My Little Pony: I'm Just an Ordinary Pony

It's really good. It feels like watching cartoons at that time. The characters are not broken, and the CP is not messed up like other Xiao Ma stories. It's just that there are too few. I hope I can get more at one time.

I really feel the same feeling as when I first watched My Little Pony. The protagonist Senyu gave me the feeling that he was a member of the protagonist group.

The writing is very good and it would be better if there were more. It is really good. There is no betrayal, world destruction or anything like that. [Like][Like][Like] Overall it's very good

This is a very good, very good fantasy fanfic. In the original My Little Pony novel, Sen Yu was already dead before the plot started, but the author's fantasy kept Sen Yu alive. Fantasy, understand, the author's fantasy that Sen Yu is still alive [smile]

This is the My Little Pony book that I like the most. I can't stand the others. This book is really great! ! It's just a bit missing, not enough to read, the author needs to update it soon! !

[Blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] So beautiful! Author, are you really not considering adding more updates? [Shy][shy] More updates! The beautiful author [sends my heart][sends my heart]

This is really the best pony fanfic I have ever seen. The author's writing style is very good. She vividly portrays the image of "Sen Yu", writes about her tenderness and her indecisiveness. No one is perfect. The author depicts the characters' personalities from multiple angles and shows us a "living" Sen Yu. At the same time, the portrayal of Joanna is also perfect. She is confident and proud, but respectful and loyal in front of the princess, so that she gradually becomes obsessed with it and disregards everything. Delicate language is a prerequisite for the birth of an excellent work. The author has appropriate description of the environment and scenery, flexibly uses narration, constantly fills in the foreshadowing, perfects the background, and designs a brand new country step by step without appearing obtrusive. It adds a special flavor to the original pony plot. This is the first time I write such a long book review. It is just my personal opinion. If you don't like it, please don't criticize it.

This is the book with the highest rating for My Little Pony fanfics that I found on Tomato. This book looks very smooth, but I feel that its plot is not very strong, but very smooth and smooth. It feels like it belongs to the story of My Little Pony. The original characters of My Little Pony, such as Twilight Sparkle, Peach, Rourou, etc., Are actually quite in line with the character of the original work. The current development of the story line of the entire book is actually quite consistent with the original work. I think this book is currently the best My Little Pony fanfic out there (ps: focus, I personally think, don't criticize, I'm right if you criticize, everyone has their own preferences for carrots and vegetables, so don't criticize me, this is just my idea.). Let's just say, at the moment, the only flaw is that it's a little short. But, after all, it's a new book, but it can't be too demanding. Is it okay to have three chapters a day? If it doesn't work, I can just update two chapters a day. Also, I hope I don't want eunuchs anymore. Please keep working hard. The author is great [Hold]

This My Little Pony fanfic is really good-looking, and the character design of the main character is also good. I really love it. Come on, author. As long as you don't cheat me, I will keep reading.

It's good to watch, but it feels a bit mundane [thinking] and I feel like the main character, like the supporting characters, appears too little in each chapter. Big, please give me more [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] It's not enough [I'm almost crying]

I like this book very much. The author has restored the character of the characters in the original book very well. It's like really watching My Little Pony. I hope Senyu and Twilight are CPs. Yue CP is super easy to beat, okay! ! 😄😄☺😘😘

The author is really very detailed. My Little Pony has exactly 6 colors of pony logo, but the rainbow has seven colors. The missing color is exactly green. In the original book, this color should represent the forest or nature, and the author captured this detail very keenly. Many parts of this novel are completely consistent with the original plot line. This novel is really beautiful! The author's writing style is also very good. He knows a lot about My Little Pony. It feels like watching a My Little Pony extra. The summary is particularly good. You must read it!

It's really good-looking, with rich characters, but the only regret is Joanna. It's a pity that Senyu can't wait for her high priest after all, and the high priest can no longer wear a crown for her princess... [Crying] [crying] [crying]

Super awesome! The character design is well controlled! Woooooooooooooo⊙ω⊙Add chicken legs i love you love you

It's very beautiful. All the characters in it are non-ooc and very immersive. The little Maria written in the book is exactly the same as the one in the cartoon. Senyu is a beautiful, strong, gentle and lovely pony. In the book, not only Twilight Sparkle, Pinkie Pie Ponies such as Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, and Applejack are growing up. Senyu also understands his responsibilities and grows up in the company of his friends. I think this is a group portrait article from Senyu's perspective. This book is as beautiful as a childhood cartoon.

This is my first time writing a book review because I really think it is well written. Just looking at the storyline, I gave up immediately when I wanted to code the words. If it were me, I would never be able to figure it out. When I watched it, I felt like I was on the scene. I was suspicious of Senyu's identity and worried about her performance. The description of the language is very accurate, such as follow the horse, don't leave the horse, etc., Which is seamlessly connected with My Little Pony, and the author seems to be watching My Little Pony while writing, which is not much different from what I remember, so I read it again [smile] Secondly, the character of Senyu is written very much like our contemporary young people, haha. This work is my favorite among the few novels I have read. It is very touching. I don't know why I cried at the end (you know, I have almost no tears). The last time I stayed up late to read it and was so moved was when I read the comic "The Phoenix Is Above". I originally wanted to read some romance novels, but I saw this work at a glance. After reading more than ten chapters, even I, who don't like to read My Little Pony, gave it to my family. (Also, can I publish this work in xhs Amway? I want more people to see such a good work [crying])

Reviewing after reading it is the most perfect interpretation of how well written this book is. The writing is really good, and the twist at the end is really good. If you watched My Little Pony when you were a kid, you must read it. Really pretty! If you like My Little Pony and can't find what you like, I really think you can give this one a try. I sincerely recommend it. Both the plot and the characters are very good.

