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Explore more →A New Fanfic That Really Brings Out the Content of Naruto and Has Excellent Writing Style ~
Is there any new Naruto fanfic on Tomato that has novel, strange, surprising content, smooth writing and connotative content? If the number of words is less than 30w, please avoid it~Please give me some advice~
At the Beginning, There Are Seven Killing Orders of Gods and Ghosts, Five Thunder Zhengfa, Palm Thunder, Golden Light Spell,
Naruto: Eternal Kaleidoscope, All Wooden Shields, Nine Magatama Samsara Eye, System
High Score Um Naruto (9 Points or Above))
Looking for Various Anime Fan Fiction, Preferably with More Words
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Muscles, Strong Body, Tearing, Hunting
Did the Protagonist Travel Through Jackie Chan and Sleep in the Modern City, or Was the Original Dragon Captured by the Archaeological Team?
Internet celebrity live broadcast, or discovery by live broadcasters around the world, this is the first novel. The second novel is that the protagonist travels through Jackie Chan and sleeps in the modern city before the end of the world. He is discovered by everyone and is discovered by the live broadcast archaeological team.
Marvel, Marvel, but Don't Stuff Naruto and Pirates into It
To be precise, it is to try to include as few things as possible that can easily destroy the combat power, and those lousy themes. Unless it is really a great book, it is best not to read it.
There Is No Harem, the Three Views Are Correct, the Male Protagonist Is Not Lustful
A charming book
I, who became a saint by killing three corpses, received the admission notice to Hogwarts. Please write quickly! ! !
The Protagonist No Longer Hides Susanoo in Front of the School Beauty and the Enemy Army
The Protagonist Learns the Immortal Technique-Wood Release-Real Thousands of Hands and the Immortal Technique-Wood Release-Buddha on the Top
Naruto Is an Uchiha, and He Starts with the Mangekyō Sharingan.
Naruto Was Too Strong and Was Banned
It Takes Longer to Find a Book Than to Read It. Help Your Children, Just Make It Readable.
At Present, There Is No Masterpiece in Naruto Acting. If You Are Not Convinced, Come and Argue!
A Book for Teenage Hackers, Nothing Else
Want to watch something similar to "ben10: I can evolve infinitely!" Book.
The Protagonist Is Male If He Has Dragon Horns or Fox Ears.
Self-Created Training System, High Quality, No Harem.
I want to read books like "Becoming a God: Starting from Building the Endless Abyss".













































































































Write well, you can't waste 24 hours a day, you understand? ? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
(Save time, if you have a heroine or not, you can run away. You can blindly guess that there will be a harem later. You can watch it when you are bored with a single heroine) The plot is pretty good and well written. But there is a heroine, Fenghua Xiaoxue She kissed him and he was at a loss. The plot of this design is very classic I estimate that I will take the harem route from chapter 75 onwards (according to my experience in reading the book)
Update soon. 24 Hours a day. Writing a novel in 12 hours is not too much. It doesn't take much to write 1,000 words in one hour.
You may not have looming dimples, but your smile must be like the moon closing and the flowers shy, and the fish sinking and the geese falling. When the wind dried your hair, I was simply fascinated: in the sparkling soft hair on the shawl, in the faint eyebrows on the temples, in the green eyes... You are so beautiful! She is also a beauty. The most profound impression of this girl is that there is an astonishing beauty between her eyebrows that transcends her age. Her pale willow eyebrows have been clearly and carefully modified, her long eyelashes flicker like two small brushes, and her pair of big, heart-stoppingly beautiful eyes are so bright that they are extremely lively and lively. I'm infatuated🥵🥵My restless heart is setting off firecrackers🤩🤩My cupid is screaming😇😇The hormones are erupting because of your arrival😍😍Infatuated🥵🥵Infatuated with you🤤🤤It's the antidote for you to crush me🤕🤕It doesn't matter🥰🥰please just give me a kiss😘😘
I love this way of changing and evolving! -Keep up the good work! [Code to live][code to live]
I have seen the latest chapter, Chapter 66, and I feel very good. The author has his own ideas and main line, which looks very attractive, unlike some Naruto fan writers who just copy the main line of Naruto without thinking. I just hope that the following chapters will not stretch my hips. I suggest that the author should use the world of Naruto as a template for secondary creation. Don't just follow the events in the anime. After all, you have changed some things now, and you don't mind changing more. While retaining the characters of some of the main characters in the anime, write your own story, come on
The plot is tight and not procrastinating, the setting is reasonable, and the subject matter is novel. It explains well the double cultivation of life mentioned in "One Person" and implements it throughout the text. The characterization of the characters is also remarkable. Overall, it is a very good fanfic.
