Prehistoric *********

This is also my first time writing a prehistoric novel. If my writing is not good, I would like readers to give me some suggestions.

Above Hunyuan Daluo Jinxian is the way of heaven, which is still far from the great road.

Is this the end?

Author Can't you update a few more chapters [Punch Out][Punch Attack][Punch Attack][Punch Attack][Punch Attack]

What else can be said? 6

This novel can still be improved

I'll give it 4 stars for now, if it looks good, I'll give it another star.

I hope the author will keep up his hard work and not let it go to waste. I found it quite interesting, so keep working hard! The author is Hunyuan Daluo Jinxian. Isn't there also Hunyuan Wuji Jinxian above? If the author sees it, please change it, otherwise it will look awkward. The Hunyuan Wuji Golden Immortal is in the Dao realm.

I won't write this anymore [pouts] You are very good, very good, you successfully caught my attention

Come on! Keep up the good work

This is gone, so little.

I think this book is okay

Okay, the plot can be a little faster. It can be slower until the prehistoric period.

Update for me! ! ! Not enough! ! ! ! [Angry][angry][angry]