Daqin: Self-Exposure of Time Travel, Focusing on Honesty

In 215 BC, the Qin Empire successfully tested the first mushroom bomb in human history. Countries around the world respect the Qin Empire as the Qin Heavenly Kingdom, and regard the Qin Emperor as the common master of mankind. At this point, mankind has completed global unification and opened the magnificent era of stars and seas!

Come on, well written. Ever since I watched Hu Ge's Shinhwa. How could I let a gangster take away the legacy of my eternal emperor? Looking at history, how many people who helped Liu Bang found the country died a good death?

Overall it's okay, the plot is pretty good, and the writing and characters are all there. It seems that there is a female protagonist as expected. It would be better if there were less descriptions, what a wonderful career (doge). Come on, author, if you keep writing like this, the score should come up soon. (Twisted into a ball)

Now that I have read it for so long, it is impossible to evaluate it without being subjective. If you are reading it for the first time, you can reduce it by half a star. This book combines jokes about current affairs. It can be seen that there are really no manuscripts, and they are all written now. It can be felt that the author's writing level has gradually improved and become smoother in this book. So let's draw a conclusion first. The advantages and disadvantages of this book are quite obvious. The flaws do not hide the advantages. Overall, you can take a look at it. It is not as prone to the disease as most of the novels about the period of time in the Qin Dynasty, the kind of disease that the author cannot achieve with his writing skills, but wants to create an epic feeling deliberately, and the result is that it becomes more and more serious. I don't think this is a flaw in this kind of over-the-top Machiavellian plotting, coupled with the facial expression of the characters. Even using nonsensical methods to weaken the political performance of the ancients is actually a very smart approach. It is mainly about not writing if you don't understand it. It is not a bad thing for the readers, and they will not become more and more tired after reading meaninglessly. At the same time, it emphasizes on improving the craftsmanship of the ancients through the inner activities of the protagonist, telling readers that this book will not be too light on the past but heavy on the present. It just has a different focus, and is actually quite sophisticated. As well as the protagonist's out-of-the-box thinking, in my eyes, he is more like a modern ordinary person, with a kind of idea of ​​​​being a middle-aged person after traveling through time. There is neither a heaven-defying memory nor a heaven-defying golden finger. Most of the inventions are just ideas, and the rest is left to the Mohists. Moreover, a protagonist with evil traits seems to me to be relatively real, at least a character that cannot be broken down. Generally speaking, I don't think the ratings of this book will continue to drop significantly in the short term. On the contrary, the ratings for old fans will only get higher and higher. After all, the author has written a daily article, and most of the people who come in to follow up are mainly for companionship. Everything is advancing slowly, and the narrative progress is basically endless. The author can keep writing as long as he is willing. It doesn't really matter what the main plot is, whether it's creating a peaceful and prosperous age or anything else, it doesn't matter. The history after being disturbed by the time traveler can develop in any way, or in other words, the history that happened in real time in my cognition has no main line at all, unless looking back to sort out a context, this book is also the same. From the current point of view, it does not need an ultimate goal, nor does it need all actions and motivations to serve that ultimate goal. The protagonist only needs to complete everything he should or should not do. So I hope the author can write slowly and well. My current experience is no different from watching a road movie. The important thing is also the process. Even the ending of this book is one of the rare ones where I feel that one day I will no longer be able to write it anymore. It would be better to give it an open ending and leave it unfinished forever than to end it hastily. So I hope the author will work hard and look forward to the next update.

The author's portrayal of the heroine is very profound, unlike some novels that are just fluff. As the housewife, Charmaine Ying also had her own little temper from her longing for love at the beginning to her happy marriage with Chen Qing. She pretended to cry and asked her father for resources, worried that her husband was looking for a woman and worked hard for her husband's career. It was true that he put it in his own pocket, but all this was for his own family to live a better life and to better help Chen Qing's career. There was no intrigue with Chen Qing's concubine. On the contrary, he was relieved to know that the mirror was stolen for the king. She has her own ideas, but the perspective is for the better development of herself and her family. Such a good wife is really rare to find [please update]

It has writing, plot, history, popular science, subject matter, brains, and a harem; it has feelings about family and country, and it also criticizes current ills! Are you still not satisfied with reading novels like this on Tomato? ! [Like][Like][Like]

This is one of the best time-travel dramas I have ever seen. The protagonists of other time-travel dramas are all cheaters and get what they want. Our protagonist has to use the knowledge he has to realize his ambitions, promote Qinmo craftsmen, and provide them with ideas for them to do their jobs. It is very good. The history aspect is okay, and it is also quite interesting when combined with realistic plots. The only drawback is that the emotional line is a bit confusing, not very good. I hope the author will write well and update it soon.

