After Passing Through the Book, What Happened to You, Villain?

This is my first time writing a book with two male protagonists. I hope some people will like my book. [Shy]

I feel like this character is really great, but the only drawback is that it's a bit lacking.

It looks so good to me [I adore you] but it's a bit sparse and there are not many people [crying]

It's really good-looking. I really like the mutual trust. It's really touching. The characters are also quite touching. I really like the plot and the story is well-crafted. I highly recommend it, highly recommend it to everyone! ! !

It's very beautiful, very sweet, they both love each other very much, and the main character is very strong, I really like it, I really like this kind of cool writing. But just because the author is writing a book for the first time, her writing style may be a little off, and some people may not be able to accept it. But the author writes it in big words very sweetly. If you just want to enjoy CP and sweets, this is really good. Relaxed, I feel really relaxed watching this. There's nothing to make you angry about either. There is no place for myocardial infarction. Easy cookies. At least for now. Some articles are written in such a slow and procrastinating way that they are really speechless. This is not the case with this one, and it is not the case with this one. There is no misunderstanding. In some articles, a misunderstanding would be repeated in more than ten or twenty pages. Each one of them seems to have no mouth. This is my easy cookie, it looks good, looks good, looks good. I'm just a candy addict. And the main characters are very strong, just really strong. There is nothing that makes the protagonist feel wronged. That is to say, if I have to say something bad about this book, it would be that the writing style may be a little rough. But it is understandable if this is the first time the author writes a book. Then the second point is that there are too few, really few, I really don't see enough.

The author's writing is very good, but I think some places don't need to be written in too much detail, otherwise it will be very long later because this is about the dark side of the little apprentice, right, so if the early stage is too detailed, the later stage will be very long, and some places jump too fast. Anyway, I still want to be a little more careful. After all, this is probably the first time for the author to write more, so he can hone his skills.

Hello author, can I ask you something? Will the protagonist return to the original world? Will he abandon his apprentice? I don't want him to go back. Since I came to this world, I have lived this life [learned]

Love: There is no self-righteous reserve, no paranoid misunderstanding, no unforgivable harm, and no unscrupulous desire. "Thank you for bringing light to me across time and space, and for giving me the most beautiful things in the world. For you, I am willing to abandon everything, and have nothing with you forever." - Qin An (Demon Lord) "I suddenly realized that across a thousand years, I only want to protect you in peace. For you, I am willing to overcome all difficulties and protect you." - Shu Lan (Immortal Lord) After thousands of years of bonding, staying together for a long time, lovers will finally get married. The author's works are very sweet. Come on, big. [Blow a kiss] [Fly a kiss] [Send heart] [Like] [Like]

The meaning of the word love is too broad. It can be asking or giving, it can be forbearing, it can be passionate, or it can be restrained. If I have to explain it, I actually don't know. A very nice book

Anyway, I quite like it [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][shy]

It feels a little watery, maybe because I am writing daily articles now. But that doesn't matter, I support the new book! ! ! Come on, author! ! !

Looks good! ╰(*´`*)╯The further you go, the better it looks, and it is no longer the same childish writing style as in the previous chapters (although, mine is not much better ( ๑ŏ ŏ๑ ))

This is considered nurturing, right? [Laughing evilly] Raising my husband from childhood to adulthood. Sweet and pampering, sweet from beginning to end. What I like most is when Xiao An's identity as a demon is exposed... Master's trust and heartache... Ji Tian 👏👏👏

It's super nice. I hope the author can update it more and shorten the update time😊 Is it possible? I hope the author will reply 😘

The article is very sweet. The author's writing style is very good. I love the author DaDa very much. I hope the author will publish a new book soon. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, their love is so beautiful, ooohhhhhhhhhh, although they were not together in the previous life, the bond of the previous life has brought them together again in this life, so sweet [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing] The deputy CP also loves it, the author writes it in big words really well [laughing][laughing][shy][shy]

I watched it in one day, it was not too sweet, but the waiting in the middle was a bit annoying. Dan Chuan and Chuan Chuan played a role in warming up and empathizing with each other. They are two strong characters. I would like to see the two protagonists have a cup of tea. I don't understand the emotional lines of Ye Feiyu and Kong Xiang very well. The writing is also very good. I can even think of the beauty of Ting Lanfeng [laughing]

It's really beautiful [Adoration], the author is also very lively [Sending Hearts], and the author's writing style is also good. It's the first time I read a book in one day. It's not enough to read ✪ω✪, there's nothing interesting | ू•ૅω•́)ᵎᵎᵎ, the plot is super cool [Blowing Kiss], and the main character doesn't get offended or anything. Personally, I think it's super nice [Blowing Kiss] [Sending Hearts] (ღ[Love]‿[Love]ღ) (⑉°з°)-♡(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

Definitely a five-star review, but there are too few cars. I hope I can write about more cars.

I also want to see the extra story about Master and his disciple [crying]

Not bad, good luck to the author!

When I was in a book shortage, I found an author and his novel. The story and characters written by the author are good. It is a pure emotional and love story. There is no abuse or knives. It is very good. Come on, author, write better novels. This novel written by the author is quite good.

Shuang Jie, no misunderstandings, mutual favor, double strength, the cultivation system is very popular.

The plot of this book is very novel and not as cliche as other books. I also like the identity between the attacker and the recipient! However, I think there are two areas that can be improved. First, the author's hat is too high. He is a god since he was born, which makes it a bit weird to read. The second is that the author's writing techniques are a bit immature, like some psychological descriptions, which are a bit awkward to read. There are also some places where the introduction is not clear. I have read more than a dozen chapters, but the author only introduced the higher level of God Transformation, but did not introduce how the specific levels are divided. There is no introduction to the four major sects, and there is no introduction to the characters in his own sect. The reading is a little confusing, but overall it is still very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard in the future (ง•̀_•́)ง

It feels smooth, there are no misunderstandings, we trust each other, there is nothing to worry about, it is just sweet. As for other things, I felt that the early foreshadowing gave people a feeling that something big was going to happen, but in the end the battle ended so quickly, I was a bit dumbfounded, and I was gone before I was even excited [face covering]

Come on, great author

Why is it so short?

I just love reading little sweet articles [adoration][adoration][adoration]

I don't know how to describe it! Then speak in a language you don't understand. Meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow🌹🌹🌹

I'm still waiting for the master and apprentice to express their feelings.