of place. Under the influence of Shou, Gong became a little bit silly. Shou has always maintained his unique and noble moral character, and uses his noble character to "influence" the people around him. He is a very vivid character. Except for a few details in the novel that are a bit sloppy (such as the development of the deputy CP, when did Gong stop reading Shou's mind, when did the system disappear, Shou's mother's last posthumous work, etc.), Everything else is still very attractive. Although I am still a little bit sad (⋟⋞), and I want the author to write more chapters, but I still support the author in leaving us with an ending that leaves us with no imagination (๑ŏ ŏ๑). Big cheers for the author [send heart][love]!

I really like Shi Wei's mouth, he can always come up with unexpected quotes. The emotional scene between Shi Wei and Ji Hanchuan is also very interesting. The scope of the article is not large but it will not make people feel tired. The writing style is also quite good, and there are quite a lot of cars behind it [full]. But the ending is a bit hasty, especially the origin of mind-reading skills and the paintings of Shiwei's mother. These two holes have not been filled in [crying][crying]

This book is still very good to read. The overall writing style is very relaxed and quite silly. There is no emotional cruelty between the protagonists. Only the fight between the Ji family at the end is a little less and the result is a bit fast. But this is just a small problem in my opinion. It does not affect the overall reading of the lighthearted and silly little sweet style novel. Those who haven't read it should go ahead!

Excellent, the plot is not overwhelming, the characters are vivid, and there is no brainless plot [like][like][like] It may be your loss to watch less of the episode. Although the pace of the plot is slow, the attack and reception are both super cute⚈₃⚈[Note] Anyone who can write such a plot is definitely a master of humor [shy][shy][shy]

I started laughing and ended laughing. The author's writing style is really good. The language throughout the book is very humorous. There are many funny scenes, especially the interaction between the protagonist and the couple. The rhythm of the story is also well grasped. I also really like the description of the sublimation of the relationship between the couple in the future. The pace is not very fast or draggy, and I like Da's portrayal of the characters. Although Previously, Xu Xirui always thought that Bai Lian was the villain, but in the end, he had a dream about an incident and what he did. I don't think this is whitewashing. I think he is an awakening of consciousness. He is no longer a single character image. He is more three-dimensional and concrete. From him, he can clearly see the true face of the people around him, from the hateful before to the sad at the end. From the beginning to the end, they are just a tool. In the end, the life he lived with his mother was not as luxurious as before, but he lived a relaxed and happy life. It allowed him to know and learn other things that were different from what he learned in the Xu family, and the portrayal of other characters was impressive. They all have their own characteristics and characteristics... In summary, it is very good! ! I like it very much

It's okay~ It's interesting, but you can't pay too much attention to the details. The ending is good but a bit empty. The setting of the system seems to have disappeared halfway through. Xu Zi didn't say anything about it after that, but these branches don't affect the love between Wei and I Ji. It's so beautiful.

Not bad. There are a lot of laughs in the beginning, and there are also mentions of mind reading, systems, deputy CPs, etc., But the ending may be a bit sloppy due to various reasons. At the end, the mind reading skills and the system are offline. In the words of the Chinese teacher, it means that the "gods" are separated and can't be together. The front is worth a look, and Shi Wei's various operations are very interesting. At the end, it is really a bit sloppy. Maybe the author doesn't have enough time and wants to finish this article. In short, you can watch it, but don't dwell too much on the regrettable ending. There is also grandpa, who said he loved Shiwei very much, but only at the beginning of the divorce, the phone call during his birthday, and later after the mother had a few words with the male protagonist's asshole father, so he didn't mention it again. It's a pity. I feel that the old man's character will be very interesting. Including the old man's preference for the two brothers of the Ji family, the expression is not very obvious. The readers may not have a deep feeling about the younger brother hating the elder brother. Just watching the younger brother and older brother fight, the reason for the fight is not clear. There is also Ji Hanchuan's two brothers. A chapter is devoted to them, but they are not mentioned again later. It is a pity. It feels like pulling a tool man to use it all at once, and then kicking him away after using it. The two children are really miserable.

