Her and Her Tenderness

Not bad, the plot is great, I like them both very much, I hope they can stay together. I also hope that Xiaoxiao's illness can be cured [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] (Let me tell you how I feel) I don't know if it's because of me, but it's a little difficult. The emotional description is not so direct and needs to be lacking. And be careful not to write a running account. Emotional changes can be described in more detail to arouse the emotions of more readers. The whole article is great. I hope the author will work hard and don't give up. What you wrote is really good. Sorry, Dad, I've been busy recently, but I'm still here. Next is my point of view. I hope it can help you a little bit. The plot of Dad is very good. I would like to ask if there is an outline? (Because the early plot of Dada is very good, I'm afraid that not writing an outline will affect the subsequent plot) The first few pictures of Dada are obviously a bit jerky, but as a novice, it can be said to be very good. Later on, you can feel that the technique is much smoother. Earlier, when Jiu'er was chasing Xiaoxiao, the characters changed a bit too much, which made the originally fast-paced and rushed scene together. (I suggest that the story of supporting characters in the early stage should not be so much, and that some stories of supporting characters should be interspersed in the middle and later stages, which will make it more interesting) There are not many main problems, it is just a bit jerky.

😳 I shamelessly give myself a high score 😳 😳 😢 😢 There are not enough people to review the book, so he won't come out 😢 😢 Can there be more book reviews 😢

It looked good, but Su Xiao never knew that Ye Jiu was red-eyed when he broke up with her. She didn't know that Ye Jiu cut off the Internet that month, or how much effort Ye Jiu put into finding her. She felt a little sad for Ye Jiu. She didn't want to give up her lover, but God didn't approve of them. When she knew that Su Xiao was going to be sent to a rehabilitation center, her first reaction was to protect Su Xiao. At that time, she was only a 19-year-old girl, so she could only adopt this method. It was not that she didn't love Su Xiao. But it's best to be together and be happy. However, Su Xiao didn't know whether she blamed Ye Jiu wrongly for the situation at that time, or whether I was feeling uneasy. But it's so beautiful. I recommend it. Miss her a little

Very well written!!! Sometimes I wonder: What is the meaning of my life? I have been confused for a while, not knowing what to do next? What can I do? Do whatever you can to avoid being blamed by them. Now, I have a clear goal: I want to work hard, study hard, create a future for myself and her, and have the belief that I can live safely without everyone else. It is the vision of living a free life despite being looked at differently by others. He has the strength to protect her. There is finance to give her anything she wants, and there is care, comfort, and love she needs. (Both of us are girls)

It's beautiful, I hope the two heroines can always be together [Sending my heart]

The cover looks so sweet, but the content is so cruel. At the end, there is a sentence adapted from personal experience 😢, my Xiaoer! She is obviously so nice, why do you treat her like this 😢😢, she is so beautiful, I love her so much, sweet and cruel 🥺 I checked it again. I don't know if it was an illusion. I always felt that Ye Jiu in the early stage seemed to have no soul, as if she was hosted by AI, or that she was an actor without emotions but with great acting skills. The love she performed had no soul. Until the tears started, she seemed to have a soul and come alive. I don't know if my understanding is wrong (don't worry, this is my own understanding, different people have different views).

Why did I open this article? I cried to death. My Xiao, why is your life so miserable? 😢😢😢😢. I support Narcissus 😢😢😢 Narcissus is the best cp.

It was so good. To be honest, the scene where Su Xiao was beaten by her father and her mother watched her daughter being beaten, and the scene where Ye Jiu said they were breaking up, made me cry. It was a little sad, it was wonderful, the sadness was gone. Fortunately, the ending was good, otherwise I would have gone crazy. Ahhhhhhh

I just don't know why I wanted to cry a little bit when I saw it later. It seems because I think Ye Jiu and Su Xiao are the original couple, but I want to keep watching.

I feel pretty good so far, but I personally think it might be a bit sadistic in the future. The post and Su Xiao's mother, Jiang Mei, said that her daughter can only like men. It feels like a foreshadowing, and there may be a plot to follow in the post (the above is my personal opinion) I re-read it again, and I seem to have discovered something. Chapter 51 said that Ye Jiu's appearance is both a good thing and a bad thing for Su Xiao. If Su Xiao leaves Ye Jiu, Su Xiao's condition will worsen. Although Su Xiao is cured now, there should be a story about the same hospital later. Then Su Xiao and Ye Jiu are separated. Will Su Xiao get that disease again? [What] I kind of want to read the plot of Jie Tongsuo, so I want to ask the author when he will write it. Although Dr. Fu said that if the second personality (Crazy Piao Xiao) goes crazy, the main personality (Su Xiao) may be swallowed up, but I feel that the second personality seems to have been protecting the main personality. First, it helped the main personality capture Ye Jiu, and then he went to help her get revenge. That is to say, I have been looking forward to the sadistic ending of the extra chapter 🥰🥰[Admiration]