"Travel + no system + double fruits + save Ace + make up for regrets + domineering and invincible"
The original work in the early stage has more content...
When I traveled through time and became Luffy, I did not rely on the system, but under Garp's teachings, I awakened the most powerful Haki!
On top of the war, under the execution platform. Akainu's hell dog tears everything apart: "The grandson of Garp, the son of the dragon, the evil bloodline must be eliminated!"
I took one step forward, and the dark overlord color wrapped around me, shattering the void: "Akainu, who do you want to eliminate?"
The overlord-colored iron fist defeated Akainu and rescued Ace!
Warring States was horrified: "Why is his domineering so terrifying!?"
Garp laughed: "Hahahaha, you are indeed my grandson!"
This is just the beginning. Looking at the evil Draco and Im on the Void Throne, my fists are already hot - this time, I want to completely overthrow this decadent throne of God!
Reader comments
I recently watched the red-haired diva of One Piece and I felt pretty good about it. I came here to read the fanfic of One Piece. The writing of this book is smooth and the plot rhythm is quite reasonable. Friends, you can check it out [Top post] [Love] [Love] [Love]
Very well written, support. The author is great, please update quickly [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
It's still pretty good so far, but it's a bit slow to update. Hope it gets better and better in the future.
In addition, I still agree with the author's combat power setting in the book. I think the starting point of the Yonko's strength should be Ba Tang, but a standard Yonko should be Ba Tang plus an exclusive ability, such as Big Mom's high-speed rail balloon, a much cuter super strong body, red hair's knowledge kill, Whitebeard's Shock Fruit, and although Blackbeard does not have the Overlord color at the moment, he has double fruits, which can make up for the gap in Overlord color. Moreover, there are also weak ones among the Yonko. The top Yonko should be about equal to two generals, such as the peak Whitebeard. The standard Yonko should be greater than one general and less than two generals. The weak Yonko should be about the same as a general. Moreover, in fact, although the generals are also among the top pirates, the entire anime only says that they are the top combat power of the navy, not the world's top combat power. If every general has the same strength as the Yonko, then the navy headquarters only has five emperors, so why should the four emperors be afraid? The basic strength of the navy must be much higher than that of any of the four emperors. There are five emperors and so many lieutenant generals. Who can stop them if they just rush over together? And there is also a gap in the strength of generals, such as Aoshima and Akainu. Obviously, Akainu is slightly stronger than Aoshima, so the strength of a top general like Akainu should not be compared with the strength of a standard general. Akainu's strength should be close to the emperor. Moreover, the strength of the Shichibukai is also uneven. For example, the top Shichibukai such as Hawkeye can rival the generals and even the Four Emperors, because although Hawkeye has not shown that he has the color of an overlord, his swordsmanship is the best in the world. In terms of attack power, he should be among the top people in the world before, but there are also relatively weak Shichibukai like Moria. So so far, I think the combat power setting in this book is quite reasonable.
It looks pretty good so far, please cheers for the author
It's pretty good so far. It will be even better when Nami and the others are taken in! [Blowing kiss][cool]
It's pretty good, it just fulfills my fantasy, let Luna be together
Come on, I feel like I can still watch it now
I'm telling you, I've traveled through time, and if there's another incident like the Judiciary Island, I can cancel it [you take a closer look]
Your work is very good, and Uncle Zhuang is very satisfied, but your update speed is very slow, and Uncle Zhuang is very angry.
There are few poisonous points, but it ends a bit quickly. It ends without much display after the strength is improved. Overall, it is not bad. At least it is a novel that you can see the end of. I hope the author will not be ignorant and keep up his efforts to write two more novels.
There are 100 million dots that are beautiful
So beautiful but so few ratings
Enel: What do you mean, let's be your partner and feel God's sanction. Why don't you conduct electricity? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...
This Luffy doesn't have the luck of the protagonist and can't go far. You have to know how powerful the aura of the protagonist Luffy in the original is, otherwise Luffy would have been gone long ago.
The writing is quite good, but it's a pity that it has become a eunuch.
Great praise! A rare pirate book
Not many people have read this book, and I feel like this book has more to it than the introduction. Can't Luffy fight Blackbeard in advance?
Luffy and Nami, I think they make a good pair. The one we spent the longest time with. As for your brother, the empress likes him, but he doesn't know or can't explain. This pair seems to be more reasonable. I don't know what Oda will do in the finale of One Piece? Do you want to be single for the rest of your life after becoming the Pirate King, or do you want to go to Nami or something?
It's quite exciting, but is it the author?
Very good, a little bit of Luffy and Nami's relationship
I hope there can be more emotional scenes between Luffy and Nami
Come on, the author is great.
The writing is well done, I hope it will be released in one go when it comes to the war on top.
The writing is very good, come on, author, don't be a eunuch, and accept Robin?
