Does Your Sister Look Down on You? Backhand Making of Tendo Payne

Where is the Six Paths Payne template or something... That's all just fantasy... The reality is that he awakened to the most rubbish profession of a puppet master and then went to work in the logistics department after graduation and did nothing for the rest of his life until he died! At the last moment of his death, he imagined in his mind that he would get the six-path template of Payne and reach the pinnacle of life! [Sneaky laugh][Sneaky laugh][Sneaky laugh]

It's true NB…the bad guys are coming out to act as puppets in the future~ Why not just join forces with the Akatsuki organization? Puppet Heavenly Group [laughing evilly]

I hope to get a mercury lamp.

The more you look at it, the more awesome it gets. I like the invincible flow. There are many powerful ninjas in Naruto that could be written about. 🙏🙏🙏

Speed, speed, speed, update [grievance], this book will be awesome if it doesn't crash later.

En... How should I put it, the writing is not very good. Of course, there is no need to ask for this. Good writing is not the majority in Tomato. The second is the setting of "the stronger the enemy, the stronger the soul" (mentioned before making the Loli Road) [Thinking] This setting is too easy to collapse unless it is rounded up later. Most settings shouldn't be perfect, but have weaknesses. They can't be suppressed purely by realm, right? [Face covering] [OK] It should be that the stronger the body, the weaker the soul, and the stronger the soul, the weaker the body. This is the setting for normal monsters. If the body and soul are both strong, this will be the template for elite monsters and bosses. Unless "elemental restraint" is added at the end, for example, the "holy" attribute of the protagonist's sister has just begun. I forgot what it was called, and I haven't seen the protagonist's sister's second move yet. Of course, it's just the beginning. I'm reading books on Tomato, so don't expect so much. It's still an invincible and cool novel (it seems to be growing, but in fact I haven't encountered any difficulties). I'm not saying it's not good, I'm just giving some advice (stacked armor). The writing style and combat power setting are the only shortcomings I see so far (there are also emotional lines). I have forgotten anything else to say. I stay up late every day and my brain is not working [face covering] [OK] I will look for other books to read [like] Come on, author! [Learned]

It's good to watch, I like crazy slaps in the face, but the pace is a bit fast, I feel like I can't write too much

Dear author, you are not going to have sex, are you? It's been three days and there's still no update? [What][What][What]

I'm very happy that you can write this book for me to read, but I don't like your update speed.

I think a function can be added in the mid-term (pig's trotters randomly synthesize some insignificant Naruto or anime characters based on material properties). There is no need to follow the system step by step to create characters from templates.

I actually added the Cthulhu Mythos... Aren't you afraid that your combat power will collapse?

Dear author, this book is very interesting. Please update it! [Laughing]

It's very beautiful. I beg the author to update it soon [adoration][adoration][adoration]

@ Is well written, but as long as it doesn't cheat from time to time like other authors do, it'll be fine [exploration]

If you hadn't made a lot of mistakes in copying and pasting, maybe I would have given you five stars.

The setting is okay, but the pace is a bit fast. And the combat power also rises a bit too fast. Slower is better.

Come on! The subject matter is quite good, it would be better if there were more female protagonists! ! !

Dear author, your writing is very good. There are many things worth reading, but there are some shortcomings. Some plots are not well written, a bit like a running account, and some things have been brushed off in one stroke. I hope the author can improve it a lot.

The author is more enthusiastic about other authors. I know an author who updates 6 chapters a day ( ͡°ᴥ ͡° ʋ )

It's okay, but the pace is too fast

Not bad, not bad, great It's a bit awkward to join the academy [laughs] Akatsuki organization, but also Payne, why don't you just go it alone. And sending people to protect the male protagonist is just like playing [laughing awkwardly] Later, the characters are sent directly [laughing awkwardly] They have always been competing in competitions and trials [laughing awkwardly] Isn't there any good plot [laughing awkwardly]

It feels okay, but why is the rating so low?

I summarized it Very scary. Very huge [smile]

Although I update twice a day, it's almost enough, but it's not enough to watch.

I hope there will be an Akkado, King of Fighters Orochi and the Black Dragon from Wu Geng Ji.

I finished reading it in two hours, it wasn't enough →_→

Very good, cool article, but the combat power increases too quickly like this

The pace is quite fast, but very steady, and the development is also very good. Good luck, author.

It's very beautiful, and it's half an invincible novel.

Okay, okay, I hope there won't be a female protagonist