The Kaleidoscope Sharingan at the Beginning Kills Monsters and Upgrades

It's okay, but the protagonist takes up a little less space. I suggest you give more space to the protagonist's research and development of his own abilities. I know you like JOJO and Under One Person, and I like them too, but I don't like to see the plots in the original novel intact for the second time in the novel. We can completely cut in from the perspective of the protagonist, instead of the normal narrative technique [snickering] [smirking] [smirking]

It's much better than those who have so much combat power that they collapse and can't beat anyone. With the Sharingan, there aren't many skills written about them, most of them are auxiliary. It's just that not many people are watching, which is strange.

It's very good. It's the slow type that I like. It's not brainless or invincible, but it slowly gets stronger.

Come on, come on, come on

Good! The background development is well-founded, please update it! [Praise]

Why does your car always stop halfway through [face covering]

The author is really awesome, 666 I am optimistic about you.

The writing is very good, but there is too little. I hope the author is not short and weak.

It's quite interesting. It's similar to the mode of switching to stand-alone dungeons in online games.

Personally I think it looks very nice.

Not bad, very good to my taste

Good, good, good

Very well written, cheers

Wonderful, please speed up the progress [shy][shy][shy]

Come on, author, it's very interesting.

Yes, the villain has a brain

Really well written

I originally thought that the protagonist was letting himself go, but I didn't expect that it was the author who was letting himself go. [Face covering] Diao

Overall it's okay, I hope you can continue to work hard

Five-star praise, but it's a pity that the author stopped writing it. The next few chapters really let me go [laughing and crying]. I will keep this book forever and look forward to the author's new book

It seems okay so far. Is it a single heroine or multiple heroines?

It's pretty good, but the copy arrangement is a bit too sudden.

It's very interesting. The author writes well. Keep up the good work.

Great book! The plot is good, the writing is good, and the driver is very stable! ! !

It's a cool article with good content. Be careful not to be like some authors who are too capable and cannot continue writing.

Very pretty, call me when you need pressure protection [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

The writing is good, but is it a group show?