Another World Online

Very good, the emotional portrayal is very good, and the knife is very ruthless. Decisively adding bookshelves, I hope this book will not stop being updated. There are also some small personal suggestions: For the side, you can add some scenes among the players. If it goes against the character, just ignore my message. The author may consider changing the title of the book. This title and cover will easily dissuade most book lovers. Here is a suggestion. You may not adopt it, but the author should consider changing the title of the book. "Another World: Starting from Killing the Zerg and Growing Up"

I have seen the latest chapter. First of all, the author's writing style is quite sophisticated, and the impression is definitely not bad. Secondly, he can write about the European and American system in a very interesting and great way. It is very innovative to get rid of the clichéd protagonist settings.

Oh, it feels great, a very good reading experience. Personally, I feel that the only flaw is that I kill people randomly on the battlefield of the Legend of Bugs. As a result, I was a little timid when I met the followers of the Lord of Cute Hunters after returning to the other world. Although there are explanations in the plot, I always felt awkward... Well, the author, please work hard to write the words. I, a bookworm with more than 10,000 hours of reading, am looking forward to it.

Yes, the battlefield description and world view in the early part of the plot are not bad. Among them, the friendship between comrades-in-arms and the mood of telling death are well played out. Overall, it's pretty good. Of course, I like Western Fantasy in it. But there are some jokes in it that I can't get. For those who only read the plot, like me, it is quite interesting, but those who like detailed descriptions and many echoes in it should also be able to find a lot of details in it. It may be a different kind of experience. The best part is the author's update speed, 4 chapters a day, which is quite a lot.

This book is the best one I have read on Tomato in the past six months. The plot is humorous and the rhythm is smooth. After reading all the updated content, there is nothing I don't want to read. It is very enjoyable to read, but it is not like other mindless and refreshing books. The plot is very reasonable, the characters are well portrayed, and each character has his own personality. As long as the current quality is maintained and updated every day, it will definitely be a magical book. Give it a 4-star review, but don't give it a five-star rating because I'm afraid that Tomato will be regarded as a bonus and wiped out.

The sausage is really good. Shuhuang recommends reading it. The characters are vivid and vivid, There is no plot poisonous point, It's a pity that I came early and was a little short. It's not all that I want to say, and the world view is quite interesting. According to the current preparation, millions of words can be written. But it feels like it will be compressed a lot Looking forward to subsequent updates The reading time is 47 minutes because I am listening to a novel and I have just listened to the last chapter, so I don't count the time.

As long as the author can stick to it, this is definitely the best way to pass the time. Reading this book reminded me of the Lord of the Abyss, Throne of Shadows, which I originally read. The author's writing style is also good, and the protagonist's plot is not that exaggerated.

Very productive and beautiful, I hope it can continue.

Very good! The content is good, emotional, and the characters are sincere. I recommend watching it!

I have now read Chapter 66 and it feels good. I will give it a review. From the plot point of view, the author should mainly refer to the setting of the NPC protagonist of the game Super Mechanic (I don't know the specific reference game, it seems to be Baldur's Gate from the comments?), As well as some settings of the Lord of Mysteries (such as a party above the gray fog, early team and sacrifice of teammates, etc.). Overall, I don't think there is any problem with this level of reference, as long as you can write your own characteristics. However, the trouble is that the slightly templated plot looks like a spoiler, and the flags of teammates are all filled with [face covering]. In addition, there is a small problem. The protagonist's golden finger is too strong. It is a bit inconsistent to be able to participate in the battle between legends at the first and second levels. It seems that the legends are not up to par. I can't help but say one more thing. The protagonist's golden finger is equivalent to ignoring damage + ignoring defense + being unable to interrupt + teleportation. So supermodel

It's very nice, but I feel like the back part isn't as well written as the front battlefield!

This book is really good. It ranks among the top among the Fourth Natural Disaster.

