Chinese Card Maker

This is the first time I read this kind of book, and I was immediately attracted to it. The writing is really smooth, and the combat part is great. The key is not all seriousness. Sometimes the plot is very relaxing. It's a great book. Anyway, I like it very much [Love]

Finally found this kind of card-making text, it's beautiful!

I really love this article, the description is very wonderful. The writing gave me just the right amount of pleasure. All in all, it's really great ୧(๑•̀◡•́๑)૭ However, can I make a small request to the author? (Hopefully there won't be a female protagonist) If that doesn't work, that's okay. [Laugh]

It's very interesting to watch, the protagonist's character is very good, the plot is smooth, and there's a good cp. But halfway through, I realized that the author had stopped updating and I instantly collapsed [crying]

I have read 10 chapters so far, and overall, the future is promising. Four stars fair review. The setting is okay, the writing style is a bit immature, and there are no major poisonous points. The overall language style is a bit serious and plain, and there are no jokes. There is relatively little description of the environment, and the fighting scenes lack detail. Let me complain about the fighting scenes. For example, when the protagonist first went to the competition, there was not much psychological description when he entered the ring for the first time, not even descriptions of excitement and calmness. There was not much description of the ring environment, nor the performance of the opponent, nor the distance between the two in the ring. It just said that the protagonist asked Hou Yi to shoot an arrow and then won. This seemed very bland and lacked details. When the protagonist competes with bronze-level and silver-level opponents, it feels like he wins quickly. According to the setting, it only took the protagonist one day to go from black iron to bronze, while the average genius took three to five days. Ordinary people felt that it took at least ten days, and it would take longer to go from bronze to silver. Even if the opponent was an ordinary person, it took a total of one month to go from black iron to silver. During this month, he participated in many competitions, but he didn't have any proper tactics (or the author didn't express it well in words). He was defeated by the protagonist in a few moments, which seemed very dull. In the first few chapters of the plot, the protagonist's performance was mediocre, with little emotional fluctuations and no goals. The plot was not developed and it was difficult to arouse interest in continuing reading. For me, the first ten chapters of the book are crucial and basically determine whether I can continue reading. I still prefer the setting of this book. I hope the author can improve his writing style and add some detailed descriptions. I will continue to watch. Come on, author! [Top post][blowing kiss]

Damn, I am a reader who has been attracted by you recently. This book is really good. The plot is novel, the rhythm of the story is well grasped, and all the characters are very distinct. Whether it is the protagonist or the supporting characters, each one is very vivid. The key is that I can see the youthful spirit in them. I rarely encounter novels that are so palatable. When I couldn't wait to read the following, I clicked on your homepage and found that you stopped updating. To be honest, I was really sad and went crazy for a long time. Such a good book and those young people should not stop now. So when I found out today that you had updated it, I was really surprised. I rarely write long reviews, but when I saw the author's words, I didn't know what happened, but I hope these words can give you some encouragement and tell me not to give up such a good story and such good protagonists for people who don't want it. (I think everyone in it is the protagonist) I really hope that I can continue writing it, because it is really beautiful [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [love]

It's great. As long as you keep updating, I will keep watching. Don't be afraid that I will run away.

Rating: High quality rations I have read a lot of card-making articles, and many of them use monopolizing Chinese culture and history as a golden finger. What the author does well is that he balances the combat power very well, and does not say that the protagonist will be invincible if he just makes a card. At the same time, he avoids the cliché plot of pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger, and making cards to steal the limelight at critical moments. But the bad thing is that the author feels that many plot points are not fully written. For example, only 70% of the plot that can be unfolded in this time period is written and then skipped to later. The story is also all on one big branch. The lack of some branch lines and "accidents" makes the overall plot less ups and downs and suspense. The presentation of the world view and the force setting are not outstanding enough or the appeal is still somewhat lacking. Generally speaking, the author knows what the readers want and implements it well, but the overall setting and story framework are still a bit immature. Be optimistic about the author and keep up the good work!

DaDa finally updated [crying]. This book is really good to read (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡. The characters of both the supporting characters and the protagonist are very well described, very realistic and detailed. I like it very much, and the content is also very consistent with my imagination of a hot-blooded boy.

