Evolution Begins When I See Health Bars

There is a beginning and an end, so stick to finishing this book. 💕💕

I originally wanted to endure it, but I couldn't bear it after seeing the data was secretly changed for the third time. Data flow novels require rigor But this is 🍅, so the author tolerated some small calculation errors similar to data increase. But your inconsistency is really disgusting. For example, upgrading from level 4 to level 5 requires 1,000 raw crystals, but later it only costs 800. Forget it all, the most intolerable thing is the Blood Shield Technique It's really Schrödinger's Blood Shield Technique. It starts with converting 15 points of defense value The second time it appears, it suddenly becomes 15% of the upper limit of health conversion. At this point, I can still think that you missed a % sign before. But the third time, it directly became 37.5%. I asked you where did this data come from? Practice the blood shield technique secretly and then surprise the world? Although the whole text is written according to the author's intention, if you write data blindly and write whatever comes to mind, completely ignoring the context, then there is still no need to write a data article. Above

Well, it can only be said that it is watchable, but there is no main plot. It is all about upgrading and fighting monsters. Although it has more skills than others, it is not as good as one of the initial skills of others. Moreover, you set the world, but you have been fighting monsters in a small town. Later, the mythical beast that destroyed a big world for who knows how long is inexplicably bound to the protagonist. The skills are also very confusing. The setting is sometimes black iron and bronze, and sometimes it is level 123, and sometimes it is master. There is a missing skill at the beginning that can only be seen on the basic panel, but you can see its health, skills, and effects. For other people's similar skills, you can probably only know the name of the skill, but the level of some skills cannot be roughly detected.

The rating is low because the main character is a loser. The enemies that appear always torture the protagonist to pieces, and the enemies and monsters that the protagonist defeats always escape from the protagonist's hands. Reading this book makes me feel constipated. Abandoned

I can't stand it even if I throw away my brain. The early data was confusing. First it said that upgrading after level 2 would cost 30 raw crystals, but later it changed to 100. Then the blood shield starts with 1:1 blood defense, with a maximum conversion of 15 points, and later it becomes 15% and converted to 22.5. Another thing is to beat the little swordsman. The little swordsman insists on pulling out the sword to make wool. He directly grabs the sword and chops him with it. The little swordsman has 65 health points and 20 damage. You have more than 70 health and 40 damage. He will be killed with two swords and you have to pull it out and let the little swordsman run away. Is this the author suppressing the development of the protagonist?

After reading the comment area, I can see that the author takes his own shortcomings seriously and has a good attitude. It is not too much to give 5⭐ to a novice author. Who doesn't like authors who are getting stronger and stronger! I suggest the author not to write a female protagonist. After all, this is a trap that even some experienced writers can't figure out, and many have died because of it. Beginners should not touch it even more (many authors have learned to avoid touching female protagonists now, or they will marginalize the female protagonist. After all, some readers cannot survive without a female protagonist) There is also the good attitude of the author who took a look at the comment area and took his own shortcomings seriously. It is not too much to give 5⭐ to a novice author. Who doesn't like authors who are getting stronger and stronger! I suggest the author not to write a female protagonist. After all, this is a trap that even some experienced writers can't figure out, and many have died because of it. Beginners should not touch it even more (many authors have learned to avoid touching female protagonists now, or they will marginalize the female protagonist. After all, some readers cannot survive without a female protagonist) There is also the one who made a mistake and made him too strong, which is a bit excessive. Think about it, if I get close to a strong person, I can get all his skill and attribute bonuses by physical contact (equipment bonuses and treasure bonuses without looting). It is recommended not to write about looting skills. Originally, this kind of ability is unreasonable. In other books, there are also bugs or restrictions and weakening. As for the 3 seconds long plunder duration and immobilization effect, I won't complain too much (it's more normal, the power is slowly passing away, I can't wait to chop him with a knife)

Kill a wild monster and whine, Killing an enemy takes 100 chapters, which takes up (about) a quarter of your current length. The hydrology is not like this. As for the setting, did you write it for yourself as the author? Obviously you can only leave after you have set the number of hits. As a result, it feels like everyone can leave at will. What are you setting up for? Is your brain crazy? Even if I look at it without thinking, I will be angry with you. Author, if you don't have a clear outline at least, don't write a novel, okay?

It's quite outrageous. After watching a tenth of it, the only impression left was that he ran away 😅 Either the monster ran away or the protagonist ran away, so I ran away too.

"Even in its heyday, it is no match for me. I'd better leave and go back to the safe house to sleep. When I come out, I'll settle the score with it."

Many things are not explained clearly. And the character development of the protagonist is a mess. The plot can only be said to be watchable, but the descriptions are very poor and the theme cannot be grasped at all. I can only say so-so.