Traveling with Sirona from Sinnoh

It's pretty good. Plot aside, at least the writing isn't too cheesy and the characters behave normally, but I personally think the character of the protagonist isn't very clear, and it may be because it's too short to reflect the character's personality. Overall, it's pretty good. The score hasn't been announced yet. I'll guess a 9.2 When the score is released later.

It is a masterpiece of Pokémon literature. I really enjoy the process of the protagonist becoming stronger step by step. It is also very smooth to read and basically does not affect people's reading mood. The love story between the protagonist and Sirona is not that awkward (my own opinion). It is warm and daily. It is a heart-warming Pokémon world with no dark side for the time being. I hate enjoying the benefits brought by my own class, but I also despise and despise my own class. However, the protagonist of this article does not violate this taboo of mine, so I like this novel very much and will most likely finish it! Again, great work. I hope to interact with outstanding trainers from other regions. Since it is during Sirona's growth period, Watari, Daigo, Mikri, Karuna, and Cattleya at the same time are also good trainers. It is best to have a gorgeous competition to increase the experience of both parties!

It's really good, but for things like mythical beasts, other novels just conquer this and that. It feels even more disgusting than Gou Hao. Moreover, the protagonist's Pokémon are not as bad as other novels. They are always the same. At least when I read so many on various websites, they always have Gengar and the like. Although I also like Gengar, I am tired of reading so many Pokémon articles and a lot of Gengar. The battle aspect is also well written, it is not procrastinating, and it does not take up too much space. In the later stage, I hope not to write too many battles, which will make people tired. At least for people like me who are not particularly anxious, this amount is not very large, but some people may feel that the battles are written too much and are watery. In the emotional drama, the relationship between the protagonist and Sirona is sweet. Hehe, I just like this kind of relationship, rather than something that happens overnight. Finally, can the author reveal which mythical beast the protagonist has the best relationship with?

It's pretty good. The heroine is Sirona, whom I like [Adoration] [Blowing Kiss] Great Love Sirona, okay! ! !

The writing is very good. It has a completely different feel from Teacher Lu's book. One is a love story between a young pig-headed boy and a long-established champion, and the other is a passionate boy who grows up with Sirona. It has a different style. And the most important thing is that the author writes Sirona's character very well. It fits the Miss Zhulan in my heart, and is not like the pure and ordinary love-minded Sirona next door. It can be said to be the masterpiece of Pokémon after Teacher Lu, but even the author is too slow in updating it. From the end of 2022 to now, there are only more than 300 chapters. Who can read it?

The writing is very good, very real, unlike some novels that are very fast-paced and feature Rayquaza and various mythical beasts. This article starts from the very normal Yusan family (of course I think it would be better to have a doctor as the grandfather, and a quasi-god). Step by step, it develops and becomes stronger, and there is our Sirona [Like] It's just that the author is slow to update, and the content is too routine and may easily make some people abandon it. One less star would make the author proud [blowing kiss]

I have decided on this book, Wuhu. People who like Pokémon like the little things on the road, the past, the present, and the future. I like this kind of slow reading, which allows you to truly discover the beauty in Pokémon, rather than the data in the game. I love this kind of writing that is mainly based on animation and supplemented by games. I think living life is what everyone who loves Pokémon loves, not the so-called Long Aotian, but the true bond that is built step by step. This is the first time I am willing to write a long book review for a novel. If you really like the feeling of reading Pokémon, I highly recommend this book. I still love books. Among the many Pokémon books I have read, this one still suits my taste. I like Pokémon, so I like this delicate feeling, not the refreshing monster-fighting and upgrading, but the warm daily life under the main line. The multi-faceted nature of round characters is real, and Natsume is a human being when he has different images, strengths and weaknesses. For me, this book is already the second Pokémon world in my heart. I like it, so I, like many readers, hope that the author can continue. I have been reading books for 6 years. This is the first time I have written a review for a book (I have also recommended books and written reviews for this book before). This is my joy. This book has become an incomparable existence in my heart. There is the bitterness and vitality of youth, the bond and longing of Pokémon, the scenery on the road to growth is beautiful and very painful. Looking back, love is by my side and has ended. I move forward for her and myself, the warmth and romance of home. It is a young man's high-spirited romance but recognizes the bitterness and reality of the facts. This is something that cannot be achieved in Pokémon movies and TV shows. The novel is connected with reality and therefore makes people relate to it. So it is already another real world in my mind. We admire Xiaozhi for his uninhibited indulgence, sass, and bond. Master Zhi is the one who yearns for him and shows the charm and beauty of the world. This is also the reason why we love Pokémon. Moreover, Zhiye and Pokémon are regarded as eternal themes, making us feel involved in this world again and again. The truth of Natsume and Sirona is empathetic. We find that the beauty of the world, the reality of society, and the joys and sorrows of life are reflected in the book. The separation and separation are resonant. The book is edited by people, but it is more than just a book. I consider myself a Pokémon lover, so whether it's from the author, myself, the novel, or Pokémon, or even making more people fall in love with Pokémon, I hope everyone can read this novel (world).