In fact, it is indeed a good book. The protagonist kills decisively and has clear grudges. It is not like other novels, which in ancient times still play monogamy, or do not write ambiguous words and then reject the women who come to your door. The author's writing is more in line with the reality. I even doubt if someone deliberately wrote bad reviews. To be honest, the protagonist who writes about history, especially about the Great Qin Dynasty, does not have a system and relies solely on personal knowledge accumulation and adaptability. The author writes in this book, which is already at the ceiling level. Maybe more people read cool articles or mindless ones on this platform. Good novels like this are instead ignored. Buried, this historical novel is definitely the top one on this platform. Whether it is agriculture or technology trees, all aspects are very reasonable. The protagonist only plays a role in promoting, and relies more on the people of Qin to complete the task of enriching the country and strengthening the people. There are many feelings, but I can't express some of them. I always feel that this book is indeed underestimated.

I accidentally became fascinated by it. After reading it in one breath, I remembered that I had not coded the characters yet. No wonder it was so popular. The strings were tight and fascinating. Quick update. I can't stand it anymore. Can't we develop the technology tree properly? Is it good to write about women? One after another, ugh!

The author's name is very enlightening, but it's not enough. Please update me quickly. I haven't read enough of such a beautiful book! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's really good-looking and complete enough. From all aspects, although the book Zhui also has this theme, the writing is too general and the details are not detailed enough. Especially when it comes to making things, just giving an idea and seeing the real thing is a bit too fake. But this book is really well written, with rich and diverse characters and characteristics. Unlike some novels, both good and bad are too classic, have no distinction, and are boring to read. At least until now, reading this book has always been refreshing! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It's pretty good. The negative reviews are basically subjective, and they disagree with some parts of the book. But basically most people won't feel psychological discomfort in those places, and only a few people may find it inappropriate. Others feel that the characters in the book are not very realistic, but they don't know what the characters' real personalities are like, so they just make a final conclusion. If this is the case, then it's okay for him not to read this book. As for the later stage, although the main plot is indeed a bit slow, if the main plot is too fast, wouldn't it be enough to just read the outline? As for saying there are too many women, if you use modern thinking to judge the system of the Qin Dynasty, then I can only say that there is too much control. Most marriages are not about whether they like it or not, but how much benefit they can bring. As for the protagonist's several wives in the book, each one will bring benefits to him, not just the lower body, which is like a marriage, and he just likes them.

The views on the First Emperor and Fusu are still very realistic. Unlike most of the time-traveling warriors who belittle Fusu, the protagonist is dedicated to the people and truly brings him to the bottom of Guizhou. The character description of each person is very good, which is rare in Tomato.

The advantage of this book is that it is refreshing, but it can poison you from time to time, just like you are going to have a big meal and step on dog poop on the way. The writing is not very good, but it can capture the laughter and some points of empathy. It is very good. It surpasses Tomato 90 novels. It is probably middle school and high school. The writing can be exercised and encouraged, and I hope to get better.

How to say it? Because I am a bit obsessed with reading novels, I am disgusted by historical fictions that are too brainless, confusing in logic, riddled with typos, or too individualistic. I will give up reading after a few chapters. For now, this book is within the IQ range, not brainless, the plot is quite compact, and the logic is not confusing. It is still worth reading!

It was fun to watch, but it was a bit sparse. I hope there are fewer princess scenes and I can focus on my career. . I understand why the rating is low. I heard that One Star does not participate in book reviews. You can write well if you want to. There is no need to mix some of your own poor thoughts into it.

The poison test is completed and everything is normal. The protagonist has brains and the plot is reasonable [laughter] It was ok at first but not ok later on. Sorry for remembering to change it so late

Come on, author, I really like it so far. Very satisfied, believe me, you will be popular, please update quickly

I rarely review books, but this is a book that I have been following for a long time and I really like it. The author's writing skills are really getting better and better, and the fluency is getting better and better. Although in my opinion, there may not be too much story framework, but it is really comfortable to read as a daily text, and I even want to urge more [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

The writing is very good, but I think this situation has the potential to develop into a harem novel. I finally found a good novel. I hope the male protagonist can concentrate on his career. He can have CP, but don't develop in that direction. I will continue to follow up.

