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I have seen the most satisfying male protagonist so far. He has no system, no high learning talent, and is not a time traveler. He has no ambition. He is one of the most satisfying characters in various fanfics. In the end, it would be better if the male protagonist is accepted!

Good-looking, he is my dream male protagonist (currently)

After reading a lot of books, I finally found a cute Hufflepuff⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄

It's the best fanfic I've ever seen. [Like] [Like] [Love] [Love] [Love]

The foursome is exactly the foursome in my mind, and the characters are well portrayed. Although I have not read the original work, my sister and I have watched several of the movies. In addition, I have a general understanding of the characters of the foursome from the fan novels I have read, but I feel that there is something missing. The foursome who read this book cannot be said to be exactly the same as the original novel, but it is still much better than some fanfics with too many stereotypes and unreasonable plots. I also like the male protagonist character! I bet the male protagonist is Snape (because he has a strong sense of CP)

I like it so much. I follow this book every day, but Tom's son is so obsessed with it, why doesn't Snape do anything? Why don't you do something that couples should do? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] After reading this book, I still feel a little reluctant to leave it. Let's just say, author, why did you end it so quickly? Forget it, as long as the author is happy. May Sif and Rahel live a long life and be happy in another world...

It's so good^ω^, I love the two male protagonists (Why do I think the Hill brothers are also interesting? I might be a pervert (*≧ｍ≦*) The ending is so good, woo woo 😭 I can't bear to let it go. It makes me sad when I think that the book I have been chasing for so long has ended, but I will continue to support Dada (｡ò ∀ ó｡) and look forward to Dada's new book (๑˙ー˙๑)

It's so exciting, I hope I can team up with Sri Lanka's teacher for CP

It's very interesting. The author's writing style is exquisite, and it feels as if this should be the real magical world. As a senior Harry Potter fan, the author really satisfied a lot of my objections. Peter did not betray, James was a strict wife, Lily became a reporter, and Sirius entered the Ministry of Magic. Haha Lee grew up healthily, Voldemort finally learned to love, and Draco became a cute and tsundere. It can be said that while reading, my mood was agitated and I laughed out loud because of the storyline. However, when I actually finished reading this book, I felt calm and emotional. Maybe for personal reasons, I always feel that although the whole book has a happy atmosphere, you can see a trace of sadness between the lines (perhaps the sadness is brought out by yourself, after all, I am really touched when I see such a happy ending). Even if you don't read the emotional line, I really recommend Harry fans to read it. Of course, don't read the second ending, just listen to me! Don't look! ! ! ! !

It is a very good novel with the same text. Rahel and Snape are really good at fighting each other. It can be said that the branch line makes everyone's dream come true. It is very good. The only bad thing is that Rahel's parents did not survive because of the traveler. The second branch can be said to be a knife. When watching the second branch, I have always been indifferent to the so-called relationship between Voldemort and Rahel. If it were not for the tampering of memories, then Rahel and Snape would have become a very sweet couple≡ω≡. The second branch has two endings, one can be said to be half a he, and the other is purely a be (why am I such a bitch to watch it...) It can be said that everyone in the second ending is not happy. . . (The above are personal feelings after watching)

It's very interesting and heart-warming, and everyone has a very good ending. However, to be honest, I don't like the second story line very much. Whether it's the death of Harry's parents or Severus's more than ten years of waiting. There is also another branch. The professor once again lost his lover. It's too painful. Maybe I still like a better ending, no. Different people have different opinions. The plot is very interesting and the writing is also very good. The relationship between Lao Fu and Heine really makes me want to laugh. Severus also made many friends during his school days and successfully got together with his true love. The only regret is Rahel's parents, but it would be unreal if there was a real happy reunion. All in all, it's a very nice fanfic. I would like to express my gratitude to the author for his great writing! No, I still want to say, who knows? After reading the first ending, I was happy, and after reading the second ending, I burst into tears. Who has a knife wrapped in candy? The author is so indifferent. Damn, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I was so tortured and cried, how can it be so warm and warm that a knife suddenly comes... [Crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying]

Hey, give me a five-star review~ I feel that the plot development of DaDa is more than a little better than the previous one, and the writing is becoming more and more to my liking. Come on, Da Da ୧⍤⃝🍓୧⍤⃝🌸୧⍤⃝🍎୧⍤⃝🍉

This book is very interesting, but why are there so few people reading it? The protagonist has a very good personality, and the interaction with Snape, Lily, James and others is also great. It has also changed many of the original regrets. Peter has also changed a lot. In short, it is very good. I hope that Harry and his generation will not have regrets in the future. Come on (*¯¯*)

It's quite pretty! The protagonist is a member of the big family, the enthusiastic Hufflepuff, a gentle, graceful and polite little noble! A more everyday pro-generation, I like it very much

Very, very beautiful, but there are no cars, only some car exhaust, [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

The collapse of the original plot is very interesting, and it is the kind of collapse that occurs when one is not under control. I like this setting very much. Originally, I didn't like too many settings for time travellers, but when I saw that there were not many descriptions later, most of them were good people. The author is very humorous, and the sense of humor makes me laugh from time to time. Moreover, the descriptions of various characters in the original work are very exciting and detailed, and it has a sense of picture. Watching their lives seems like there is a parallel time and space, lifelike. The characters are all very cute and OOC, which is also a highlight. It was really fun to watch the fourth chapter when Eileen's character collapsed and the Cruciatus Curse was given to Thomas. Although there was a special extra, it was still quite tragic. The author is not that kind, but he really put his mind into writing the article. Thank you for sending love. But the author is really good at writing tragedies. Tragedies often happen between inconspicuous things and accidents. The people who died in this book made me very sad.

