Practicing Skills, Starting with The Story of Minglan

The writing was okay, but it was a bit too hasty, and some of the logic couldn't keep up. First of all, how did Aunt Kang run to the back house in black clothes? A woman rushed through so many guards in the Hou's Mansion, and did not get lost in the protagonist's upgraded version of the Hou's Mansion. She accurately found the location of the protagonist's child. Is this something a woman in the back house could do? I know the author wanted to write a small climax, but how the characters in the book did it is very strange. Then there is the question of how Concubine Rong's family got involved with King Ni. There is no such thing as Rong Feiyan in this life, so why don't Concubine Rong's side join the rebellion? Another one is that Gu Tingyu took the blame and killed his aunt, and Renzong could not let him live. If he let him go, the throne would not be given to the protagonist. Think about it, today you can plead for someone who killed his aunt, and tomorrow when he ascends the throne, you can kill Empress Cao. In theory, Empress Cao is also the protagonist's aunt after he ascends the throne. There are many other loopholes, so I won't go into details. The author should think about the logic carefully. It's really strange that the novel's logic doesn't make sense, so you can just make a few patches.

Brother, your writing is too messy. The content of the previous chapter has absolutely nothing to do with the content of the next chapter. You suddenly and inexplicably ran to the Three Kingdoms, and then ran to Xinghan. You can run, but you have to overdo it. You have to let the readers know that you have changed the map. People who read it are confused.

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It's okay, but I feel like I wrote it too hastily.

I always feel that I have read a wrong chapter somewhere. I can't connect the previous and next chapters at all 🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦. If you want to write, just write well. The experience is so bad.

Author, have you noticed that you wrote the chapters too fast and they didn't match up with each other? It feels like there are some broken chapters in the middle, which makes it uncomfortable to read.

The idea is too messy,

The writing is really messy, the donkey's lips are not in line with the horse's mouth, and the preface and the follower are inconsistent.

The plot is not perfect, the progress is too fast, and the content is too little. . Many of them have not been introduced yet. . .

It's written in a mess, don't read it