Shocking! My Martial Soul Is a Computer

I wrote it myself, so I have no objection to the five-star review 🙂 I believe that writing novels should not be too bland, at least outrageous or nonsense. Those who criticize me show that my novel has something, which is stronger than no criticism at all.

People with impure thoughts see everything as impure - to themselves

Why do you always take risks in dangerous places when you always emphasize lying down? Also, the protagonist is written like a mentally ill cripple, wandering around and not cultivating properly. Also, isn't your computer capable of copying? Why don't you copy the thunder and lightning skills to charge the computer, deliberately limiting the protagonist's strength?

The plot and characters of Chao Dou Po are mediocre in writing. Only the martial soul is a computer, but it's a pity that the settings are very poor. The way the computer in the body is charged is to be struck by lightning!!! Very speechless. The computer can be inside the body. As a warrior, don't you have no energy in your body??

I like it, I really like it. I wanted to write a supporting role but it was poorly written. It doesn't matter at all. It's just water. The heroine's character is really like a little brat who cries when she can't get a toy and makes trouble when others don't follow her. The main character likes to be a dog and slipped away.

In Chapter 7 or 8, he became poisonous. He dared to retaliate when others asked him to kneel down and worship his ancestors in the ancestral hall. He refused to go to the martial arts academy to further his studies, just because he wanted to eat the elders of the family. He was famously said that he would rather be a chicken head than a phoenix tail.

I'm so speechless. It's been a few years and I'm still babbling. I really don't understand. Just lie down and lie down. Why did he steal the invitation? He doesn't understand anything. I don't know what he has learned in the past year. Everything is explained by passers-by. Did he just lie down and sleep for a year?

The main character, Silver Gun, Wax Head, is not good at all, and there are only three supporting characters, so the main character is just a sweetheart.

After reading more than 90 episodes, it was average. Because it was written about the male protagonist lying flat, the main focus was on the male protagonist lying flat and becoming invincible. However, the hang-up is huge but there are limitations. It is boring to make the hero lie flat but not invincible. The supporting character surnamed Chen occupies a relatively large space. His plot is about breaking off the engagement and then helping others to detoxify, which leads to the failure of Mo Qijun. Then when the eldest princess gets pregnant, the child may not be his, so why are you so frustrated? Originally, it was not very satisfying to write a plot with a male protagonist, and I had to write a bitter and resentful supporting character. There are so many pages written about him but there is no intersection with the male protagonist at all, isn't that just water?

The author's writing is not very good, there are many points that are toxic, and in the 33 chapters of the palace, the male protagonist is a person who doesn't know the heights of the world, like a loser who has gained power, he can do whatever he wants [laughs awkwardly]