Not bad, very good. There can be emotional lines but not too many. This book aroused a lot of interest in me. A ten or even nine is a good score. Too much for my liking

@ After reading a little bit, I can only say that the advantage of this one is that it is better than others. It is very real. If there are other advantages, I haven't seen them yet. @ I was wrong. I just finished talking about one of the advantages, and then came a point that shocked me to death. I was almost disgusted.

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This book is really good to read, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would kill him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in Mountain 108: "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good!

I just watched the beginning and am here to review it blindly. Visually, this is what I want to read, but it's a pity that I just wrote it and didn't write much 😭 Come on, author! Tell him the original historical trajectory and then do whatever you can according to your own strength without the golden finger. Whoever deserves to die will be useful. What will happen in the future will be left to the man who dominates the world. I don't understand other people's mentality. Anyway, I read Da Qin's books because I worship the ancestral dragon from the bottom of my heart. As a result, there are so many novels where the ancestral dragon is like a stupid roe deer~ Tsk! I'm so angry that I'm autistic That's right, the reminder downstairs is just right, please comment. I abandoned this book. I don't know what I will write in the future. Well, I have only written a little bit so far. The protagonist's character has become a bit unlikable, and it's not just a matter of emotional scenes. I just happened to find another book about Da Qin. It was written by a young lady, and it suits my taste very well. If you leave, the star rating will not change. It will be regarded as five stars for politeness.

It can only be said that it is not bad, better than those bizarre stories, but not much better. There are several loopholes in the beginning. First of all, no matter which dynasty it is, privately making weapons is a capital crime. The protagonist obviously knows this, but still commits the crime against the wind, which means that he should have done a good job of keeping secrets. After all, if it is leaked, everyone will be killed, and no one will be afraid. Of course, some people may say that there is no airtight wall in the world. No matter how well the confidentiality work is done, it may be leaked. Okay, let's not talk about this and talk about other issues. Since the secret has been leaked, the county guard of this place should be the first to know. He will come to arrest the protagonist and then transfer him to Xianyang. It is impossible for a big shot like Zhao Chong to focus on the protagonist and personally arrest him and escort him to Xianyang. Of course, we don't rule out the possibility that Zhao Chong happened to pass by this place and happened to know the news about the protagonist's secretly making weapons, so he arrested him. But the possibility of such a coincidence and coincidence should be very small, right? Forget it, let's leave it at that. If I keep talking, some people will criticize me again (Humph! It's just a novel, why are you so serious about it? If you have the ability, write it; if you can do it, you can do it, etc.) Finally, let me make one more statement: I give suggestions to help the author write it better, not to simply slander it! Hey! It's true!

Most of the people who write time travel stories based on the Qin Dynasty seem to be assistants, but it seems that they are really willing to surrender to the First Emperor through the ages. In addition, the protagonist in the author's works is different from the fairy-like protagonist who is floating in the world, indifferent and indifferent. Take a look at the duration.

Generally speaking, it can be regarded as the upper echelon of Da Qin literature. The writing is good and the protagonist is unsystematic. He wanted to secretly wait for the death of the First Emperor and then rebel against Hu Hai, but he was discovered in advance. He used his identity as a time traveler to bet on the First Emperor's heart many times. After that, he slowly killed Hu Hai and beheaded Zhao Gao. This is not a one-sided view of some of the previous low-scoring book reviews. I looked at those book reviews and found that I simply didn't understand the book. You can take a look at the reviews. After reaching 150, you can't stop reading. With the wisdom of two thousand years of future generations, we can help the Qin Dynasty prosper for a lifetime.

I read it in one go. I won't say more. It's the first time I've seen it and I want to write a review. It's a great book. It's a rare book. I recommend it.

This book is very well written. Although I have only read 75% of it, I can't wait to review it. The novel is very well written, and the best thing about it is the character creation. It's penetrating, and the character portrayal is superb. The good thing is that it is close to reality and has thousands of faces. The villain has the villain's position, the villain's brains, and the villain's limitations. Instead of mindlessly reaching out to ask for a slap in the face and forcibly advancing the plot, it is a real battle of wits and courage, and everything comes naturally. The good thing is that I use the past to satirize the present, I write novels, and I share patterns.