I Was About to Become an Immortal, and Qingmei Made a Study Plan

Except for the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles, it's pretty good

The writing is very good, keep up the good work! [Laughing] I just hope I don't suddenly stop updating in the middle of writing [face covering]

Five stars, must be a five-star review. It is rare to read a book like this with the return of the strong man. There are no bloody plots or harem-like operations. In short, the overall feeling is that it is very interesting. This book is worthy of my reading. @String pillar Author, I just discovered that a good book I read before was actually written by you. The heart-warming story of Gu Bai and Lin Yuyun's childhood sweethearts. Although it ended in chapter 139, I think it's still a pity that it ended too early. In my opinion, it's too early. It is a good article, and it would be good to continue writing it. However, I forgot about this good book when I was halfway through it. Now that I think about it, I regret it to death. Then you should update this book carefully and don't finish it too early. [Working on manuscript] [Working on manuscript] [Working on manuscript]

It's very interesting to watch and the emotions are delicate. I don't care about the male protagonist's strength at all. I just want to see them fall in love. The only drawback is that I feel a bit ambiguous with my sister. How can I put it, there is no distance anyway.

It's a very nice book. I really like the setting and character of the heroine. (Quietly asking, will my sister be with other men in the future?)

Ask the author where do you live? If you forget to update in the future, I'll come over and remind you. No need to thank me.

It's pretty good-looking, I just like this kind of more everyday look.

It was good to watch, but the ending was a bit sudden, ugh

It feels okay, not too bad, not too good either. Thank you to the author Daba for coding for so long. I hope the author can continue to persevere. [Like][Like][Like][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Love]

There is no bloody world, no hatred of country and family, only a simple life. An ideal life for ordinary people. Time freedom, wealth freedom, power freedom, strength freedom. But it's also out of reach. It's a pity and a wishful thinking that the meaning is not finished. I remember when I was writing compositions when I was young, my teacher emphasized the need for sublimation at the end. But lost normalcy. Where do ordinary people come from with such great ambitions and ambitions? Simplicity is a blessing. [Smile]

It's beautiful, and the techniques are skillful and delicate, making people fall in unconsciously. There is neither a brainless plot like Urban Dragon King God of War, nor the so-called love and hatred. It is completely a sweet love story mixed with the cultivation of immortality.

It's pretty and gives people a warm feeling

So far it looks pretty good, but is this book a single female protagonist?

I hope the single heroine will be added later in the five-star stage The author remembered what you said and I took a screenshot.

After reading dozens of chapters, the male protagonist is not bad at all in terms of character design and description. It gives me a good impression. The female protagonist is also my favorite type who is a bit arrogant but not too arrogant. It is good-looking and is a high-quality book with a single female protagonist. However, the update is a bit slow. The author insists, book lovers like me will have a lot of updates during the winter and summer vacations. (Face covering. Jpg) Yes, the story is a little cliché, but it is still based on daily life. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is sincere and simple. I personally like it very much, and you can see that the author actually still wants to write the main plot, but restrained it. In fact, from my personal point of view, I also like the author's narrative style, which is humorous and vivid. Looking forward to the next book!

I feel like there's something emotionally wrong with this.

It's really painful for someone who doesn't like reading books to accidentally come across an unfinished book.

The subject matter is good, but there are too many "oh"s [rolls eyes] [rolls eyes] [rolls eyes]

It's pretty good, but why do I feel that the rating is lower than some novels?

It's pretty good. The author quickly coded the words [laughing] Author, don't be weak. Get up quickly. How can I order it and watch it [Eating Melon]

I really like this kind of daily writing. That's why the rating is so low.

The character of the protagonist is good, and the narrative style is relaxed, like a gentle breeze.

The ending is mediocre, but the story is very interesting, with small changes in the ordinary daily life. Although there are some holes left unfilled, they are not related to the main story, so it can be regarded as a qualified story. Also, people who like to read ordinary and everyday urban novels with elements of immortality can read it. If you want to watch Long Aotian kill his whole family, forget it. There is no such plot and it is a single female protagonist. It is good to change the taste occasionally.

So far, I personally feel that the writing is good, and the emotional development is pretty good. As for the protagonist's strength, I think judging from it, although there is no explicit reveal or recovery, he should be invincible.

The content is very detailed, but there were a lot of pitfalls dug in the early stage that were not filled in later, and there is really too little plot. But overall, it is very good-looking. Although there are settings such as cultivating immortals, this book feels very relaxing. It is highly recommended to read [][][][]

The writing style is too soft, which is quite good. It seems to be an urban fairy tale, but it just gave me a free and elegant feeling. The first time I saw it was 54, the second time I saw it it was 240

If I didn't post comments and couldn't leave reviews, I really wanted to drop a five-star and leave [smile][smile]

When will the heroine and the hero get married?

Author, you must keep updating (the updates have been intermittent recently, which makes me a little panicked) Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, it's a very good book, you must stick to it and don't end it. Come on

For me, this book is a good choice for nourishing my mind. I have read too many fast-paced books.