Urgent update, the author only updated 10 chapters in 204 years, come on. A dormitory student who has been a fan for 22 years came back from school last week and found that there was an update. I burst into tears [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]. I hope the author can write more. I have changed my tomato number several times, and this book has been gathering dust on my bookshelf. I have been reading it since I was a junior high school student and during the summer vacation. I'm in high school, and this book hasn't even started a league yet, but the author's writing is very good, and the slow-paced articles are very engaging. I'm looking forward to the plot of the protagonist going to Alola. I got into the game very late, and the only anime TV I watch is XY and Sun and Moon. Alola is almost my White Moonlight. Finally, I wish the author good luck in his work and all the best for his book friends. If I can't see you again, I wish you all good morning, noon and good evening. Five-star review✨✨✨✨✨

Although the author intends to describe the darkness of the alliance, the description from beginning to end is relatively simple and hazy, and it does not feel that dark. In addition, all the Pokémon written by the author have unique and distinctive personalities, and the graphics are also very eye-catching. After seeing some cruel and realistic styles, this silly and cute style seems more unique and more suitable for animation. I have read more than 100 chapters so far. The author focuses on the description of the protagonist's battle. In fact, he can also write some of the protagonist's views on other people's battles when watching the battle, point out the mistakes of newcomers and call out the strategies of masters. I hope the author will continue to work hard and reach the master stage soon. I am very much looking forward to returning to my hometown after being successful and famous. The elders are happy. The seniors are worshiping and fans are in groups. It is a well-known scene. Don't struggle. Fight to the strongest and then it will be completed. It is bitter first and then sweet. We have experienced the bitterness with the protagonist. It is over. I don't know whether the protagonist enjoyed the sweetness or not. It is really uncomfortable [laughing and crying] In the end, for Sirona's sake, I directly awarded it with five stars [Learned]

My evaluation is that the writing is quite good. The author's writing style continues to improve. I will first arrange a five-star evaluation to see the later arrangements. Anyway, I am still quite satisfied with the writing. However, I feel that except for the three books of The Leader, I Don't Want to Be a Trainer and Tingshu, the descriptions of supporting characters in the current elf books are too light, especially in Tomato. Plus, elf texts are difficult to write, so the author still needs to work hard and don't worry about mindless trolls. Then let me give you another suggestion: the elves from the protagonist to the present, except for the little Absol who has not yet joined the team, have not super evolved. I feel that the setting of super evolution is to return the elves to their original state and greatly increase their strength. For novels, I do not recommend using the settings in the game. , Because there are some super-evolved ones in the game that cannot beat those that are not super-evolved. What I say is that the author can add some things of your own imagination. The bond evolution of Xiang Xiaozhi is a very desirable point. Using the bond between humans and elves, the elves can be recalled to return to the original and gain power that has not yet appeared. Another point is that you can give the protagonist a little trick, but it still depends on your own arrangement. Come on finally, I'm optimistic about you [shy][face covering][thinking]

A very good Pokémon book, and very comfortable to read. Highly recommended. Also, author, you have a way of recommending books. [You taste it carefully][You taste it carefully]

It's very interesting. I really like this kind of unsystematic article. I'm just curious about why the rating is so low. I was deceived by the rating at first... Also, the protagonist can be subdued by Yukilas or Kodora. I really like these two [Read carefully]

Brothers, it's really good. The characters are three-dimensional and vivid. It's the best among the Pokémon novels I've read.

