Foolish Pokémon Master

I feel like the heroine could be made a little more perverted, I would love to see it [laughing evilly]

It's really wonderfully written, it's hard to find such good stuff

The writing is great, and both the career and emotional lines are well taken into consideration. The author has a good grasp of some indescribable aspects and will not make people feel offended. It is my favorite Pokémon book so far. The author's writing is very comfortable, and the succession of events is very natural. The emotional line is relatively delicate, a bit leaning towards romance but it won't make people feel too much; there is also a career line, and there are also passionate battles. I think it is a relatively broad-based novel, and it has things that suit the tastes of both boys and girls. It is very, very good.

It's good-looking (♥∀♥). Not only does it have a single female protagonist, but it also has elf. It's the kind of Pokemon novel that I've been looking for for a long time with a romantic and career line. Not only that, the initial elf for the male and female protagonists are my favorite Fairy Eevee and Croaking Frog. The elves of other characters are also matched very well, especially the elves that the protagonist and the others conquer are all my favorite elves that have both good looks and strength. Every character in it is also flexible and vivid. It perfectly matched the points I wanted to see most. Really looking forward to the next plot. I would like to ask secretly whether Guagua Pao Frog and its master will meet again? Will there be a revenge plot for Cocodora? Expect

It's quite nice. It's okay to slow down the progress, but just don't stop updating. (I would like to make a comment. I think there are winners and losers in battles. It is not necessary for the protagonist to win every game. He can lose appropriately. After all, there are people outside the world, and there is a sky outside the world. If you don't like it, don't criticize!!!)

The writing is very good. The first few chapters may be a bit toxic, but the further you read, the better. The author should work hard! (ง ˙O˙)ว, it's my first time to write such a long comment, please don't waste my efforts (*/㉨＼*) Face covering

I love this book so much. The appropriate battle plot and just the right sweetness make up for the shortcomings of the elf writing. It is very good. It is very similar to the Pokémon world in my heart. I also like the development of Pokémon moves because I like Naruto and JOJO. I hope the author will not stop updating. Please Finally, I wish the author good luck [like]

Elf, the character descriptions are very good.

The pace is quite slow, the male and female protagonists are a bit sweet, and the Pokémon battles are well written. It's pretty good in the Pokémon series, and it's also combined with other anime, giving it a slightly different feel. But I prefer to read the content of the learning materials [smile][smile]. I hope the author can provide more pictures. Finally, please do not stop updating.

Wow, it's rare to see Pokémon stories with female protagonists. The author writes well, keep up the good work ^0^~ Come on, come on, come on

It is relatively good-looking among Tomatoes. The daily writing is pretty good, but the battles are not that interesting (although I don't know why the author insists on letting the frog fight with physical attacks. Maybe it is because the author likes the feeling of punching to the flesh?) The author is quite attentive to this book, and will also check the information when designing skills. It is okay for the author to write about the sweet daily life of the protagonist and the heroine, but it is best not to go too far, especially after the rating is high. Also, this is a Pokémon novel, and I hope the author will focus on Pokémon and romance as a supplement. Finally, this is my personal opinion. Although this book has some poisonous points, it is harmless. Come on, author!

I like daily articles very much, but it is difficult for the author to please the remaining 50% of Pokémon readers with this kind of writing. I suggest you read I Don't Want to Be a Trainer. This book reasonably distributes adventure, battle, comedy, bonding, and love. There is still a lot of room for improvement in this book. Above

It's so good. Although the plots in the first two chapters are a bit cliche, they are really good-looking. I have never seen such good-looking urban Pokémon. As long as the author doesn't enter the palace, I will follow this book to the end! (Also, the author, I am a frog in the group, can you turn me over (இωஇ ))

Advantages: The interaction between the male and female protagonists really makes you smile. The male protagonist is gaining strength step by step. I am very looking forward to the evolution of the bond of the frog in the future. Disadvantages: The battle scenes are a bit rough, and the description of the characteristics is not specific enough. For example: the elf is disabled, but the torrent is not triggered.