A very good fan fiction
I think this is the best book to read. It touches my heart. Come on! The author greatly [like][like][like]
The score is a bit low, I think it should be 7 to 8 points
So pretty, so pretty
Thank you for your hard work in writing.
Come on, come on, come on
It looks very good for the time being [laughing evilly]
The only thing that makes me uncomfortable is accepting Usopp. This guy is timid, afraid of trouble, and loves to brag. There is absolutely no need to accept him. Everything else is very well written.
I recently watched the red-haired diva of One Piece and I felt pretty good about it. I came here to read the fanfic of One Piece. The writing of this book is smooth and the plot rhythm is quite reasonable. Friends, you can check it out [Top post] [Love] [Love] [Love]
Very well written, support. The author is great, please update quickly [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
It's still pretty good so far, but it's a bit slow to update. Hope it gets better and better in the future. In addition, I still agree with the author's combat power setting in the book. I think the starting point of the Yonko's strength should be Ba Tang, but a standard Yonko should be Ba Tang plus an exclusive ability, such as Big Mom's high-speed rail balloon, a much cuter super strong body, red hair's knowledge kill, Whitebeard's Shock Fruit, and although Blackbeard does not have the Overlord color at the moment, he has double fruits, which can make up for the gap in Overlord color. Moreover, there are also weak ones among the Yonko. The top Yonko should be about equal to two generals, such as the peak Whitebeard. The standard Yonko should be greater than one general and less than two generals. The weak Yonko should be about the same as a general. Moreover, in fact, although the generals are also among the top pirates, the entire anime only says that they are the top combat power of the navy, not the world's top combat power. If every general has the same strength as the Yonko, then the navy headquarters only has five emperors, so why should the four emperors be afraid? The basic strength of the navy must be much higher than that of any of the four emperors. There are five emperors and so many lieutenant generals. Who can stop them if they just rush over together? And there is also a gap in the strength of generals, such as Aoshima and Akainu. Obviously, Akainu is slightly stronger than Aoshima, so the strength of a top general like Akainu should not be compared with the strength of a standard general. Akainu's strength should be close to the emperor. Moreover, the strength of the Shichibukai is also uneven. For example, the top Shichibukai such as Hawkeye can rival the generals and even the Four Emperors, because although Hawkeye has not shown that he has the color of an overlord, his swordsmanship is the best in the world. In terms of attack power, he should be among the top people in the world before, but there are also relatively weak Shichibukai like Moria. So so far, I think the combat power setting in this book is quite reasonable.
It looks pretty good so far, please cheers for the author
It's pretty good so far. It will be even better when Nami and the others are taken in! [Blowing kiss][cool]
It's pretty good, it just fulfills my fantasy, let Luna be together
Come on, I feel like I can still watch it now
I'm telling you, I've traveled through time, and if there's another incident like the Judiciary Island, I can cancel it [you take a closer look]
Come on😊 Look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good.
Your work is very good, and Uncle Zhuang is very satisfied, but your update speed is very slow, and Uncle Zhuang is very angry.
There are few poisonous points, but it ends a bit quickly. It ends without much display after the strength is improved. Overall, it is not bad. At least it is a novel that you can see the end of. I hope the author will not be ignorant and keep up his efforts to write two more novels.
There are 100 million dots that are beautiful So beautiful but so few ratings
Enel: What do you mean, let's be your partner and feel God's sanction. Why don't you conduct electricity? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... This Luffy doesn't have the luck of the protagonist and can't go far. You have to know how powerful the aura of the protagonist Luffy in the original is, otherwise Luffy would have been gone long ago.
The writing is quite good, but it's a pity that it has become a eunuch.
Great praise! A rare pirate book
Not many people have read this book, and I feel like this book has more to it than the introduction. Can't Luffy fight Blackbeard in advance?
Luffy and Nami, I think they make a good pair. The one we spent the longest time with. As for your brother, the empress likes him, but he doesn't know or can't explain. This pair seems to be more reasonable. I don't know what Oda will do in the finale of One Piece? Do you want to be single for the rest of your life after becoming the Pirate King, or do you want to go to Nami or something?
It's quite exciting, but is it the author?
Very good, a little bit of Luffy and Nami's relationship I hope there can be more emotional scenes between Luffy and Nami
Come on, the author is great.
The writing is well done, I hope it will be released in one go when it comes to the war on top.
The writing is very good, come on, author, don't be a eunuch, and accept Robin?
A very good fan fiction
I think this is the best book to read. It touches my heart. Come on! The author greatly [like][like][like]
The score is a bit low, I think it should be 7 to 8 points
So pretty, so pretty
Thank you for your hard work in writing.
Come on, come on, come on
It looks very good for the time being [laughing evilly] The only thing that makes me uncomfortable is accepting Usopp. This guy is timid, afraid of trouble, and loves to brag. There is absolutely no need to accept him. Everything else is very well written.
It's pretty cool, come on!