It's very interesting, but I didn't expect it to end so soon. I felt a little empty and confused. The author wrote it very well. It's the best one I've ever read. I'm also looking forward to other books by the author.

So pretty! (It's just a bit sparse and not enough to read) Come on, author! [Send heart][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's very beautiful [Adoration] [Adoration] I hope the author will update more [Blow kiss] [Please update more]

It's very interesting. The first line is good, but after watching the first line and watching the second line, I feel very... Lao Fu doesn't care about his appearance, so he still likes people because of their appearance? But overall, this book is quite good-looking, and the emotional line is quite clear.

It's so beautiful. I'm not a pure Harry Potter fan, but the characters written by the author have a new life that can be called perfect. Maybe this is the meaning of fan fiction. Thank you to the author [love] [love] [love]

9.5 Points. The two male protagonists, CP Severus, are good friends and childhood neighbors.

This is the best fanfic I've ever read. I have read almost all Harry Potter fanfics. But none as wonderfully written. I absolutely loved this book. The writing is also very good. I love this book so much. He is my destiny. He feels so much better than any fanfic I've ever read. (All the above are personal feelings, don't comment if you don't like it)

Beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Great support to the author

It's so nice, I love it so much [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore] [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

This book is really wonderful. The time-travelers in it are not as omnipotent as before. Everyone is not perfect and will have more or less shortcomings. This makes me feel very real. Moreover, he really writes Rahel very gently. In short, it is super beautiful.

Ahhhh, it looks good. I like the first ending better. Everyone has a good ending. Voldemort also has his son. It's not bad. Hehehe. The interaction between Sif and the protagonist is also good. It would be nice if it was more detailed🌝🌝

This book is very well written. It doesn't have any fancy words. It's plain, but it makes people feel comfortable to read. It's eye-catching. The characters have distinct personalities and are three-dimensional and complete. The way to save a person is not to make up for it after he has been hurt, but to contain it at the root. Everyone in this book has a good ending. The male protagonist is a person who doesn't want to work hard, but he is brave and has his own pursuit. It just feels like this book is worn through a sieve. It's really funny. You can also take a look at the Guanyin who sends children [laughing and crying]. Highly recommended!

It's really good to read [Sending Hearts] I feel that the author is very authoritative in HP, because some of the few HP fics that I have read are all written by this author [Sending Hearts] The author is simply my savior of HP fics (I really like Owen and Rahel [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]) [Crying] But I don't know why I wrote the second chapter, and why I wanted to read the second chapter! [Facepalm] It was really painful to watch Go to Part 2 (›´ω`‹) In fact, I watched Go to Part 2 a long time ago, but it was so uncomfortable at the time, it felt like I had eaten a piece of shit (it's not that the writing is bad, it's just how I felt when reading [crying] Maybe some people can accept such a plot) Now I see this The cover of this book does not remind me of any beautiful scenes or emotions, but of the piece of shit in Line 2 [face covering] Maybe I have forgotten what it was about, but it was really uncomfortable when I read it, which makes my heart hurt when I think about it now. I feel like it is really shit. Because of Line 2, I want to delete this book from my bookshelf. I deleted it to prevent my heart from hurting when I saw him, but because what I wrote before really touched my heart so much (›´ω`‹) I couldn't bring myself to delete it and I couldn't bear to do it [crying] [crying] [crying], which makes me feel really uncomfortable now😭 thinking about Rahel, I re-read the second chapter, maybe it's because of the past that I have this kind of feeling How it feels, but I really lingered on it for a long time, but I still didn't dare to start, I couldn't convince myself, it was so painful at the time, what on earth do you want me to do? [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] Can Tomato have a function? Can Tomato have a function so that readers can block the chapters they don't like [face covering] I really need it now I looked at other people's comments again. In fact... Maybe... Probably... Maybe... The second move is actually... Okay. The author's writing has always been very good, but the second move is a crazy blow to me. I am worried that my previous comments may have an impact on the author's work, so I specially come to review. If I am worried that I cannot accept the content of the second direction but can accept spoilers, I can go to the long comment area to find a summary of the ending. In my opinion, the author's writing style is really good, but towards the end, I am really... Incompetent and unable to convince myself at all [facepalm] I already love and hate this book so much that I can't help it [facepalm]

Five-star review. The emotional scene with Severus Snape was handled very well. It's super delicious and very sweet. And the second ending was also a little bit chopping. The overall treatment is very coherent and delicious. If you like Severus and can accept dual male protagonists, I highly recommend it.