I really like it. It's different from the previous Pokémon stories about qualifications and system cheating. This book gave me a fresh feeling. I came here before I knew it. The author must work hard [Like][Like][Like][Like]

The writing is very good, and the control of the love plot is excellent. It is much better than another Pokémon novel I have read. Another important point is that this one actually has a single female protagonist, and she is a human (yes, you heard it right, a human female protagonist.) (It's just that the content of this introduction looks a bit uncomfortable😖The author can change it when he has time) It's much better than another Pokémon novel I've read. (In the early stage, I wrote about a female character who didn't have a good impression as Lucario. I might change her mind later, but when I saw the end of it, I abandoned the book. Really, if I hadn't read it for a long time, I would have fucking deleted it. . Then the writing was messy, maybe because of the world view. In the end, I didn't mention it by name, but the portrayal of the other characters was a bit bad, which made me feel weird and couldn't stand it.) Then this book gave me the feeling that apart from the name and introduction of the work, the rest is really good and should not be ignored. And the author's writing style is in the middle and upper reaches. Even though I don't know how to appreciate articles, I think it's quite good. Of course, some parts look a bit awkward. And the author actually has some words in the first few chapters. The mistakes are all about her turning into him. Then I am a Pokémon fan who doesn't know much about Pokémon, and I don't understand pvp routines. But I know that only the author must be a senior Pokémon fan. Although the pace of this book is relatively slow, it looks really comfortable, although it is still a little trendy. All in all, to sum up, this is a good book, don't be put off by its introduction and name.

The single female protagonist is well received. The protagonist is not handsome and rich from the beginning but has no friends, but an ordinary person. The battle details, the normal-strength elves, and the unhurried development pace are well received. The proportion of the main love line is reasonable, and the focus is still on Pokémon. There are too few chapters for bad reviews, but author, you have to be steady. It doesn't matter if the update is slow. Don't write too much. I hope the author will not limit the number of Pokémon to be conquered to 6. Take your time, don't be anxious, five stars will not be divided into installments.

Excellent Pokémon novel, the Pokémon are cute and the duels are good, but it is also a fan-oriented novel. Pokémon players and enthusiasts can read it well, but it is a bit difficult to read for those who know little about it. It is a relatively excellent single-female protagonist. If you like a single female protagonist, the two of them are still sweet. The oriole female partner in the early stage is really not good in the impression, and she looks like a gangster. If you look at the system text, you will find that the system is useless. Apart from being able to see Pokémon values, it has no use. I only gave you an incense in the early stage, and then there was nothing more. If you want to read a cool text about the system, I suggest you take a detour. Generally speaking, the author's writing style is good and there are few typos. His efforts in updating are worthy of appreciation.

There aren't too many pits, and it's not that sharp. Extremely easy.

Very good, well written. I would like to make a small suggestion. Before writing about the battle, it is best to check the encyclopedia. The top ten matches in the latest chapter really bothered me. Maybe I am a bit picky as a battle player. I still hope to pay more attention to the description of this aspect. Compared with the crushing duel, I am more looking forward to the flexible deployment and use of tactics.

It's a pretty good Pokémon article. Although it's average, I like the author's attitude very much. He's a real person. Pokémon has many possibilities, not to mention reality. Every strategy is abnormally useful, but many people put level before everything else. What about the level gap? The three mice with a level difference of no less than one star versus the overlord level, Angry Front Teeth is the key to victory. Strength makes people unable to see the front clearly, while love makes people enjoy the world.

Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people. This is the best book I've ever seen in Pokémon. The part about me is a bit middle-of-the-road, but also a bit cool. At that time, the book only had more than 400 chapters, so I finished reading it, and then I read it. When I was done with it, I wanted to continue reading, but I read their part. The comment said that the introduction meant that there might be a knife, so I didn't dare to read it, so I kept on watching it. When I read it again, it was already finished. At that time, I almost didn't buy the Mask of Pain. I opened it and went straight to the finale. I found that there was no knife, so I felt relieved to watch it. After finishing, I only had one thought,... It's too short! ! ! [Smile][smile][smile]

It's a good book, but it doesn't have a lot of excitement. Compared with the passionate battles in other Pokémon novels, it is more like a daily novel. Pokémon is only one of the main subjects. Cheng Tian and the Pokémon have progressed and grown together in life. They have experienced many things together and formed a super strong bond. At the same time, Cheng Tian has also experienced various stages of life such as studying, falling in love, and starting a family. Well, after all, this is the author's first book, so there are definitely some shortcomings, but I can feel his seriousness and his indescribable emotion for the words. I really enjoyed it and am looking forward to the author's next book.

As a Virgo, this book is very well written, including a rich worldview. Battle, well, how should I put it? It's not bad, I personally like it, and it's a bit sweet, and there's a little knife at the back. Not to mention anything else, overall it's good. After all, it's better to understand the good and bad from a personal point of view. Finally, if you don't like it, please don't hurt it. Don't belittle other people's efforts and make them worthless. I made a typo. I'm so embarrassed. It's my debut novel. My, my, my. Hey, I couldn't sleep last night. After thinking about it again, I felt a little bit regretful. It's just that Lotem was pretty good in the back and played a little bit. And it was reasonable for him not to appear later, but Xiao Bai felt a little uncomfortable. Earlier, he was chasing levels, but he almost didn't appear later. Moreover, he only had two or three combined forms with Ia and Ninja, and then there are the later extras. I personally think that the reason why they did not appear in the previous episodes may be due to their combat power, but it is quite reasonable for them to appear in the extras, because they have no place to practice or other relatives and friends, which is a bit regretful.