Good-looking and a bit silly, it's my type It's nice to watch, but the ending is a bit rushed.

It's super good-looking, Shi Wei is really funny, and sometimes it makes people silent when talking, hahahaha, but it's really sweet. All in all, it's very good-looking. I really recommend that everyone read this book if they are in a bottleneck period. This is how I spent my bottleneck period.

I think this book is very interesting, the language is vivid and lively, and the character descriptions are quite charming and unique. I find everything Shi Wei says and does very interesting. He has many views on things that coincide with mine. I think I am very similar to him (of course not as handsome and cute as him), but I resonate with him in many ways. Ji Hanchuan is a perfect attacker that I think is very humane. He is also very interesting. His character creation has a clearer layered sense, allowing people to feel his changes without feeling too abrupt. Everything between him and Shi Wei is within reason, but there are always some unexpected surprises. I also like some of the people around them. They are all very interesting people. I also particularly like some of their little expressions and psychological activities. Anyway, I like them very much! ! Not much else to say, it's been three times already! ! And it always makes me happy every time I watch it, and I always get immersed in the plot! ! ! It's not long, so it's suitable for fast-paced reading👀! ! ! Beautiful (♥∀♥)! ! ! Go and see, go and see! ! !

I read the whole book without skipping a beat! The plot is lighthearted and funny, the characters have distinct personality traits, the attacks are evenly matched, and the love goes in both directions! It's just that the ending was too hasty and there was no explanation of where the system went?

I like it very much. The story of the duplicitous Ji Hanchuan and the cute Shi Wei has ended. Their happy life has begun in a parallel world. The writing is super good, there is no hydrology, and the ending is perfect. They walk hand in hand, and they will always be together in the future. They are the protagonists in each other's lives. The plot is very funny, but without losing the details. The funny tone and behavior are considerate of each other. I like it very much. Overall, it can be used as a bedtime cookie. It disappeared after the system was removed. It's just a decoration, haha. I look forward to releasing new gay books in October!

It's good-looking, really good-looking, but I'm uneducated, so I can go all over the world with just one word. Dad, you are my god, you are amazing, you are absolutely amazing, how can you introduce such a beautiful thing, I, I, I am speechless, I don't know what to say, my family, who understands, I cried, oh, it's over, although their story in that world continues, but this world has stopped! I can't bear it, Jiaojiao~ Teacher Ji, I really can't bear it. You should hurry up and let Teacher Song hug Zha Zha as soon as possible! Always calling for you! (I'd like to mention here that people like Jinnan shouldn't have such a good image. I've been very interested in him since he appeared on the scene. Even though he is very bad and a failure, I still like him very much. So, the image of a villain is really...!) Anyway, it's still the same sentence: super good-looking!

This is a fairly good book that I have read so far. The overall framework, world plot line, and love line can be foreshadowed. It is a book that can be written. However, there is not enough preparation at the end, and the story line seems to be pushed forward as a whole. The latter part is quite interesting. The whole book gave me the impression that it was a comedy in the early stage. This state lasted until the middle and late stages of this article, but it was not particularly disgusting and acceptable. The story line of slap in the face in the later stage was too fast and I did not enjoy it. In fact, the double writing of the story line and love line in the later stage was not very good. But these do not affect the food very much when the funny scenes in the early stage and the love line in the later stage are indeed acceptable. Overall, it is good and the writing is very good. This book can be read by sisters!

