The writing is very nice and the story is very novel. The only flaw is that there are a few typos. To be honest, when I read the beginning, I couldn't help but think of Da Liu's "Bring Her Eyes", and I once speculated whether there was any connection between the two, but the result was that there was no connection. This book is really well written. Although there are some ideal elements in it, it is normal for a novel. I hope the author will keep up his hard work and produce another great work [Sending my heart]
After thinking about it, I think it's still four stars.
Yossi, the writing is very good. Although the story is a little simple - it's the kind where you can basically guess the process and ending from the beginning of the movie, but as a short story it's already very good.
Although it lacks any novelty, I have to say that the author did a good job in describing the story. Except for the part where he relayed Xiao Meng's words to his parents, which made me a little embarrassed (but actually understandable), the whole story has no problems or poisonous points. The final ending also satisfied me. After all, it is not the kind of knife that makes people feel indifferent. It can make people feel happy after all.
In my opinion, only the story is relatively simple, and only one story line can be considered a shortcoming. Other than that, it is quite good. It is of an upper level in this short story essay competition, and it is suitable for my taste. On a scale of ten, I would give it about eight point five.
Ps. If the level of this essay competition remains like this, it will definitely be no problem to win the prize. Come on.
Pss. I'm a bit sleepy, so I may not have written the review well, so I'm sorry.
Revenge doesn't feel fun enough. The owner of the stationery store should be put in jail.
The writing is very nice and the story is very novel. The only flaw is that there are a few typos. To be honest, when I read the beginning, I couldn't help but think of Da Liu's "Bring Her Eyes", and I once speculated whether there was any connection between the two, but the result was that there was no connection. This book is really well written. Although there are some ideal elements in it, it is normal for a novel. I hope the author will keep up his hard work and produce another great work [Sending my heart] After thinking about it, I think it's still four stars.
Yossi, the writing is very good. Although the story is a little simple - it's the kind where you can basically guess the process and ending from the beginning of the movie, but as a short story it's already very good. Although it lacks any novelty, I have to say that the author did a good job in describing the story. Except for the part where he relayed Xiao Meng's words to his parents, which made me a little embarrassed (but actually understandable), the whole story has no problems or poisonous points. The final ending also satisfied me. After all, it is not the kind of knife that makes people feel indifferent. It can make people feel happy after all. In my opinion, only the story is relatively simple, and only one story line can be considered a shortcoming. Other than that, it is quite good. It is of an upper level in this short story essay competition, and it is suitable for my taste. On a scale of ten, I would give it about eight point five. Ps. If the level of this essay competition remains like this, it will definitely be no problem to win the prize. Come on. Pss. I'm a bit sleepy, so I may not have written the review well, so I'm sorry.
Revenge doesn't feel fun enough. The owner of the stationery store should be put in jail.