Beast Control****************

It's really a good book. I call it a great book about controlling beasts. It's all sweets, without any knives. It's very enjoyable. [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] I started reading it last night. I watched the little green worm being subdued at 8 a. M., And at 5:30 I saw the little green worm turning into a dragon lady... The shortcomings may be the abruptness of the emotional line, and the alienation and unfeeling towards female characters other than beast pets. It may not be in line with my own inner thoughts. Maybe after re-reading, I will feel that this character should be treated in this way. The main characters are all vividly portrayed, especially the white sick girl, who left a deep impression, and the whitewashing was also very successful. It is worth recommending. No knife, just a feeling of pleasure [full] [full] [full] I don't believe it, I don't believe it, why does it have to end so quickly😭😭 There are obviously still many stories to write, and there are obviously so many futures [crying] I really like this book. Although its rating is not that high, it attracts me more than those books with higher ratings. I hope to see you again [almost crying]

After reading these chapters, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, turned off my phone silently, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 collector's edition Nongfu Spring, held it tightly in my hand, and slowly walked to the window. The scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my mood, heavy, very heavy. It was raining lightly in the gray sky. Why was my vision blurred? I don't know if it was because I was crying or because it was raining harder. It's possible. My mood became even more melancholy. I could no longer suppress my inner emotions. I opened the window and shouted out the window: Just update a few pictures. Who are you looking down on? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's officially debuted. I hope readers who like this book will turn to the last page in the past few days. Thank you all.

Like it very much! ! What a cool article! ! !

Where is the author, people, come out It's so bad [angry] [angry]

Good looking very nice

Why doesn't the Elf Queen delete the memories of those two people? This would be harmful to the protagonist.

I personally think your plot and the conception of many characters are good, but there is a big problem, that is, the article has no tension - many things are objectively stated, and there are too few language descriptions, detailed descriptions and action descriptions, which makes it difficult to leave a deep impression on people. The plot also has a strong appeal to people and is difficult to resonate with people, and it is difficult to create vivid and vivid characters. For example, some of the plots about sacrifice for the righteousness were really difficult for me to be moved by. They felt unreal at all because they were all objective narratives. Of course, I am not completely denying it, but I am just making suggestions. I still think the plot concept is very good, including the image concept of the characters. They will not all be bad guys, and they will not be mindlessly ridiculed. Also, first, interspersing daily writing will make the story more interesting, the characters more fleshed out, the plot more reasonable, and the rhythm can be comfortable or tight. I wish the author's next work will be even better and look forward to ing...

Not bad, I feel like the protagonist has a good personality

I originally read the spiritual pet novel "Three Days to Kill the God". I thought that one was better, but it ended early. When it was over, I flipped down and read this book. When I first read this book, I didn't think it was very good, because I had read many novels of this type before, maybe because it took so long to just start with Xiaolu, and it was upgraded. It was too slow, and I always felt that the protagonist would be abused later on, and there was a vague feeling that the protagonist was not good enough. I don't know how to put it, but when Gui Gui appeared, I thought this book was going to be good, because I guessed that it might be a foreshadowing later, so I gradually started reading it. I happened to be at work that night, and I didn't have any novels to listen to, so I turned on my headphones and listened to this casually, and gradually I fell in love with it.

It can be seen that the author's writing style has grown. The writing is really getting better and better... The only dissatisfaction is that when the introduction says nine, you really only wrote nine (｀Δ´)! I wrote so many female characters with such great designs, why not accept them? >O<Obviously after writing so much, they also expressed that they like the protagonist! If I don't accept it, it will be a happy ending, which is really disappointing (›´ω`‹). I really like Bai Yangjiao٩(♡㉨♡ )۶ But I think the character writing is the best one\^O^/Like 😍 Like 😍 Like 😍 Like 😍 Like 😍 Like 😍 Like 😍 Like 😍 Like 😍 Like 😍 Like 😍 Like 😍 Like 😍 Like 😍 Like 😍 Like 😍 Like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like 😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍 Like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like😍like 😍 Like 😍 Like 😍 Like 😍 Like 😍 Like 😍 Like 😍 [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] Even the inexplicable sun god who appeared at the end has been accepted, so why not accept her! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Draw a circle and curse the author! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Update quickly or I will go to the author's house to steal the toilet [angry][angry][angry]

Well, this beast-controlling novel is one of the best novels about beast-controlling that I have ever read, definitely no more than three.

The real highlight of this book is when the deer changes form.

─=≡Σ((( つ•̀ω•́)つDynamic light waves beep beep!!!

Overall, it's pretty good-looking, relatively novel (but a bit watery). In some places, as long as you accept the settings, you can still watch it.

I am also writing a novel about beast control. If you have a chance to communicate, come on!

There are not many books on Tomato that I can read in one go, and this is one!

I have read 1,800 hours of books. I have to wait until the end of other books to read them, or give up on them. This is the book that I have been patiently pursuing except for Dali. I highly recommend it [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

I like this book very much

Two words are "good-looking", especially the character Xiaolu is written with flesh and blood, cute and cute, making people unable to put it down.

Complete, non-toxic, refreshing, medium and fast-paced, it is undoubtedly a good work in the current era of information explosion (in the field of e-books), so the evaluation is also an online review after all, and I give it 5 stars (I love reading it). Also, the ending is very novel: when you finish reading this text, the causal connection is broken.

I've finished this book, it's great. Not much to say, friends who want to read, please move to the essay submission [blowing kiss]

Not bad. I stayed up all night to finish it at 5am. Let me mention the shortcomings. I feel that the character of Bai Yueqian is not very well written. I hope the holes will be filled in later. Also, the gay classmate did not explain what university he went to.

It looks good, [laughs evilly] Although I haven't driven it, it's still very good. But the progress seems a bit slow. The author should work hard to update it [laughing evilly]

It looks good. I have nothing else to say but it looks good.

The author must keep at it, the book is indeed very good!

It feels pretty good, except that there is no heroine.

It looks more and more like Pokémon. When I read the introduction, I thought of Pokémon: Caterpillar, Flame Chicken, Tanabata Blue Bird, Secret Realm, and now they have super evolutions.

It's quite exciting, and having a harem is even better [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing evilly]