Tianyuan******

The beginning generally needs to be interesting to make it more attractive to read. At present, there are only about sixty chapters, and the system has forced thirteen chapters! It's okay to interact with the system, but it's best not to force the settings onto readers like this. It lacks the interest of this type of novel and readers won't be able to remember it. In fact, it does not affect reading if there is no world view, but it is not enough if it lacks content.

It seems to be okay so far, but there is one thing that is not so good. The realm of cultivating immortals is what kind of warriors, warriors, kings of martial arts. This kind of thing seems awkward. After all, when the Invincible Emperor comes, he has to kneel down. If a middle-aged man comes, he will be called uncle. If an old man comes another day, he will have to be called grandpa.

It's quite boring. It's been more than ten chapters, and there's not a single person there. It's just the protagonist and the system that are struggling there. The only customer is a wolf that the protagonist forcibly captured. Doesn't the author think he is very humorous?

The intention is good, but after watching 30% of it, I have been entangled with the system throughout the whole process. You and I, and then a little plot is inserted in the middle. Those who don't know better think that the system is the heroine. I feel tired watching it.

I can't stand it anymore, there are more than 10 chapters [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]A bunch of nonsense and the plot hasn't even started yet

I'm a talkative guy and I've read almost ten chapters, all of which are about trying to bully the system.

In the whole book, there is only one living person, the male protagonist, chattering there, and no other characters are seen.

Why don't I delete the first part? The more than 10 chapters are all nonsense. Three pieces of paper and no donkey.

This book is good and worth reading. It has clear thinking and correct views. Please continue to work hard and update it.

It's boring. It's a one-man show. I've read dozens of chapters. It all depends on the protagonist.