Ahhhhhh, this novel is so harmful. Why is the plot so funny? It's been two o'clock at noon and it's now two o'clock in the morning. It's so beautiful that I can't bear to sleep (՞⸝⸝o̴̶̷̥᷅ ̫ o̴̶̷᷄⸝⸝՞) The front part is quite interesting, but there are a lot of typos and missing words. Before Ji Hanchuan's mother, Chen Nian, cut his hair when he was taking off his hood, I looked at it carefully. But when I cut his hair, it looked like a dog gnawed it. I felt really uncomfortable. I feel very sorry for Shi Wei. I don't care how good I will be to Shi Wei in the future or whether I will accept him or what the future plot will be. I can't stand it anymore. When I think about this, I want to cry. I can't stand it anymore. I feel a little tight at the end, wu wu wu wu. I may cry for half a month after being cut into a dog's hair. I feel uncomfortable when I think of such a funny and cute little boy being treated like this. When I think of "Congratulations, Mr. Ji Hanchuan" "When I was elected, my only boyfriend was not officially designated." I was so happy at that time, but now I am so sad. Why is Tokimi so depressed later on? It's okay at the beginning, but it's not very good in the middle and later stages. It's very numb. I can't feel their existence anymore. Also, I like Liangfang very much. Why don't we discuss it later? We discuss it during the performance. The more I think about it, the angrier it is. I can't remember the happiness in the past.

It's lighthearted and funny, and the author's writing is pretty good! The protagonist is very good at talking. These two are a perfect match. I had a lot of fun watching it. Ww I felt very happy after reading the whole story. I was eating and watching. In the middle and late stages, Master Tong didn't come out. I guess I've already fallen in love with him, so I won't fall in love with the character.) Although Master Shi is said to be an all-around boss before he wears it, he doesn't feel that it's reflected very well. What I regret the most is the story about Master Ji's brother in the later period. It could have been written more and richer, but it was brought to the end with just a few words. Well, it felt like the ending was rather hasty, and there was a hint of betrayal later on. The only thing about human affairs was that it was written very quickly, but there was always some unfinished content.

Why is this kind of good jazz book not popular╰_╯! ! (I've seen the cover before, but I didn't think it was very popular, so I didn't read it ≥≤) The plots are intertwined, the plot is interesting but not boring, and the protagonist's character is very distinct. The quarrel between the young lovers really made me die (｡ò ∀ ó｡) As expected, no matter which novel you are in, the law of true fragrance will always be there. This book seems to be quite enjoyable. The protagonist can fight against Green Tea and fight back "like a monster". Lao Gong is also very protective of the protagonist. It's so satisfying to have several Green Teas slapped in the face. Although the plot is ridiculous, I didn't feel awkward at all. It's one of the more natural entertainment articles I've ever read. Even though there are no extras, I still feel like I'm still left with more to say. However, I still have to give this novel full marks, full marks! (*¯¯*)

The ending chapters could be written in detail. The ending is very hasty. It doesn't abuse Ji Jinnan and those keyboard warriors too much, but overall it's very good. The writing is shoddy and you can pick it up.

It's really super good-looking. Who doesn't like Shi Xiaowei, who has a vicious tongue but is cute? Ji Dachuan is also very doted on and loved. Join hands to slap Green Tea in the face. This book is not too enjoyable to read. The characters of each character are also very good. Highly recommended. Good looking good good looking good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good

Overall, this book is quite good. Shi Wei's character is very cheerful and lively, while Ji Hanchuan's character does not give people a dark feeling. The content in the article is interesting and sometimes makes people feel very funny. It's a bit sloppy at the end. July 8, 2023 10:02

Emmmm Overall it's okay, there are some funny points, but for a big comic writer like me, it's not bad. I gave one star less because it's a bit like the old Mary Sue. When the male protagonist is in chapter 69 or some other chapter, please tell me xx You are playing with fire... Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. And Gong also likes to call Shou a little fool, a bastard, and a bad guy [laughs]

The plot in the early stage is very funny. The character of the pig's trotter is really good and funny. Every paragraph in this chapter is really funny. It made me laugh to death. Secondly, the pig's foot attack in the early stage and the slap in the face in the later stage are really good and sweet. However, the fight for the family property and some chapters in the later part feel that they don't match the previous ones (only personal opinion, it may be my reason, don't criticize). I just don't have the same sense of humor as before, but this book is really good-looking [love] [love] [love] [love]

It's really good-looking, and the descriptions are spot-on. However, one drawback is that the ending is too hasty, and many plot points are not properly explained, making it feel very sudden. But on the whole it is still worth watching. The character descriptions are very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard.