A young shut-in died of excitement because he was about to get a girlfriend. But then a girl who claimed to be a goddess protecting the world of anime appeared before him and helped him break through the dimensional barrier into a world of anime. And so begins the story of a useless shut-in who becomes a winner in life. He fights monsters in Aincrad, just so he can return home alive with the person he loves. In a certain beginner town, three idiot teammates drag him down, leaving him to live the miserable life of an adventurer. P.S. The heroine may be Asuna, but that's undecided for now. Please don't use your brain while reading, thanks. This is the only novel being updated on this platform. The main world is Sword Art Online. Later on, there will be KonoSuba, The Asterisk War, Campione!, and High School DxD. No golden finger at first, but he'll get one later.
How I feel is that by adding a protagonist to the original work, the fanfic is written to give the feeling of reading the original work. Then let me see how good the original work is. 🤔 In short, if you haven't seen Sword, you can take a look. I personally think it's average. [Learned]
All I can say is that the author has been emphasizing at the beginning that the protagonist is behind a time traveler, but the protagonist has no memory of before the time travel. It feels like a very unsatisfying feeling. If the identity of the protagonist as a time traveler is abandoned, it will be like a native entering the world of Sword Art Online and then replacing his colleagues, eh. Most of the protagonist's plots don't feel that interesting. I still feel that there are memories, or they are as beautiful as Goldfinger. And there are other worlds behind you, the author. The first world is the Sword Art Online world. If you don't have extraordinary abilities, then when you go to other drivers, you still have to climb up step by step. So what is the use of the author's arrangement as an entrepreneur? You shouldn't have stressed so much at the beginning
Average At the beginning, it is too emphasized that the protagonist travels through a copied world. Just write about traveling to the past. There is no need to write this point. It makes it a bit like the protagonist travels through a fake world. Besides, writing specifically about a copied world is quite alien to some extent. Furthermore, the protagonist's name keeps switching between Yuji and Hibiki, so this needs to be changed. Also, since the protagonist is a time traveler, there is no need to write about making him lose his memory. The most important point for a two-dimensional time traveler is to know the plot, soul strength, cheats and the time traveler's confidence. Knowing the plot is very important, but taking it off now is like cutting off the time traveler's hand. In this case, it is better to write that the protagonist is an indigenous
It's rare to see one of the more outstanding ones in Sword Art Online. I hope more people can see it
The so-called rebirth as a human being, reincarnation and resurrection are all carried with memories of previous lives. Only then can one be considered to have a mind of two lives, because he has experienced more and more, and his mind has matured. A person who has forgotten his past life is almost the same as a newborn person who comes into this world innocently. He does not know anything clearly. He is equally curious when seeing new things and is equally afraid when encountering scary things. For a person who has forgotten the memory of his past life, what is the point of always mentioning his mind and mentality in two lives, and always mentioning that he is always a reborn person? There are so many flaws in the setting that I don't even know where to start.
It's poisonous, it's too poisonous. If it weren't for the lowest one star, I really wouldn't give it to you. There's obviously something wrong with your setting. You set the protagonist to be a time traveler, and you also set the protagonist to be trapped! Forcibly forgetting the plot, setting the protagonist to know the heroine, but also setting the protagonist not to know that SAO is a death game, you might as well set it as a native. When the protagonist of the novel is a time traveler, he either has foresight, or is hooked, or wants all of them. What about this novel? These two are not even touching each other. What are you talking about?
It's good to read, but I can't get enough of it. Come on, author, please update quickly. I have to say that very few people write about swords and swords on Tomato, but what you wrote is really beautiful and the plot is very detailed. I would like to ask if I should write the Sword Art Online series and the Attack arc together, or just write the Sword Art Online plot alone.
I feel like I can't stop watching it
Some details were not handled particularly well, and there were also some previous settings. For example, as an investor and the son of Japan's largest chaebol, his gaming equipment should not have something that can directly and invisible kill people. Not to mention that as an investor and a large investment, he has the right to know what is included in the designed items. Even if you don't know the protagonist's equipment, you should create a non-dangerous equipment independently, plus the identity of the previous time traveler, but you have lost your memory, and then you force a relationship or explain that you don't know each other, and then forcefully explain. Then we have a relationship. You might as well just have the memory and then directly establish a relationship. That's still acceptable. Overall, it's okay. After all, you are the only one on Tomato that is being updated.
[Learned][Learned][Learned] Nothing to say, five-star praise and bookshelf