This is really the first pony fanfic I have read in Yangshizi. Generally speaking, it is okay. However, there is not much innovation in the narrative development of the story and plot, which will make you feel tired. Although it also brings an immersive effect, I still feel that innovation may be better. Although it makes Sen Yu seem to be an outsider, but he occupies an important position. This kind of development is good, but in fact it can be more subtle. Although there is a line about the identity of the protagonist, the original plot still maintains a simple narrative. This is also the source of the fatigue, except Regarding the definition of the protagonist, in fact, there can be more subtle settings, more changes, more research, more innovation, or a little reversal and passion. Perhaps the headquarters work is not plain, but sublimated [Like] (Personal opinion, some things may not be right, please don't criticize)⊙⊙

This book is wonderfully restored. All the horse designs are not broken, especially the original story between the heroine and Joanna, which makes the image of their relationship fuller. The only regret is that Joanna stabbed me to death later! ! ! 😭

This book is my number one. The author's writing is very good. The ponies' personalities and speaking styles are well described. And Joanna, it's really hard to calm down. Everything she did was for her Highness. She always protected Senyu. When she disappeared I really cried to death. I have never cried while reading a novel. In the extra chapter, Senyu didn't save her even though he saved her [crying]. But as one reader said, "She walked away in Senyu's arms. She reconciled with her Highness and she resolved her obsession." So her ending is not that be. "Don't worry Joanna, I will take your share to see the bright and prosperous era in the future" [crying] I really can't let go of Senyu, Joanna, M6, and all their horses (except for the yellow devil [Punch Out]) Goodbye :-)

It's beautiful. I really like the character of the forest princess. She is rational and intelligent, and her gentle yet playful temperament is very cute. However, I hope to give her more opportunities to develop. I always feel that she is a bit weak. The magic is basically restoring to the original state and teleporting. When encountering a villain, she is teleported or influenced. I want to see her defeat the villain with her strength (not necessarily the villain in the main plot, the above are all personal opinions, please do not criticize). It is not like a cool novel about a heroine. It is a bit like growing up step by step. There is quite a lot of foreshadowing in the early stage, and the author slowly fills it in.

It's so beautiful. The author's writing is so good. Each environment is followed by another plot [blowing kiss]. Some people are talking nonsense and the plot is too watery. It's all based on copying, which doesn't mean you have to read it carefully [smile]. Every chapter is very interesting and I haven't skipped it. Please don't affect the comments of newcomers on the book by those Internet trolls [smile]

It's so beautiful. Senyu is just like the original pony in the original work. There is no sense of dissonance. The author's writing style is also very good. I love it. ૮ ´͈ ᗜ `͈ ა♡

This book is really well written, the plot is smooth and coherent, and the characters are close to the original version. But why did I write so much and then it was gone? I haven't read enough of it. There is also a theatrical version and a parallel world of peace (anthropomorphic version of the world)!

The whole book is themed around Little Maria. The main character in the book is a forest pony named "Sen Yu", a forest princess to be precise. The author will write it in almost every episode and add "Sen Yu". Sen Yu is actually written based on the author's feelings and contains his own feelings. In addition, the author, like most girls, allows readers to be immersed in the scene and feel that they are the forest princess named "Sen Yu". The sense of substitution is very strong. Finally, I hope the author will update it soon. It is really beautiful.

This book is at least the best of all the fanfics I have ever read! ! ! There's no OOC, it fits the character very well, and I really, really like Joanna's character! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration] (I can't be the only one who likes it). My favorite is the part about Joanna's memories. Come on, Qianshui! ! ! [Sending Hearts]

The author vividly expresses the characters, and it is very consistent with the style of the original work. The original characters in it are not OOC at all. It can be said that you can imagine the scene when you see what they said. I believe that if you are not a senior My Little Pony fan, you will never be able to write a work that is so close to the original work. This is also the first fan fiction that I have ever cried while reading. I watched "The Deep" in the cinema yesterday and it was slightly better. (Hahahahahahaha, there's another one I can't help but feel sad about! My dear baby Joanna😭)

I really think it looks great! I originally thought it was a warm relationship story, but I didn't expect to be stunned by the knife in the end [crying], my Joanna (ಥಥ)! ! ! My feelings are hard to calm down(つД`)! ! !

This is really great, perfectly restored. At the beginning, I was afraid that the protagonist would be forced to be the protagonist and change the original work, but I didn't expect that the author directly gave the protagonist another identity. It's really great and more beautiful! ! ! You will really lose money if you don't watch it! ! ! (There will be more points [shy][shy])

It looks good, it looks good, I love Senyu! However, I feel that the ending is still a little sloppy, but it is really good to watch. Joanna, I can't calm down, I'm crying to death. And what about the follow-up that the author said there would be no knife? Why did you stab me again and again with the same knife?