The Chronicles of the Spirit

Come on, keep writing. You can write more plainly, but it can't be bad.

It's pretty good. I hope it doesn't have a female lead or comes out later.

It's pretty good-looking, and I can write some cool articles. Come on.

Not bad hahaha

There is no hostility, and it feels like a farming novel. I think I quite like it. The male protagonist's first spiritual pets are two carp. One Yang carp is greedy and evolves towards Kun. The other Yin carp is aloof and cold. Basically like an assassin, it lurks and evolves like a dragon.

Very good, why is there no one?

Very good author, cheers

It's an absolute clean slate in Beast Control. I really hope you stick with it. I don't have too many comments. Come on.

This book is in line with my taste. There is no one of the noble classmate female protagonists who is eager to appear, there is no incarnation of the master or a stunning female beast master in human form, and there is no lofty main quest. Don't stop updating.

It can be less, but please don't leave it unfinished, thank you🙏!

It's pretty, don't be a eunuch

In fact, fighting can be more refined. The pet's skills don't need to be too many, just four or five. Just upgrade the pet and replace its skills with new ones. When competing for resources with others, you can write more. It feels too easy to go through it in one stroke, and it feels like the protagonist's growth is too smooth.

Come on, work hard to update, the book is very good. Hey hey hey [blowing kiss]

Come on, don't collapse. As long as it doesn't collapse, I will continue to read, because some of them I will give up halfway. Although there are one fewer readers than me and not one more than me, I still hope you will take care of the readers who support you, so come on💪

Say nothing, five stars 1. Protagonist's character: The protagonist is not very smart, but he knows how to consider things, can reflect, and is cautious enough. He is not a virgin, but he also has the compassion that human nature should have. This is what a modern person looks like after time travel. 2. Overall: This is not an invincible novel where the protagonist has an easy and smooth road ahead from the beginning. The atmosphere is more relaxed and more realistic. It is very interesting to read [Love] 3. Some minor issues: 1. The setting of the number of pet beasts that can be contracted at different stages is not very clear. I am a little confused as to why there are so many contracts (I guess it should be that the natal pet beast occupies a unique contract position. One more can be contracted at the first level, and two more can be contracted with the second level. So there are currently four protagonists. By analogy, a person should be able to contract 11 pet beasts before the fifth level. However, the setting of this article is that only 8 can be contracted, so it is very confusing [thinking]). I suggest the author improve it a lot. 2. There are also occasional typos (rarely). The author reminds me to correct them when I see them. 4. The last little suggestion: 1. Xiao Hei and Xiao Bai are probably one transformed into a dragon and one into a kun. With the addition of bamboo and stone, they have fish, plants, non-living things (stones should be considered living non-living things), and reptiles (dragons are probably considered reptiles [eating melons]). I feel that there is still a lack of birds and mammals in terms of species. Hulu plays logistics. In fact, all aspects are coordinated very evenly. In the later stage of the mount, Xiaobai can ride it when he grows up. After all, it would be a pity not to ride Kun when he is so big. 2. Here we look forward to a fox evolving towards the Nine Tails (ability can include mind control + attack, movement speed increase + spiritual recovery, etc. To enhance the endurance of the protagonist team). We can also have a bird evolve into a phoenix in the later stage (take the strong attack route, after all, it is not enough to just hit it with an ice pick) At the end of the day, please keep writing well. It's very well written. Don't stop it. If you do, the book will be depleted [face covering]

It's better than I expected. I didn't have much to read at first, so I just found it randomly. The author is still a novice. I actually didn't have any high hopes. However, the author is very detailed in writing the article. There are no problems with data attributes and so on. The protagonist is not invincible. The description of adventures is also very reasonable. At least it is more reasonable than giving it to Goldfinger directly. It is really good. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write better things, both for himself and for the readers. By the way, I'll give it a thumbs up [Like]

Big cheers for the author

Come on😊Come on and look good

The author wrote this book which is very interesting. I hope you can stick to it and it is best not to create a harem.

It's quite good-looking. At the beginning, it was a bit hard to understand. Maybe it was because there were too many practical information (settings) given at the beginning. I mean it said a lot at once, but the further you look at it, the better it looks and the more you can understand it. Good review

Okay, okay, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

This name is very attractive and the beginning is good. I hope it won't end badly [full] [full]

Yes, keep writing, come on, author! ! !

This is the only true beast-controlling text left in 🍅!

The writing is good. I hope it will be longer. I hope there will be something like a national war. I also hope there will be some daily interaction between people and pets. Maybe I can write something about overthrowing aristocratic families. Come on, author!

If the author can update it twice a day, I will change it to five stars [laughing]

Give five stars to encourage the author. So far, it is very good. The content is very compact and the plot is not boring. It is worth reading.

Come on, come on, work hard

Keep up the good work, author! (๑•̀ㅁ•́ฅ)

Yes, but the blue hair is a bit out of place. It always reminds me of a god king who is haunted by his own mother. I suggest you change the color.