It looks okay. But the strength surged too quickly. It is estimated that it is almost invincible, and there should be other copies.
This book portrays the third generation very well. 80 To 90% of Naruto fans make the third generation too villainous! From Konoha's point of view, coupled with his general political skills, he can barely be considered a good person.
To be honest, although the writing is a little rough, compared to the fan fiction in recent years, it is still very good. The span is a bit big. I hope that I can continue to write without collapse. Come on, please update more. [Please update]
Excellent work. I understand the plot direction and related information very well in the article. The plot in which the protagonist participates and changes is very satisfying and very good. The description of the characters in the article does not have the slightest personal bias. It has a set of personal opinions on the characters. Each character has a certain idea of the personality and character description. The description is very smart and makes the character come alive. Regarding the golden finger of the protagonist in the article, there is only a golden light spell on the surface. In fact, the hidden golden finger may imply a lot. The details are vaguely mentioned in a few paragraphs, and there is no key description, but there are paragraphs in the article, so I think it is foreshadowing. Generally speaking, the front part of the story seems boring, but there is something to behold. The protagonist's thoughts on Itachi are straight and the idea is very good. From the beginning of the influence on Itachi to the end, the plot deviates from the original development trend a little bit, and gradually becomes what the protagonist wants to become. I feel that the Konoha Village described in the article is the real Konoha Village, and it is very satisfying. Please update as soon as possible, come on
Yes, there are a lot of typos, and a lot of descriptions are not very good, but it is a fun read, it is just a fun picture, the description is not enough, it is innocuous, and the pace is quite fast, not draggy.
It's a very good Naruto fanfic, although it's a bit short and the writing is a bit poor, but this Naruto fanfic can be said to have the biggest battle scenes among the Naruto fanfics I've read, especially at the end, it's just a huge battle. Unfortunately, it's not detailed enough, but it can be said to be very good.
Author [laughing evilly], I will give you five stars and recommend you a novel to read. (You have 3S powers? I have no regrets about my youth!) It's very interesting. It's on my novel recommendation list. The plot in it is so exciting. 🍅 It understands me so well. It's even more exciting than Boruto. The plot in it is really interesting. [Shy]
The early plot is very good, each character is written exactly like the anime, and the protagonist's personality is also relatively good. It would be very good if there is a harem. In the middle stage, the protagonist just wants to rule the world. I personally feel that it is very difficult to write this kind of world domination, and it will basically collapse later. When the protagonist goes to the snow country to develop, he feels a little different. This is the first time I have written so many words in a novel. I'm still reading it now, and I'm not sure what the plot will be like next time so I'll comment later! The battle plot is very well written and very detailed. The ending is a bit not so good. Moreover, there are very few words written by the heroine, which I personally didn't feel very good about.
I just saw the latest chapter, it's not bad, very good. It's just a pity that there is no heroine, it feels a bit boring and lacks some interest.
Like it very much! It's good to read. I came here when I first saw the title of this book, because I learned about the Golden Light Curse from One Person, and I clicked on it because of my liking for One Person. However, when I saw the Golden Finger, I thought the protagonist would be weak, but I didn't expect that after practicing the Golden Light Curse to the point of innateness, I could already beat Danzo! Any spoilers?
Overall it's pretty good, at least there are no obvious poisonous points. Moreover, the way the third generation was dealt with was quite special. He was indecisive but not as bad as Danzo. In the end, he passed on his role as a clone and fought Danzo alone. In the end, he died to apologize. Overall it's pretty good, but the author doesn't seem to have updated for a long time. Was it the Chinese New Year?
The plot is not sloppy and it is very interesting. The logic is clear and the emotional characters are handled in this way. It will definitely get better and better. Come on, come on. I have enough books to read.
It's very good. I don't know what other people think, but your book deserves a reminder from me. It's very good and please update it as soon as possible.
It's okay, the low score probably doesn't suit those people's tastes. It is rare to see a main line that is not muddled.
Recently I really like reading Naruto fanfics, this one is very good
It's very beautiful and wonderful, good luck to the author! ! !
This book is the most to my liking among all the Naruto fanfics I have read, but it is too short. Please give it a try, author ([please give me more updates])
It's so exciting... Different angles, weaving different stories...
It's okay, it's a different kind of invincible story, but at least the protagonist's struggle is traceable, which is much better than those casual stories, and the rhythm is well controlled.
The setting is relatively novel, but it failed to express the feelings I imagined. It may be a bit willful, but it is still a good book. I give it four stars ᵔᴥᵔ
A very good Naruto story, but who is the heroine now? Are the legs shadowed by black soil? Who else is it?
It's good-looking and the main character can be the 6th generation [thoughts]
Although the writing is not long, it is generally good, except for the ending which is a bit hasty. Well, it's actually not satisfactory, but the idea is good and the writing is okay.