I feel that the story in the book is very warm, making progress and becoming stronger little by little. I have always been disgusted with urban Pokémon literature, thinking that it is not a pure Pokémon world. Later I discovered that what I like has always been Pokémon themselves. As long as they are around, warm things can happen. I listen to the book every night before going to bed, and I will listen to it again and again. [Adoration] I'm still a student and don't have money to buy gifts, so just give them to me. Cheers, author [like]

Compared with other books, the development of combat power is slower, and it feels like a development series. The relationship between the characters is also very normal. I also like the elves very much. Overall, there are so many fanfics, and this one is my favorite.

This book pokes my sensitivities among the Pokémon fanfics on this platform. It has a single heroine, and the arrangement of Pokémon is also very reasonable. It's not a quasi-god walking around and cherishing as many dogs as there are dogs. The plot is also very good, but some parts in the early stage are not so good, but overall it is still very good. For those who say it is awkward, I can only say, please, this is Pokémon 21, what is wrong with it? In short, this book is really worth reading, and it is best to join a group where there are good things posted by big guys and the author.

It's a good book. The single female protagonist is the biggest feature and advantage of this book. I like the heroine's character very much. Although it's a bit BT, it's innocuous. Another advantage I think is the protagonist's choice of Pokémon. Each Pokémon has its own personality and experience, and each one is very vivid. There is no deliberate choice of quasi-gods, phantoms and other bad street Pokémon, which gave me a new understanding of many Pokémon. In addition, the supporting characters are also well-cast, making the story more three-dimensional and full. But there are many shortcomings. For example, the hero's wife has suffered so much that she has to take the initiative, and the ending kind of ruined my image of Giratina and Arceus, which are completely different from the Creator God in my heart. Moreover, the hero has always said that winning the championship is a dream, but the process is a bit too simple, and it is more satisfying to build it up bit by bit. After looking around, it seems like my time has elapsed [laughing]

The author is a very attentive person. The system of this book does not make the protagonist soar to the sky like other novels, but the protagonist is down to earth and slowly climbs up. The system plays a supporting role in this book at most. There are really very few people who like Pokémon nowadays. I am a person who particularly likes Pokémon. But, like Zhu Zi, Sword and Shield, I don't even know where to look. I've never heard of a Pokémon like Blacksmith. The impression of Pokémon in my mind is at best that of Dynamax. Anyway, this book can be summed up in two words, it is very beautiful. Y^O^y Author, have you ever thought that the wave of water can be like a Rasengan, so why can't the water shuriken. You can put multiple water shurikens together to form one big one. If you throw it out again, the damage may be higher. Coupled with the Eye of the Heart, it is definitely a killing move. You can also let Koga Ninja learn skills such as water cannon. He probably hasn't learned the excitement light, so you can consider it. As for melee skills, you can give Carapace Ninja a turning attack. In fact, instead of asking Koga Ninja to learn sword dancing, you might as well ask him to learn self-motivation. Self-motivation can increase both special attack and physical attack. Koga Ninja should be able to learn heavy stepping, so you can consider it. As for Kodora, you can let him learn Power of the Earth. This skill does very high damage. If possible, let him learn Light as a Swallow. In this way, he can move much faster without relying on the tailwind of the buzzing bat. Gengar can let him learn a few fist-related skills, such as the Freeze Punch, which can be used in conjunction with the Koga Ninja's tidal wave. If it is a thunder fist, it can hit the enemy's tidal wave, like a whirlpool of flames. In the later stage, the second team can add a fire-breathing dragon. Now the protagonist's team is missing a fire-type output position. The fire-breathing dragon can fly and breathe fire. It can also learn skills such as Thunder Palm and Freezing Fist, which have unexpected effects when attacking dragon-type, flying-type and other elves. In the later stage, if it is awesome, it can also challenge the freezing bird. These are my personal opinions. You are free to adopt them or not. Please don't end this series, thank you! 🙇️

After reading this book for about half a month, I have some opinions of my own. This book is more about daily life, very dull at the beginning, and some of the plots are very blunt (which is normal when writing a book for the first time). In the middle period, it's like entering a trough. The words and descriptions make people lose their desire (a dog's head saves his life). The middle and later stages are the highlights of this book. With the main missions, the structure gradually becomes clearer, especially the memories of the evolution of buzz bats and the nightmares. These plots can show some progress. Anyway, looking forward to the next fanfic👀✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