I'm finally back. I finally won the resurrection match after more than seven months. (☍⁰) Come on author, you are the best (⑉••⑉)‥♡

So far, this book is really to my liking. The plot is smooth, the characters are well drawn and their IQs are all online. Basically, each character has a distinct personality, and there is no brainless plot. The main thing is that the card setting is quite interesting and the game scenes are also exciting. It doesn't have the most awesome setting of the protagonist. It feels like it's a growth-oriented one which is great👍🏻. I hope it's not impossible to not have a heroine or brotherly love! Come on, please update more every day [blowing kiss]

I have never read a book of this type before, but after reading it, I thought it was very interesting. The author's settings are very good, and the characters have distinct personalities, which will not make people bored. There is no brainless man who is not just seeking death, and there is no obvious nymphomaniac. The male protagonist is not a cookie-cutter cool guy, nor is he the kind of bastard who makes people slap in the face. This male protagonist is me It's nice to see him being gentle and yet casually domineering, just like the solo photo of the male protagonist described in the article. He is really handsome. You can most intuitively feel the handsomeness and domineeringness of the male protagonist without actions or words. Unlike other articles, I just feel greasy. The author's writing style is really good. Come on, I want to keep reading, don't give up on the article.

"I am the only young man today"——Xu Zhiwen Not to mention his reputation as a talented young man, wandering around the streets and defeating a generation of geniuses; not to mention his strong sense of security, inheriting the Chinese teacher, melting into the heart of a child, and passing on the chapter of the times; just his elegance, gentleness, kindness to others, and winning hearts, became Cupid's arrow piercing my heart. He is capable of joking and teasing, and does not have the burden of beauty caused by distance like a god. He can integrate into the group and play with them without any resentment. However, when needed, he can have a clear mind and a calm mind. He also has absolute control over the team and unconditional trust in his teammates. He is a natural leader and leader. The setting of this book is very unique. Unconstrained imagination has become the main theme of the development of the world. The dream of competing for beauty and a hundred schools of thought comes true, bringing a dream-like experience to the world. It has an architecture that has not been fully developed, and has many skill attributes that can be used for innovative settings... I hope that in the future journey, they can open up their own Avenue of Stars, and he can achieve his unique Chinese era.

No cp + genius + no pretending to be a pig to eat a tiger + gentle character + some ancient and mythological elements Help🆘, it's rare to see a book like this, it really doesn't pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger! Please believe me! ! ! Even if the protagonist has this idea, he will definitely be pressed to death by the protagonist's friends in the cradle. Ask him what it feels like to have a conspicuous bag as a friend (actually, the main reason is that the author does not allow pretending to be a pig [smile]) And there is no ambiguity (＞＜) Anyway, I haven't seen any ambiguity at the moment, and I haven't seen any signs of CP (if there is any later, I will make up for it with a second review). The protagonist is really gentle, that kind of gentle and kind-hearted character who sometimes laughs and plays with friends! Really love it! In fact, some people complained that the protagonist's friend who grew up since childhood was too conspicuous and a bit annoying, but I think it's okay. From another perspective, he helped the protagonist give up the idea of ​​pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger! I haven't seen any big poisonous spots so far (I hope there won't be any in the future) OK! Finally, I would like to thank the author for updating~~! [Blowing kiss]

I highly recommend this book. It perfectly portrays my imagination of mythology. It is not the kind of book that is enjoyable to the end and invincible from the beginning like other books. But one step at a time, very exciting. I can't explain it in words, I feel this book is like a close friend [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

[Like] [Like] I really like the world view setting of this book. [Blank card + material (main card) + material (auxiliary card) + world view card] is well-founded. Card battles, friendly discussions between classmates, talent contests, mentor guidance, and the upcoming world competition... [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] Chinese mythology, which has been passed down and adapted through multiple dynasties and stages for thousands of years, has many versions, with many supporters from every angle. The author uses mythological characters to create cards, and combines his own opinions with the rationality of the card settings, and also provides notes and explanations, which is great! If you don't agree, there's nothing to complain about. I hope the author will continue and not give up [almost crying] [almost crying]

I opened it casually and was attracted immediately. The setting is very novel. Anyway, I have never seen it before. I became addicted and finished it in a short time. I have reached this point. Nice! ! !

Great! Really great! This is the first time I read a card novel. I feel that the author is a veteran. The characters are well established, the plot is well written, and the writing style is really my favorite. The only drawback is that there are too few updates and it is a serialized article ( ;´д`). I rarely catch up to the end of serialized articles, and I rarely write book reviews. I hope the author can finish it well and maintain the current level.

It looks good, I hope it doesn't end badly. A slightly slower update is acceptable, but it must not be unfinished.

