Me, the Dog? ! Founder of Umbrella Company

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In the case where fan fiction is dominated by fun stories, this kind of slow-burning plot will indeed turn off many people. In addition, the author's second creation of the Dragon Kingdom organization and the slight abuse of the master in the early stage and the lack of obvious cheating have stimulated the patience of those who want to read the fun fiction. But as I slowly read through to the end, the overall plot is quite smooth, and the psychological changes and some growth of the protagonist at various stages are also described in detail. The plot also digs a lot of holes and deviates from the original anime and game. The Dragon Kingdom organization is actually not very easy to write. If you want to have some contact, you can't touch too much that overwhelms the theme of the book, cyberpunk. If you describe too much and go off topic, the overall plot will be bad. There is too little description and the pits dug in the front are not easy to fill. I look forward to the follow-up of this work. Although the score is not very high, it is good for those who can read it.

Well, the rhythm is ups and downs, I must keep writing! (Leader of the Persecution Team) I prefer the feeling of building a foundation bit by bit. Don't go too fast. If you attract attention too quickly, it won't look good if you watch it for a long time. Come on [thinking] [blowing kiss]

I was enjoying watching it, but ended up entering the palace [face covering]

The author is very good, the character is good, and the character design of Lucy is particularly good.

The writing is good and the storyline is great. I like cyberpunk very much. I support the author and give it 4 stars.

The idea and development direction are very good. I like the subject matter, but the time has come for the author to take a postgraduate examination on his writing skills. Since it is cyberpunk and you want to develop a company, you must also think clearly about the process of developing the company, otherwise it will easily collapse in the later period. (I'm wondering if I should read it with my brain in mind? It's a good novel if I read it without 🧠, but it's a good novel if I read it with 🧠) The subject matter is difficult, come on! Author Daodao! The author will explain to me respectively the scumbag and the scumbag... (I'd better not be too smart...)

To be honest, the performance of the male protagonist is very realistic. After time travel, the golden finger is of no use and he is reduced to begging because he has no resources. Even when he met the protagonist group, he was rejected and climbed to the top no matter what. It reminded me of Zhao Gao, who also wanted to be the highest after being insulted. I understand the male protagonist. This is the most authentic cyberpunk. I watched it because of Lucy, but I really couldn't hold it anymore. I hope the protagonist will accept Lucy as soon as possible. Come on, author

Jie Jie Jie Jie... The author gave a meal to several Soul Palace elders

Very good cyberpunk novel Follow up with five-star reviews

Lucy's character design and description are great, but the protagonist is really 🐶. Although the protagonist is very bad at the moment, it is much better than the invincible one at the beginning. Come on

When the author was in the courtyard, were you the one singing on the balcony every night? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Good! This book made me, a frivolous and impetuous person, take it into my heart. It is truly a top-quality book. Keep up the good work! [Like][Like]

Very well written, I strongly support it!

When are the protagonists going to be strengthened? How can we do big things if we don't have the ability? Even the Red Queen has been useless until now. The latest chapter seems pretty good after seeing it

The writing, plot, and characters are all very well designed. It's obvious that the author has put a lot of effort into the work. It's worth reading [laughing] In addition, my favorite Lucy is also in it. There is no brainless behavior, plus ten points.

A very nice book

I'll give it four stars first. I want to ask the author, did you give Lucy's clone away?

It's pretty good, good luck to the author

So far it looks pretty good

I would like to ask the author how Lucy arranged the relationship with the protagonist

This author can actually create characters and plots. I think it's more outstanding.

Alive? But why only two chapters?

Okay, Okay, Okay

As for the author, please come back and continue updating. If it doesn't work, you can pay.

The author is missing and may have entered the palace [laughing evilly]

I'm in a hurry and don't want to read the previous parts of development. Where should I start? It feels like the forward swing is too long

The author must persevere

The writing is very good, but why so few people read it [What]

It's a good book, the writing is good, but the updates are slow, so don't be tj. Also, where did the author get so many pictures? AI painting?