The Butterfly Lovers Say Nothing

I don't know what to say. It mainly focuses on dialogue. There are no details and it feels a bit empty. The dialogue is a bit long-winded and cumbersome. The previous article mainly focuses on the daily conversations of three male classmates. It should be a novel for newcomers to practice writing. There is still a lot of room for improvement. I suggest that the writing style of the novel be changed. Dialogue novels are not interesting and humorous enough, and they are not attractive. The outline of the main story line must be thought out first, and the background and various details must also be included. Otherwise, it will not be empty enough and there will be no room for imagination. Try to refine the dialogue and do not make it too long. If it is not humorous enough, readers will not have the patience to read on.