A very nice Pokémon article, and the author will read the comments and make adjustments, which is great! I just hope it can be updated faster (although it is quite fast now) Can the author speed up the pace a bit? He is still a veteran after 100 chapters (no malice, I just read too many fast-paced books, so I am not used to this)

It's very good-looking. It would be better if there were more authors. @

Although not many people read it, I hope the author will keep on reading! Sooner or later, many people will watch it. After all, it is really beautiful. Thank you.

After watching Teacher Lu in 22 years, I refreshed my view on Pokémon fan fiction and regained my childhood passion for watching Pokémon animations on discs. After finishing it, I felt a long-lasting feeling of emptiness... I have watched a lot, and Tomato also has many high-scoring works, but I still feel 🌚... Last year, I found this book in the book recommendation circle, read the introduction, and added it to my bookshelf early. However, I didn't read it because it seemed to have been discontinued, and I didn't have high expectations. But after I clicked on it in the past two days, I couldn't help myself. It is really a very good-looking traditional Pokémon novel. , My favorite Sinnoh region, my favorite Miss Cabbage, excellent plot conflict, rhythm and delicate emotional description, there may be some small flaws, but I found my true love for Pokémon in this book. In my mind, it is already as masterpiece as Teacher Lu . Unknowingly, Xiaozhi has said goodbye for so long. The ending may not be what he wanted, but the memories are like pearls that are rounded and full due to accumulation. In the end, I still hope that the beautiful story of this book can continue, and I am willing to wait for a better future. The same is true for life (˘³˘)💕 To borrow a sentence from the book to end: Those who truly love Pokémon will get their most sincere and enthusiastic response! This is the Pokémon world we yearn for and love!

9.2 Is low, he should have a higher score Family, friendship, love, and the bond between people and Pokémon are all very well depicted. This is the Pokémon we long for and love in our hearts! The protagonist is not a virgin, nor is she a cold-blooded person. Have your own bottom line and principles Author! Come on! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (˵¯͒¯͒˵)

Well written, I finally found a Pokémon article that I like. Did someone pull it down maliciously? It's impossible for such a good-looking person to have such a low rating [What]

In the more realistic Pokémon world, the protagonist does not have absolute invincibility or growth. The heroine does not fall in love immediately, but there is a process. Simply put, it is a reality.

I have almost never rated Tomato's novels, but this elf novel is really well written. At least it suits my taste. It is not brainless, very realistic, and the characters are well established. I hope you won't disappoint me in the future. I recommend [Top Post][Top Post][Top Post]

It's really wonderful. The author [sends my heart] [sends my heart] to you. I've read a lot of system articles. Now I really like this type of novel that relies entirely on one's own strength. I finished it in one go and am waiting for the author to update it!

Send your ratings, don't get stuck. There's an elf novel that's good, but it's so cute, it made me so angry [angry][angry][angry] So far, this is the book with the most vivid characters and the best story I have ever read. Come on!

I feel like I'm pretty good except for the way the male protagonist is described. It's even more uncomfortable to play swordsmanship again😭, can't he be a normal male protagonist?

It's well written, please don't let it suck, author.

The only Pokémon fanfic you can find on Tomato, come on author

Very good and wonderful! The logic of this world and the character of the protagonist are something I have never seen before. Very novel. It is also different from the elven literature I have read before. I hope the author will work hard to update it. Don't let me down, come on! [Like][Like][Love]

It's beautiful! It feels like traveling, but the update feels a bit slow [crying] [crying] What makes this book unique compared to other elven novels is that it has a strong sense of travel. The author will add a little bit of his own creativity in some places, and the logic is clear, not to mention it has a refreshing feeling that is not a refreshing novel. [Love] [Love] I really love it, and the reading experience is no worse than the Great Sage of Bondage. But I don't know why the author stopped updating for 21 days [I'm about to cry]

OK, I've finished reading, come on, author! And Sister Baicai Saigao [laughs][laughs][laughs]

Although few people have read it, this book is really well written, the plot is written very smoothly, and the emotional line is also clearly written. It is beautiful to read.