Online Games: Get a GM Sword at the Beginning

It's okay, five-star support!

I am an author, and I read for a long time because I have to proofread. Readers who have read the first fifty chapters will keep reading this book. But very few people have read the first fifty chapters. I originally wanted to change the style, but I forgot about it. The style is just like this. Everyone has their own preferences. After writing so many words, I didn't make any money. I will give an explanation to readers and myself after writing it. Please readers, please don't make excuses in the comments. I really can't write about the protagonist drinking water, peeing and going to the toilet. Sincerely, any point can attract complaints. Please let me go, I am exhausted both physically and mentally.

I read it in one sitting, very good. I have read too many brainless books and always wanted to change my taste. This one is really good. Please keep updating the author, follow the current rhythm, it suits me very well.

Author, how do you prove that you wrote this book so that it will not be confusing in the future? Because your data flow is too detailed. @ Dawn Grays It's been two months, I've been raising it for two months... Author, please work hard and update it quickly.

It's a good book, but it's not my type. I still like lone wolf

It's a good online game novel. All kinds of data are relatively clear, unlike some online game novels where the data doesn't match up at all times.

I like it, pig's feet are no longer those brainless and strong people who can play online games without dying even once [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

The overall pace is slow and there are almost no poisonous points. It is indeed a "senior youth" [laughing]. The plot is more life-oriented than normal online games, and the author's thinking is indeed very broad. I didn't expect to get married first and then fall in love. I personally think this fresh model is quite interesting. The only drawback is that the update is a bit slow [smile]

Good book, worth reading

At the beginning of reading, I feel that the author is quite serious. He has a special list of level data and equipment to answer questions and solve doubts. However, I suggest that the author publishes them one by one and can be slower. I hope the quality will not deteriorate. Keep it up. PS: I still like the harem [Adoration] [Adoration] I was originally thinking of a man starting a harem, but now I realize that there is a foreshadowing, a single female lead. If there is a single female lead, there won't be so many ambiguities with other people.

After Lost Leaves, I really can't find any online game articles about the taste.

I've always wanted to find a book about online games, but I couldn't get enough of it before reading a few chapters. This is one of the few books that I can't stop reading.

This introduction is average, but it's really good-looking. Basically, there's nothing poisonous about it, and it's not a brainless piece of writing either. There are just too few, you can raise them and look at them again! !

Not bad, good looking

The plot is compact and keeps people watching. However, the description of the heroine can be improved. You can read novels similar to Jianlai. The character description is max and you can learn from it. Hope you are getting better and better.

This is a good online game, and the author has great control over the data. There are no villains who will get in the protagonist's face for no apparent reason. The plot is reasonable and reasonable (realistic dramas are skipped). It improves step by step. The subsequent plot is a bit more obvious and less oppressive. I hope to improve the strength of the gods and strengthen the birds!

It's rare to see an online game work with clear logic and organization, great! Big cheers for the author! The cat is rolling!

It's great. It's the only online game novel with a single female protagonist that I can read on Tomato. The male protagonist doesn't have any ambiguity with other female characters. The only thing that I can't accept is that the female protagonist and her mother are both called Wan. Everything else is fine. Good luck, author.

There are so few people watching. Come on, author

Author, why don't you make a game yourself. . . . . This setting is not something that ordinary people can design. . . .

Reality aside, it's the same old story, the game is okay, as long as a small glitch is enabled but the early value doesn't collapse.

There were indeed problems in the early stage. I gave feedback to the author. The author has a good attitude and is very cute. In the later stage, the writing will get better and better. I should go back and optimize the previous text so that people can see the back.

I really like reading it. I won't say much. I have been reading it for the past few days and have read more than 130 chapters. I feel it is okay. It doesn't have a magic weapon at the beginning. Anyway, it is quite to my liking so far.

It's a pretty good book. The author is very detailed. It's worth reading [Blow Kiss] I just need to be more delicate when writing emotional lines.

Why is the rating so low? It's so beautiful. After reading Chapter 160, the following strong team CPs are so embarrassing. If you can't write them well, don't write them. The couple of Jiutian Lanyue bet that this part is too powerful, so it will directly reduce their wisdom. Online games are just about games, but too many real-life stories are too much. Originally, the story about the young couple Zhujiao was quite heartwarming, but the following strong team CPs are quite embarrassing. This novel needs to dig more holes. The plot will be more ups and downs, and it will revolve around the main line of time travel and AI and intersperse other stories. Write more copy and less emotion. You will find eunuchs everywhere in the Tomato online game.

Support it, it's great!

It's okay, come on! Author[Thinking][Thinking]

The beginning of the acquaintance between the male and female protagonists is not bad, and then they gradually fall in love. I like it very much, and the online game is also good.

Will it be blended with reality later?

Not bad, well written