HP Travels Through Time and Becomes a Big Bat

Is there any cp? Isn't it Nantong? I don't recommend this book very much. The plot is very explosive. 1. Snape was killed by the foursome, and the time traveler was reborn as Nantong. Her boyfriend is Sirius who killed her, and Sirius is on top 2. Lily broke up with James after Snape was killed. But! After the breakup, Lily became pregnant with James' child. Then I stopped watching it. The setting was pretty good, but it was too outrageous.

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This time, my wife's article must be rated 94 points. Don't ask me why, because I clicked on it on the highway and was deducted six points. After returning home, I rushed to the field at home, kicked away the cow next to me, and plowed ten acres of land while crying. A passerby asked me why I was crying. I read my wife's article to him. He knelt down, kowtowed on the ground a few times and exclaimed loudly. This was the god himself coming down to earth to feed everyone. Please tell me how beautiful my wife's article was. I cried in bed for four hours, collapsed 16 times, hit the wall 134 times, scratched my arm 397 times, hallucinated twice, auditory hallucinated three times, and slapped myself 79 times. I had a near-death experience once. I passed out just now. When I woke up and saw that it was dark outside, I suddenly collapsed again because I couldn't figure out how my wife's writing could be so beautiful😭 (so can you update it more?)

I would like to solemnly declare that this review is just for demining and has no other meaning. I have read a few chapters so far, and really, I must listen to the author's demining! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! If you haven't listened and like the original work by HP, it is still recommended not to read it, otherwise you will be in the same mental state as me. The author is absolutely right, it is really a bit OOC, and your pupils will be shaking after a few moments. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. It's terrible! Sorry, author, I should have listened to you. Oh [crying] [rolling on the ground] [slapping me wildly, you should have listened] [kowtow to admit your mistake] In the end, the author's writing style is actually quite good, and the character description is also quite good, but it is really OOC (the only flaw) that the author mentioned at the beginning. My comment is not malicious (humble), I just sincerely want to clear the air for other HP readers. Don't be disobedient, and don't be curious to read it just because of my comment. (Of course, if you go to see it, I won't stop you. After all, then I won't be the only one who is so naive that I don't listen to advice [dog head])

A very new idea, it will definitely be a good book to write down.

So far, I think it's been great. I hope the author will update more.

This HP novel is so well written, and the characters in it are also very three-dimensional! The plot design is also good, and I won't lick the protagonist. It's written at the beginning that it's time travel. I don't understand why some people say that Sri Lankan religion is not Sri Lankan religion. Do they still have to write it like the original plot? It's a pity that there is no cp. I actually hope that there will be some emotional scenes later. When I saw Professor Si die, I felt like I was missing out. The next thing should be about Professor Si's children! Looking forward to it! Dog author! Update quickly, one chapter a day is not enough, and the updates are discontinuous! ! !

Nice! Really pretty! Like! Looking forward to falling off the horse, hehe, after falling off the horse, he will become the head of Slytherin, right? Will the Potions class be taught by a professor then (I think Lily is more suitable for the Defense Against the Dark Arts class)

The author believes that although this is not the best life and ending of Snape's fantasy, it is my favorite ending. You are so great!

The overall reading is still very good, the subject matter is relatively novel, and the characters are well created. Although some settings cannot withstand careful study, they do not affect the reading. It's a good book to pass the time, but it's not finished yet and I can't get enough of it. But there is a small suggestion First, when new characters or new settings are introduced, I hope that the story can be briefly explained in the article. Although the settings have been added in the circle, there is still a feeling of "missing the plot" while reading the article. If it is difficult to add some simple settings introduction text, you can also try using brackets in the text or at the end. For example, if Sifu's three cubs were added to the previous article to talk about Sifu's experiments and interactions with the cubs, and the origins of the cubs, it might not feel so abrupt when they see their official debut and transformation into humans later on. The second is the foreshadowing. When I read the comments section, I found that I was not the only one who felt that there was a problem with Seaver's left hand and he was replaced by a robotic hand very suddenly. It felt like something was missing from the plot. It might be more natural if a little more description like "Siver feels stiff and uncomfortable with his left hand" is added in front of it. However, Sifu's lower limbs and right hand are a little more natural later on. The above are just some personal suggestions. It does not mean that the author has good Chinese skills or is not good. They are just some feelings of a reader after reading.

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Well written! Like it very much! No cp is the best, it's so awesome, it's very beautiful! [Blowing a kiss][Blowing a kiss][Blowing a kiss] Apart from Sirius being a little bit annoying earlier, I also hope that Harry will not become like James in the future. Author, please do your best to code the words [Like][Like]

What a good book, calm and serene, and everyone is very alive. See the characters in HP understood from different perspectives. For example: Lily really doesn't like Potter (I never understand why she likes Potter, especially when her friends are being bullied. I always feel that Snape should occupy a different position in Lily's heart, a feeling that goes beyond love. More like a family member and a traveler). Lily also felt guilty and self-blame for the death of her parents, and took her own responsibility, living strong in troubled times with her sister. I also think Lily should be a brave, strong, and righteous Gryffindor without losing warmth. There is also the equal respect that is unique to the non-magical world. She should be a little sun, lighting up many people's world.

