In all the innate realms, there is a vague path to immortality. As the saying goes, the great road is ruthless, but how many people have been able to achieve the great road of eternal life from ancient times to the present? A young man from a border town accidentally entered the immortal world and gradually walked out of his own legend.
Reader comments
Write the background story at the beginning. The meticulous characterization can be reflected in the dialogue between the characters. Use language to portray the character's personality vividly.
Multi-paragraph, some dialogue can be without quotation marks and colons
Take advantage of the protagonist's appearance to return to the age of seventeen or eighteen and take that beauty pill as soon as possible. There is really no need to lower it down and give it to a female cultivator.
I hope there will be a powerful technique [curl] [curl] [curl] [smile] [smile]
True and objective. Content is substantial and the structure is clear.
The writing is really good. Please keep updating, the author, and don't stop updating. I most like to read fairy tales written by mortals. .
Write the background story at the beginning. The meticulous characterization can be reflected in the dialogue between the characters. Use language to portray the character's personality vividly. Multi-paragraph, some dialogue can be without quotation marks and colons
Take advantage of the protagonist's appearance to return to the age of seventeen or eighteen and take that beauty pill as soon as possible. There is really no need to lower it down and give it to a female cultivator.
I hope there will be a powerful technique [curl] [curl] [curl] [smile] [smile]
True and objective. Content is substantial and the structure is clear.
The writing is really good. Please keep updating, the author, and don't stop updating. I most like to read fairy tales written by mortals. .
Very exciting, more and more interesting
Well written, keep it up!