It's beautiful. I love reading this book. The subject matter is quite novel and the author's writing style is also good. Welcome everyone to join our Xu Zhiwen fan group and hope that this book will have a better future [laughing][laughing][laughing]

How to say? The subject matter is very good, the idea is good, and the writing style is also good. But now, you have few words, and there are not many people complaining about it. In the future, if you have more words, there will definitely be a lot of gossips, such as the mythical Houyi Dae, Taigang Bronze, etc. Even if you write no grade, they will be selective. Ming, and the reason why I gave four stars is because I feel that many aspects of combat and card making are just a quick brushstroke, without a process, which makes it a bit uncomfortable. Of course, it may be that I didn't read enough, but I'm sorry that I didn't support you in describing it carefully, so I gave it four stars.

I really like [Love][Love][Love], my favorite novel of the same type that I have seen after "Star Card Master", but it is a bit short, I hope you can write more, it is not enough to read. [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] Come on ✊ [Please update] [Like] [Love]

It's a very novel setting. Genius Gambit is really my favorite [blowing kiss], but it's not all mindless and cool. Who doesn't like a protagonist who has good looks, strength, and teammates. The characters are also very distinct, each with his own characteristics, and his style will not be suppressed just because he appears next to the protagonist. It's really good-looking, but it's too short. I look forward to it [Adoration] [Love] [Love] I really like it without a heroine😍Please don't have a heroine. I read a fanfic before and it was labeled without a heroine at first. Then I added a heroine for some reason. The heroine has no connection with the heroine at all. They haven't even met for a few times and they started to forcefully cue the love line. It made me extremely uncomfortable to watch it😣. I hope you don't have a heroine [Love]

I personally like to read card-type books, especially Chinese Mythology, but the number of words is a bit short, so please come on, I'll wait for you with seven updates a night (=^^=)

It feels pretty good from the beginning to the end. Whether it's daily life or combat, it's okay. Some places are handled just right. There are no cliche plots and characters. It's great to write your own style. Seeing that now, I don't ask for being able to transform into a tentacle monster code character, I just ask for it not to stop, come on, you are very good, as long as you don't fall into the inferior category later, write at the current pace, improve your own plot outline, step by step, that's it. Although it doesn't have the invincibility of traditional Shuangwen, it still gave me a good feeling. If there is a female protagonist in the future, I hope it will be carefully polished and studied carefully, otherwise the rhythm may be disrupted. Moreover, you can make the protagonist's cards and worldview wider and larger, creating some weird but good cards. [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] Come on

It's a rare card text that doesn't have so many tricks and endless slaps in the faces of top players and villains. Even the opponents are generally in a healthy competition. As the protagonist, Xu Zhiwen is a white-blooded person who cherishes life and enjoys it. He is content and youthful in getting along with his teammates and classmates. All of them have the lively energy of young people and are youthful and natural. Each character has his own characteristics, and his personality is distinct and not stereotyped. The article is not watery, there is not too much nonsense, and there are occasional jokes, so the reading experience is very smooth. And there are also hidden clues, just a few strokes, which are easy to overlook without looking carefully, such as the student Wan whose work was destroyed, Beiyuan where there are many aristocratic families, the secrets of the secret realm, etc. ~ I hope that the following authors will maintain their standards and not be too supervised, and update more often, preferably 100,000 updates a day [Thoughts]

This is the first time I read a novel about cards (?). I read it in one afternoon. It's very interesting (´◊ω◊｀). I quite like the writing style. It's just a bit lacking hhh, not enough to watch, please support the author✧(≖ ◡ ≖) The author is even more slow, basically one chapter a day. I don't know where he went during this period. I haven't updated it for several days. If you want to read it, I suggest you add it to the bookshelf for a while and then read it. I still won't change the rating because I really like this book [face covering]

Ouch! Love love love love! Please don't stop updating!

It's very interesting, and it's not ambiguous with women. Then an idea came to my mind while I was reading it. After reading chapter 15, I hurriedly came to comment. What would happen if the protagonist got Pokémon, spells to fight back, etc. [Laughing and crying] But it's really interesting. I recommend everyone to read it, but it's a bit short. I will finish it at the speed I read. I really hope the author is a tentacle monster, so that the author can update more than twenty chapters a day [Adoration] [Adoration]

Come on, Dada, take good care of yourself. We are all waiting for you, and we are also waiting for the gentle, sinister and high-spirited Xu Zhiwen. I have been looking forward to the next chapter of Dada! Thank you for your hard work! As long as you don't give up, it's easy to say! ! Love greatly