A book with great potential, Sword and Magic, Rebirth, and the Fourth Natural Disaster. This is definitely not a niche novel. If it is well written, it will definitely become a hit. Why is the data bad? This is only 300,000 words. I usually read 1-2 million words before reading. Let's work hard to get to 1 million first.

It's a good book, and the details and writing style cannot be overemphasized. When you read it, you may have a sense of familiarity with the plot of Lord of Mysteries and the world view of Warcraft, but the author's own writing style is enough to frame the world view. There are many advantages, so I won't go into details here. I'll list the shortcomings that I can think of. The plot from when the pension is sent to when the player enters is a bit boring. If the void dream is handled well, it can be a gold mine of excitement. But for the time being, the first four characters I saw appear are almost boring, because the main plot of the protagonist is not of much help at the moment. I hope the fifth person can help the protagonist in the plot. The protagonist improves but slowly, and it becomes more serious after the player enters the game. The lack of a real threat to the protagonist's existence in the plot, the protagonist's personal values ​​​​do not match the mainstream values, Bobby's character and plot and other factors may be the reason why other readers can't stand it. Overall, the writing is very good, but there is room for improvement in the handling of the plot.

For me, Monster Girl is not a poisonous point, on the contrary, it is a highlight. But I personally still don't like the protagonist with this type of personality. But I still have to recommend this work. The author is very careful in character creation, which makes me feel that the story revolves around the protagonists. After reading the first volume, I feel like I watched 86- at first, which is a bit regretful (personal cookie)

Big cheers for the author! Very well written! Come on!

It is a pure western fantasy like before, without a harem. The protagonist has the big goal of revenge and also has small jokes in life. He is not a toilet paper male protagonist who only kills monsters and upgrades without any brains to increase his combat power. The most important thing is that the author does not update slowly and in large quantities.

It's a very good book. If anyone feels that this book's combat power is broken, you can check out the dnd system and make an evaluation. In fact, there are many hints in the text. For example: I once saw a legendary rogue-level assassin get drunk in a bar, and then he was chopped into pieces by a second-level rogue at the door of the bar. Level is not absolute. Expertise, skills, and experience can make up for the gap in attributes.

It must be five stars. It is the most touching book in Tomato Fantasy, and it goes against all the routines.

It looks good and is suitable for novices who are just learning about Dnd. It's a pity that updates have been discontinued for a year

Great, it feels like a pretty good Western fantasy novel. Of course, it may still have a lot of modifications to simplify the novel for standard DND, but it is very comfortable for people like me who have only played Divinity Original Sin 2 and have not officially run a group. After thinking about it, I still really like this book. I will press the shit button in the future. Come on, author.

The author's updates are stable and abundant, and the content is interesting and excellent. Among Tomato's novels, this kind of book should be promoted so that those who update every day can see what a good author looks like.

I've just read the latest chapter, hh, the bond between the protagonist and the team is awesome. After reading it, I realized that I also finished reading the author's previous Naruto novel. Hh, the emotional development between the protagonist and the maid team is awesome [Blow kiss]

The most interesting points of this book are the mother goblin's robe, the armrest on the devil's head, the beauty with a waistline of five feet, the arrogant snake demon, and "Madam please~" [smile]

Very good adventure world plot

Resurrection, I am the author, the book is really good, keep writing it! ! ! @Fatfat salty fish

The DND genre is good. Ever since I read Lord of the Abyss of Pagoda, I have been looking for a book like this. The characters are also very three-dimensional and have their own personalities. As soon as they appear, they are directly on the Zerg battlefield, directly in the high-end game. His teammates started out as legends, but he himself was a novice.

It's a good book, but it hit me hard [I almost cried], four updates a day is really good [blowing kisses] Come on author [blowing kiss]

Interesting plot, very good novel, I hope the author gives her a complete ending

It's okay, brothers. It's worth joining. If you can accept the discontinuation [Thoughts]