A book worth reading with interesting content and novel settings I personally like Snape very much. His words "Always" captured my heart, just like hearing "I will love you forever and ever" in "You are beautiful" made my heart tremble. From then on, I liked Snape very much. Although the Snape in this article is very sad, a genius was buried in a cold and deep lake at a young age and was not found until a long time later, but he is no longer him. "Sunflowers have a very good flower language. As soon as I see no one else, you are everywhere. When I have you, you are the sun, and I can't take my eyes away; when I don't have you, I look down and see no one." Snape chased his sun like a sunflower, but after all, the sun was too bright and hot, and burned the fragile flowers that chased her. He will fall into darkness and you will return to light. I also like the author's characters very much, but I feel that the overall story is a bit group portrait, everyone looks like the protagonist, and sometimes the writing is boring. I still really want to see the interaction between their family. Maybe because all three are man-made, the mood swings are not that big. When seeing Snape resurrected Another thing I want to ask is, isn't Yu Mo Chinese? And why his appearance after rebirth is said to be the same as before, but also said to look like Snape? This is a bit of a bug, but I understand that Snape and Yu Mo are similar in appearance. But I have to say that overall it is a good book. Maybe the introduction is not strong enough, which is why I discovered this book when I was preparing for the exam! It made me unable to concentrate on the exam [shy] The author is so annoying~

I found this book while searching for a book. It is worth reading. It is much better than many books that lose interest after reading two chapters. Anyway, it is a book that can be followed. However, I feel that the pace of the plot is relatively slow, and I personally feel that it is quite close to the original work.

The writing style is very good, and the ideas are also very good, but maybe I can't stand Harry because it's too miserable. After all, even his mother loves him and so on... I just feel that Sijiao is no longer Sijiao, which is a bit annoying.

I feel that except for the role of Cat Girl, which is not OOC, the others are more or less OOC. The logic is gradually being rounded out, but it was a bit unbearable in the early stage. Everything else is pretty good. It's just that I haven't watched Gossip for a long time. It's my fault that I didn't watch the trailer. Goodbye

The introduction may not be great, but the content is great. I love this style of Professor Snape so much.

The first time I saw Snape and Sirius [Love] and I particularly wanted to see that Potter knew the story of the Godfather and Professor Snape. Come on update! I really want to see what happens after Sirius escapes! ! Come on, author! ! !

I hope there is a cp, I know there is no cp, but after reading it, I feel so bad in my heart, I hope there is one, I just hope, please the author, it doesn't matter if you don't have it, as long as you don't be too harsh, I will always support you. I have been reading your book since the summer vacation, and I hope it will have a good ending. It's the later stage. Let's see if it can be cut with the knife.

My family, who knows? I came across a super nice book today.

I think the most classic image in this book is Lily. Lily's image in this book is very three-dimensional and vivid. It can be said that she is the character I admire most in this book.

This is my favorite book so far. I won't get tired of it at all (˵¯͒¯͒˵). The other HPs all follow the same routine. My wife writes it very well (♡⌂♡). I have to keep it up~

No, no, the content in it is still too exciting for a conservative person like me (although I grin every time I read it), but I still can't accept it, the author is great. [Shy][shy][shy]

I didn't like the original characters very much, but I have to say that this book is very attractive to me. As someone who doesn't like the trio very much, when I read it, I didn't think there was anything wrong with me or other people's views. When I read the comments, I didn't see anyone protecting the trio. Everyone has decent views.

I think Lily is a very good person. The only shortcoming is that it is difficult to think about things from Snape's perspective, but it's hard to say because they are only 17 years old. Apart from this general direction, there is no problem. They are just friends. To put it harshly, Lily Evans has many friends, but she still regards Snape as more important, otherwise she would not have tried to persuade him several times. (Of course, this is very naive. She only sees black and white, and she is still too young.) I see many people scolding her and I don't understand. She is a pure lily. If she really has the slightest selfishness, can Snape like her? Also, she didn't do anything. To be honest, she stopped him many times, but it was obvious that she was not a person who supported violent law enforcement, and many times Snape was bullied without her knowledge. Overall, communication was not enough, so it is best for good friends to be honest with each other.

Can the author update it soon? It's really beautiful, I can't get enough of it! ! But some plots are really useless, such as the drunken scene between Snape and Sirius, and the plot between Potter and Lily.

Come on, update as soon as possible. I was stumbling over other books before, but now that I think about it, you are still so good-looking. I caught up with you all at once before and haven't updated yet, so I had to stop and read other books. I hope you can understand.

YYDS! ! ! ! The author works hard to update! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Ah, that's great. The author wrote it so well.