Just Back from the Primordial World, I Shock the Campus Beauty with Immortal Arts

I'm convinced. Can you please write properly and not write about "Honghuang"? It's very annoying. The beginning is so good, but half of it is wasted when it comes to the Dragon Girl. If you forget about the Dragon Girl and write about Nuwa, at worst, you can take your niece to visit "Honghuang".

Why must we describe what happened in the prehistoric times? This is a bit unsightly.

I wrote an urban article, but you wrote it as a prehistoric novel, and you became a saint. What I want to read is an urban article, not because you recall how you lived in the prehistoric times? You didn't even write a single bit of it, just the first few pictures, and not the rest. You might as well just change the name and give it a template protagonist, who traveled before the prehistoric novels appeared. You don't know the plot of the prehistoric novels, and you are a straight man. This is a novel from a long time ago. You just used it to renovate that one. It was written by someone who knows the history and a strong boy who doesn't know the history but has a strong emotional intelligence. Don't you think it's good? You are just making headlines and deceiving people. You have already said that returning is a saint, but you have not seen what benefits you, a saint, can bring to the development of your children? You brought a gold mine, but it won't work anymore. You write a woolly article again, but you didn't even write about how to deal with the gold pot? I have been writing about how the black and red will develop? How to develop? Can you just change the title? During my prehistoric years, just change it like this, don't write a little bit, hehe, just bring the saint's cultivation to the city

It's nice to watch, but why does the plot feel a bit familiar?

It shouldn't be said, the subject matter is very novel and the content is very attractive.

This is the only book I read without skipping a beat, cheers to the author, Ollie.

It was originally written about Blue Star. I have written a lot of prehistoric times. In general, this book is not good. If I want to write it, just a little bit of prehistoric times is enough. Or if it doesn't work, change the title of the book and call it time travel back to the Blue Star to show my niece the prehistoric world.

Your name should be Memoirs of the Wilderness

Come on! Awesome

5 Stars for you, cheers up, [laughing][laughing] My personal suggestion is to write about the city or go to Chaos Bar, you really have no desire to look at these memories [face covering][face covering][face covering]