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Not bad, come on

It's okay, the author should do more

Author, please write

The protagonist seems to have no brains. Once he gets something good, he uses it without fear of others coveting it. If you don't admit defeat in a fight, you still get the good stuff and leave in disgust.

The brain is in a hurry. It doesn't look good.

It looks great, good luck to the author.

What are you writing about?