Naruto: This System Is Not Quite Right

Anyway, let me comment first. I have only read about forty chapters so far. Personally, I have almost forgotten about Naruto. I watched it when I was a kid, so I won't comment on the plot logic. In terms of the interest of the story, it's okay. Putting aside Hokage, if you look at it as an original work, it's also good. Moreover, the difference between the first few chapters and the later chapters is quite big, and you can see the author's progress [like it]. However, one thing is that almost all the tasks issued by the system are failed and obliterated. This is destined to succeed, otherwise the task will be completed and ruined 🤦. Therefore, in the system task link, readers have one less link to guess whether they can complete the task. It feels a bit pity, but the writer must have his intention in this way, maybe to fit the title? In addition, I saw that the author's data of more than 100,000 words is not that good, almost the same as mine. I think maybe we can start with the cover and title introduction. Especially the cover, I feel that it is crude to be honest. If I have time, I might change it to a better one to attract more people to read it. Also, in the future, the 200,000-word book title experiment is said to be a turning point and can bring some traffic. Keep at it! Come on!

The timeline is okay, but I feel like the protagonist is not very clearly portrayed, but it's pretty good for a newcomer, come on! Looking forward to updates

Although I finished reading it in one morning, this book gave me a very deep memory

Well, the writing style is very unique, but the writing is very interesting, and the characters are more in line with the original work. I am looking forward to it.

It's good to read. I hope this book will achieve the same results as Dave's, just don't stop suddenly. Good luck to the author.

I never push the root, it all depends on the author's self-consciousness.

It's too early. What I'm saying is that this Jonin must be 7 years old. . . Also, this system is too unfair, the missions are so special, and you can't learn ninjutsu by yourself. Also, your strength has been exposed too much. The four-year-old chuunin Uchiha family's double magatama, according to what you wrote, would have died hundreds of times. Also, your chuunin is too watery. Except for chakra and eyes, nothing matches your chunin strength, ninjutsu, taijutsu, and actual combat experience.

It's really good, it's a pity😢, but no matter what, I hope the author will continue to work hard in the future, and this book will always be on the bookshelf❤️🌹

Just take Mikoto and it'll be fine

Author, please don't cut it. You didn't update today, so you won't stop writing. 😢😢😢🙂