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You, the author, are really prolific, with new books reaching 30,000 words in a few days.

Alas, you, the author, are obviously very productive. You update three times a day, and occasionally four, but I still feel like you are lacking [laughing] [laughing]

Come on, I want to see marry Kurotsuchi, become a Tsuchikage, unify the ninja world, and overthrow Otsutsuki!

The author's writing is so good

It's really good to support a wave of

I like it, it feels good, I hope this book can make up for my previous regrets. (Expect)

I will personally make a very rational evaluation. The bad thing is that I personally feel that the early stage of the plot feels like it was in Boruto. It can be seen from some old delicacies, such as ice cream, chocolate, beef jerky. After all, they need to be made with high technology. There are still some small details that need to be processed. It cannot be considered 100% processed, but it is okay. The advantage is that the plot description is true. It is lifelike and has the feeling of representing a Chinese class. The way of expression is also very literary and artistic. The emotional lines and character portrayal are also very good. Usually fan fiction will set the story line in Konoha and unfold the story from the perspective of the Oto Country. From a certain point of view, this is also an innovation. Plus the character design has not collapsed. If it can reach this point, it can be considered excellent. Considering that the author is also a new novelist, it is already great.

This book is so touching! I finally read a book that I have always wanted to read. The writing is very good, there is nothing forced to piece together, the logic is reasonable, the plot is attractive enough, the writing structure is also very good, and the story content is also very touching. All the details are well controlled. Although I have only read a dozen chapters, I believe that the following content will not be boring. As a person born "unexpectedly", the protagonist is hated by all kinds of people, but he is lucky enough to "soul" into the four-year-old Deidara. No matter what, this is a book that is very satisfying just to see the protagonist's strength increase, plus various wonderful descriptions, creating a masterpiece! But isn't this real world cruel? All in all, this is definitely the best Naruto fanfic I've ever read.

Very good looking. When will Kurotsuchi grow up?

Come on, author, I love you so much [Thoughts]

I want to see the leg shadow. . . Ah, no, it's Kurotsuchi. Why are you in Konoha? I haven't even stayed in my own village for long.

As a diamond fan of Deidara, you wrote this novel very well.

6666[Admiration] This author must persist and keep writing!

There is no poison in it. I am fine when I get up. It is a good book. Good luck to the author! Don't be a eunuch

I really like this book. Good luck to the author. Come on, I really like this book. Come on, who wouldn't love a prolific author? You are my god ah ah ah O (≧口≦) O

Awesome The author's thinking is very clear.

Finally waiting for you, Deidara

Good-looking, hope not to be yang, disappeared, exam, failed the college entrance examination,, [laughing evilly]

I read Chapter 20 and it was quite interesting. The plot is quite good. I hope that I will have a black soil heroine in the future and not have a harem.

My second Mizukage (crossed out), the Hokage recognizes you.

Deidara (Fourth Tsuchikage) Special mechanism energy bar changing skills The first skill: Short press to throw three clay birds forward and then jump back into the air. During this period, press and attack Deidara to release an additional clay bird and chase forward. Hitting the enemy can accumulate a certain amount of energy. Press and hold Deidara to prepare to explode the clay and quickly accumulate energy. Second skill: Release Didara when there is no energy and throw it forward to grab the C2 dragon and explode it to cause damage. When there is energy, short press Didara will ride on the C2 dragon. The flight time is determined by the remaining energy bar. During the flight, the whole process is hardware and you can move to release basic attacks. Release the first skill C2 dragon during flight and it will spit out a small dragon to grab and explode. Shock again. The second skill Deidara jumps off the C2 dragon. The C2 dragon sprints forward to grab and explode. Long press is the same as the release without energy. Ultimate move: Release the clay clone to grab the opponent and use the clay clone to release c4 Garuda Exclusive Secret Earth Pillar Explosion: When Deidara uses the Earth Pillar Explosion, he will turn into a clay man that will track the enemy for a period of time and explode.

Author, why are you so vain? Only three updates a day are not enough! [Sinister smile]

Not bad, I love it

Come on, come on, come on

Very well written, I like it very much

To be honest, I don't think your writing is particularly good, but I can't deny your achievements.

Come on, good writing! In addition, there is only one star left. I see the shadow of legs, no? ! I'll give it to Kurotsuchi and Deidalane later.

It feels very interesting, five-star praise

I hope it will be a single female protagonist, with rich characters and unique characters. The author will not stop updating, I believe this book will work🔥🔥🔥 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Please, it's really okay. It looks great.