After the Soul Exchange of Time Travel, I Was Forced to Open the Book

Damn, there are too many commas in front of you. Can you change it a little? Change the line number. It really affects reading! Also, don't have too many exclamations. If you want to describe him as being very excited, just use the one at the end. You don't need to use it in multiple sentences. Then when changing scenes or other perspectives, you can directly use this symbol - instead There is no need to speak there to express it. Come on!