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It would be much better if the author wrote less about the evil ghosts in sex. It's unfinished. What's the purpose of writing a life drama world? Did you sell the account or change people? What's the point of writing a life drama?

Yes, the novel is humorous but not vulgar. The plot is still reasonable. I hope it can be maintained. The author is not a novice. It seems that he has searched for information. It is good.

This book is very good. It's better than that book written by Shi Jian, the father of All Heavens and All Realms, which is just like a piece of shit. Two books by that author. These two books are full of shit. I don't know why the translated novel gave him such a high rating. Or is it just that you can buy it with money, or what's going on? Okay, the work has a low rating. Bad works get high ratings. I really don't understand. This book is very good. Come on, author!

Not bad, keep up the good work

Although there is indeed a bit of passion, the overall development is still stable. I try to figure out the protagonist's system and various methods as soon as possible. My personal evaluation is 8.0+ At present, this score is not worthy of the author's level.

If you want to write a review, you can't just write a review. You have to write about the bustling bus when you read these words, about every stranger you pass by, the laughter of the children coming off school next to you, and the small group of people outside the car window you see when you look up. Write about every time the bus starts and every time it arrives, and about how you move to the next place with the flow of people. Write about every fresh and strange person you meet, and also write about your brand-new self every moment.

The writing is very good, but it's a bit unreadable [Chigua] [Chigua]

For the sake of five stars, can you tell me if there is a female protagonist?

Recommended reading, very exciting.

Come on, come on, come on, come on

The writing is good and exciting, but it's just not enough to read. Come on, author!

It's very good. This is the first time I've seen this type of writing that is thoughtful and thoughtful. The protagonist is not arrogant at all. I don't think of others who seem to be so powerful that they can shine all day long. The male protagonist is also very respectful to his teachers, um, that's good, but the female protagonist just needs to be that one.

The character and details are quite delicate

The deep love between father and son is very good

Man, he's a bit handsome

Take my advice, change your next novel, come up with some original plots, and don't rely too much on the original works. After all, there are too many books of this kind. Basically, these plots are too much and boring. You can have a little contact with the plot with Uncle Jiu, but don't be trapped in the framework of film and television dramas. You must create new plots on your own to create your own style.

Give the author points! Personally, I think it's pretty good. Let's read on to get more points.

The author works hard

Personally I feel pretty good

A growth-oriented protagonist, Shi Shaojian's overlord who travels through time and space.

Not bad, pretty good

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The economy can't even create people who are better than itself.

Beautiful, wonderful

Come on, come on, come on

Not bad, looks okay

Not bad. It's the first time I've seen Shi Shaojian written as a good guy.

It looks okay, but I don't like some of the settings.

Thank you to the author!

A relatively novel plot