Cyberpunk: Building the Umbrella Corporation From Scratch

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In the case where fan fiction is dominated by fun stories, this kind of slow-burning plot will indeed turn off many people. In addition, the author's second creation of the Dragon Kingdom organization and the slight abuse of the master in the early stage and the lack of obvious cheating have stimulated the patience of those who want to read the fun fiction. But as I slowly read through to the end, the overall plot is quite smooth, and the psychological changes and some growth of the protagonist at various stages are also described in detail. The plot also digs a lot of holes and deviates from the original anime and game. The Dragon Kingdom organization is actually not very easy to write. If you want to have some contact, you can't touch too much that overwhelms the theme of the book, cyberpunk. If you describe too much and go off topic, the overall plot will be bad. There is too little description and the pits dug in the front are not easy to fill. I look forward to the follow-up of this work. Although the score is not very high, it is good for those who can read it.

Well, the rhythm is ups and downs, I must keep writing! (Leader of the Persecution Team) I prefer the feeling of building a foundation bit by bit. Don't go too fast. If you attract attention too quickly, it won't look good if you watch it for a long time. Come on [thinking] [blowing kiss]

I was enjoying watching it, but ended up entering the palace [face covering]

The writing is good and the storyline is great. I like cyberpunk very much. I support the author and give it 4 stars.

The idea and development direction are very good. I like the subject matter, but the time has come for the author to take a postgraduate examination on his writing skills. Since it is cyberpunk and you want to develop a company, you must also think clearly about the process of developing the company, otherwise it will easily collapse in the later period. (I'm wondering if I should read it with my brain in mind? It's a good novel if I read it without 🧠, but it's a good novel if I read it with 🧠) The subject matter is difficult, come on! Author Daodao! The author will explain to me respectively the scumbag and the scumbag... (I'd better not be too smart...)

The author is very good, the character is good, and the character design of Lucy is particularly good.

To be honest, the performance of the male protagonist is very realistic. After time travel, the golden finger is of no use and he is reduced to begging because he has no resources. Even when he met the protagonist group, he was rejected and climbed to the top no matter what. It reminded me of Zhao Gao, who also wanted to be the highest after being insulted. I understand the male protagonist. This is the most authentic cyberpunk. I watched it because of Lucy, but I really couldn't hold it anymore. I hope the protagonist will accept Lucy as soon as possible. Come on, author

Lucy's character design and description are great, but the protagonist is really 🐶. Although the protagonist is very bad at the moment, it is much better than the invincible one at the beginning. Come on

Very good cyberpunk novel Follow up with five-star reviews